
5/15 c1 albus potter-greengrass
hello friend how are you I hope you find you very well I could suggest a story harry / kara danvers style esmerald flight
hello friend how are you I hope you find you very well I could suggest a story harry / kara danvers style esmerald flight
5/15 c447 Shan27426
Very much like this chapter.
Can you write chapters with
"Harry Potter and Kate Beckett (Castle Tv showand
"Harry Potter, Kate Beckett and Alexis Castle (Castle Tv showin it.
Very much like this chapter.
Can you write chapters with
"Harry Potter and Kate Beckett (Castle Tv showand
"Harry Potter, Kate Beckett and Alexis Castle (Castle Tv showin it.
5/9 c507 Beth5572
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great works of art. I also hope you come back and write more soon.
Thank you and Please,
Terri
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great works of art. I also hope you come back and write more soon.
Thank you and Please,
Terri
5/8 c500
26e.b woodhouse
ok so i just read through 500 capters of this story and i got to say you really need to tone eown the sex stuff into it! i am dissqpoined! ifi you had no sexual sitatuaion in these chapters they would 'go down easier" but it seems ike a lot of peopl in this sotry Go Down Too Easily!? of u get my msg
so try ans focus more on yr charaxers and world building and less on this immature smut and the story will go back ti being pretty good truss u me i have like 100 folows on my sotgry i konw hwta i talking a bout idiot!

ok so i just read through 500 capters of this story and i got to say you really need to tone eown the sex stuff into it! i am dissqpoined! ifi you had no sexual sitatuaion in these chapters they would 'go down easier" but it seems ike a lot of peopl in this sotry Go Down Too Easily!? of u get my msg
so try ans focus more on yr charaxers and world building and less on this immature smut and the story will go back ti being pretty good truss u me i have like 100 folows on my sotgry i konw hwta i talking a bout idiot!
4/26 c503 Guest
Can you make human hedwig
Can you make human hedwig
4/27 c504
54bankerrtx01
ok well at least its concetual that ginny allows other to have sex with harry that's good but please more ginny action.

ok well at least its concetual that ginny allows other to have sex with harry that's good but please more ginny action.