for Crouching Ninja Hidden Kitty1/8/2020 c1 swiftrabbit
Freaking hilarious! "Clever girl" indeed :)
Why have I not read this in the last four years! I was missing out.
Read ya later!
Freaking hilarious! "Clever girl" indeed :)
Why have I not read this in the last four years! I was missing out.
Read ya later!
7/11/2018 c1 
4MLLu
Haha this was really, and I utterly mean it, really hilarious and so light-hearted. In general it's rare to fine a good Asuma story around here but here we are with your brilliant storytelling and plot. Definitely you did Asuma justice in here to showcase his less serious side. I don't think we ever saw that in the canon, therefore, to have your rendition of it was refreshing. I like your writing style here. It fitted the genre perfectly and the plot was so brilliantly thought out. I was so happy to know at the end that a sequel could possibly happen. Thus I really hope that you will continue this.
Amazing job, totally hilarious! Kudos to you Elsil! :D
4MLLuHaha this was really, and I utterly mean it, really hilarious and so light-hearted. In general it's rare to fine a good Asuma story around here but here we are with your brilliant storytelling and plot. Definitely you did Asuma justice in here to showcase his less serious side. I don't think we ever saw that in the canon, therefore, to have your rendition of it was refreshing. I like your writing style here. It fitted the genre perfectly and the plot was so brilliantly thought out. I was so happy to know at the end that a sequel could possibly happen. Thus I really hope that you will continue this.
Amazing job, totally hilarious! Kudos to you Elsil! :D
12/7/2015 c1 2Songfern1128
I see what you did there! The title is a spoof of Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon! Haha! That was brilliant.
2Songfern1128I see what you did there! The title is a spoof of Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon! Haha! That was brilliant.