for Whole4/14/2016 c1 Guest
Perfect!
Perfect!
3/1/2016 c1 SouthunLady
I absolutely loved the way you started this story; I love Hotch/Emily stories. Let us have some more drama/caring from them.
I absolutely loved the way you started this story; I love Hotch/Emily stories. Let us have some more drama/caring from them.
2/29/2016 c1 
2MeadowUndertown
Yeah, you need to write more Hotchniss fic.
This was so emotionally charged it had it's own heart beat!.
2MeadowUndertownYeah, you need to write more Hotchniss fic.
This was so emotionally charged it had it's own heart beat!.
12/7/2015 c1 LetMeWalkTheEarthWithYou
That was amazing. It fits the episode perfectly, Really loved the ending, so damn beautiful.
That was amazing. It fits the episode perfectly, Really loved the ending, so damn beautiful.
10/28/2015 c1 6thehecticglow
I really liked it! It's a subtle take on what their early-relationship dynamics might look like under pressure, which I love; I think that's what makes the whole thing feel so true-to-character even as you shift their relationship.
6thehecticglowI really liked it! It's a subtle take on what their early-relationship dynamics might look like under pressure, which I love; I think that's what makes the whole thing feel so true-to-character even as you shift their relationship.
10/28/2015 c1 rmpcmfan
Excellent! Loved how Hotch noticed all the little nuances that are Emily, but especially that he would just have to deal with her being an agent and the potential danger out there.
Excellent! Loved how Hotch noticed all the little nuances that are Emily, but especially that he would just have to deal with her being an agent and the potential danger out there.
10/27/2015 c1 ILR
Not bad, but there were some awkward phrases & noticeable errors. Morgan & Rossi entering the bank with "weapons blazing" made it sound like they were firing their guns as they entered. Perhaps you meant flashlights? And then when you had Emily & Hotch in bed that night, it's suddenly December, even though it was warm enough for Hotch to wear a short sleeve shirt in the episode. Dude, it snows in Washington DC in December, so the episode must have taken place in summer or early autumn.
Not bad, but there were some awkward phrases & noticeable errors. Morgan & Rossi entering the bank with "weapons blazing" made it sound like they were firing their guns as they entered. Perhaps you meant flashlights? And then when you had Emily & Hotch in bed that night, it's suddenly December, even though it was warm enough for Hotch to wear a short sleeve shirt in the episode. Dude, it snows in Washington DC in December, so the episode must have taken place in summer or early autumn.