for Harry's Questions7/31 c1 dodger101
first chapter and i love how smart and mature harry. these two characters in the main protagonist really pulled me in, but getting into the detail i found it kinda odd for an 11 years old muggle raised child to ask whether his account manager still alive or not nonchalantly
first chapter and i love how smart and mature harry. these two characters in the main protagonist really pulled me in, but getting into the detail i found it kinda odd for an 11 years old muggle raised child to ask whether his account manager still alive or not nonchalantly
7/22 c25 Guest
please come back and write more of this awesome story.
please come back and write more of this awesome story.
6/4 c1 Guest
I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash.
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I honestly wanted to like this story, but this is just bad. It's akin to sniffing a moldy egg casserole from the back of my fridge: a stupid waste of time for something rotten that belongs in the trash.
Now, I hope I have your attention and that you can improve your writing, but that's not why I'm here. I'm sending this message on behalf of my friend, Gina Gail Barron-Goodman, who is an assistant site administrator.
Here is her profile:
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Review her stories. You don't have to read them, just give them good reviews. They don’t have to be long, just some quick praise will suffice. She’s trying to win a contest, and for that she needs a large amount of good reviews.
If you fail to comply by not responding or worse yet, attempt to leave a negative review, I will report your account to both The Critics United as well as the other site administrators for deletion. Do not think of blocking or reporting us. I will find out and there will be consequences if you do something stupid to her
If you troll my friend, be warned we will troll you, your fics and all of your followers. We will also place your shit fic in our other friend's community, Shit Fics That Deserve a Good Flame, so that everyone here will make fun of you. Since we don't want it to come to that, just write a short, good review for her stories and we'll leave you alone.
5/15 c25 
11draconic skysong
I've given this story a read. and you say you've rewritten the first 17 chapters? I'll take your word on that although there are still several glaring typos littered through them. even right in the first line. where it sais hagrid lead Harry, it should be Hagrid led Harry.
that's in the very first line of the very first chapter.
but even with that, and the other typos, mainly with mogonigal throughout. the few missspellings of Hagrid's first name. amelia to amolia at one spot. I still like where this story's going and I look forward to seeing what you do with it in future.
11draconic skysongI've given this story a read. and you say you've rewritten the first 17 chapters? I'll take your word on that although there are still several glaring typos littered through them. even right in the first line. where it sais hagrid lead Harry, it should be Hagrid led Harry.
that's in the very first line of the very first chapter.
but even with that, and the other typos, mainly with mogonigal throughout. the few missspellings of Hagrid's first name. amelia to amolia at one spot. I still like where this story's going and I look forward to seeing what you do with it in future.
5/8 c25 Fallow59
xxxxx KUDOS xxxxx : )
xxxxx KUDOS xxxxx : )
4/8 c25 darkpsychoqueen
omg so happy for update loved the chapter and cannot wait to read what u come up with next.. i know i can never articulate what i want to im happy that someone has the patience to put these stories out thx
omg so happy for update loved the chapter and cannot wait to read what u come up with next.. i know i can never articulate what i want to im happy that someone has the patience to put these stories out thx