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6/15/2017 c1 17Me And Not You 1001
This is a really good start and is actually helping me get an idea for the start on a fanfic I'm writing. I've been playing aroun with different starts I've read before but I think I might do something similar...however, I won't if you don't want me to. Also, I was rather in awe of Legolas' chosen hair color, it wasn't typical. I liked it, it gives your story diversity.
6/15/2017 c31 TheLittleKiller
I'm so glad you've updated! I love the conversations between Legolas and Nicole and Anya is downright adorable. I really hope Legolas and Nicole will end up raising her. I can't wait for the next chapter!
6/15/2017 c31 54Woman of Letters
Oh no! Well we knew Andrew was around, although Nicole is showing all the signs of ptsd. Very well done, btw... So it could be him or her just seeing someone else as him. I guess we'll see next time.

I loved the line from Nicole about gifting Legolas with a lock of her hair.
6/14/2017 c31 Guest
Her husband! Maybe, I think.

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6/13/2017 c30 TheLittleKiller
Duuuude, you have to update this story, it's amazing
4/2/2017 c30 5Aralinn
Ugh! Could they Not have a kiss?! So frustrating lol bu. However, Nicole has become much more serious but still has kept her playful personality. She has not let herself grieve for her capture and torture, I am not sure how much longer she can put it off. The sorceress Andrew seeks, is it Anya's mom? And what will become of the little girl? I want Nicole to keep her, but it would only bring her pain with her death, but maybe Faramir or another prominent person could adopt her? I want to know more about her and her abilities, I see Andrew trying to use her. So many questions and speculations, I hope you update soon!

Happy writing
Aralinn
3/31/2017 c18 Aralinn
There are times I would really like to strangle Nicole and tell her to grow up and act like the 30 something years old woman lol. I like her carefree and joking personality, but she still has some growing up to do and it will be interesting to see how she continues to develop and grow as the story progresses.

Happy writing
Aralinn
3/29/2017 c7 Aralinn
I like that you have made Elrohir a more serious character, it's different from him always being the jokester with his brother. I also like that Glorfindel is very serious and down to the point. A lot of stories portray the elves as fun loving and playful, which I think they can be, but after all they have seen and the lurking evil, I find your portrayals more realistic and believable. I am surprised that Elrond has not spoken to her again and mentioned his thoughts on how she got here, her purpose, and if he thinks she will return.

Happy writing
Aralinn
3/21/2017 c2 Aralinn
Interesting start. So we have to figure out how Nicole got to Middle Earth and also the fact she apparently has a husband complicates things. What will Lord Elrond think/say when she meets with him? I also like that you have made Legolas dark haired, I know there has been debate over his hair color, it's a nice change. Good first few chapters, cannot wait to read more.

Happy writing
Aralinn
2/17/2017 c30 Guest
I enjoyed the fluff but I want more! great story so far!
2/6/2017 c30 EntityIchor
Mew...well done as usual. This chapter was as fluffy as meow's fur. Purr purr.
2/3/2017 c30 1AndreaGreenleaves
I adore this story! I've not spoken a word to anyone for a whole day until I've finished reading it. Oh, please update soon. I absolutely LOVE Legolas' character in this story and I immensity enjoy Nicole. She is such a fun character! I love the fluff en the humor! I also enjoyed the slow romance between the two and can't wait for them to just finally kiss!

Keep up the good work! xxx
2/2/2017 c7 9M1LK T3A
Okay. Honestly, I really love this story. But I can't help but feel angry every time i read that Legolas has "black" hair. He doesn't. His hair his white blonde, like his father's. In both the books and the movies. His eye brows are dark, but so are all the other elves in his kingdom. I'm not expecting you to fix it. But it works be appreciated. Great chapter by the way. I love how much emotion is put into each word.
2/1/2017 c6 M1LK T3A
I loved this! A lot! It was fun to read.
2/1/2017 c5 M1LK T3A
This was amazing!
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