
1/7/2016 c1
11Midwinter Monday
Nicely done! This has a real energy and charm to it that keeps one reading for more. Looking forward to updates.

Nicely done! This has a real energy and charm to it that keeps one reading for more. Looking forward to updates.
11/16/2015 c2
5Queene Sweet Tee
yayyyyyy! so awesome! you've portrayed james so perfectly! he was a jerk earlier, but then he became better for lily. eeeeek! so awesome! ahhh, severus. hes my fave. he really is my favorite hp character.

yayyyyyy! so awesome! you've portrayed james so perfectly! he was a jerk earlier, but then he became better for lily. eeeeek! so awesome! ahhh, severus. hes my fave. he really is my favorite hp character.
11/16/2015 c1 Queene Sweet Tee
awwwww! this is so perfect, i love it so much, omigosh, this is better than anything i have ever imagined! seriously! how do you do this? its exactly how i thought the marauders and lily would be. eeeeeeeeek!
awwwww! this is so perfect, i love it so much, omigosh, this is better than anything i have ever imagined! seriously! how do you do this? its exactly how i thought the marauders and lily would be. eeeeeeeeek!
10/31/2015 c2 Lou21
I loved the way you showed us a little bit of how a younger Lily and James used to be! Also loved Sirius and Snape as wellCan't wait for more one-shots!
I loved the way you showed us a little bit of how a younger Lily and James used to be! Also loved Sirius and Snape as wellCan't wait for more one-shots!
10/26/2015 c1 Lou21
So sweet and perfect, that's how I always imagined James and Lily! I hope there's more coming soon
So sweet and perfect, that's how I always imagined James and Lily! I hope there's more coming soon