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10/28/2015 c1 14FallenZApple
Nice. It was a very confusing beginning, you should edit and type "Soul King" P.O.V. at the beginning. The concept was either Yhwach looking at the future or Kaguya ******* the Soul King for what i understood. Still you should had left your first concept. Maybe as Chapter 2? You can make this into a mini-series of K/SK or Y one-shoots. Keep it up. Patience friend. Sometimes it takes me 2 days in a single chapter. I take breakes type ideas and edit or discard then sometimes. With my job and all is hard just like anyones life.
10/28/2015 c1 8shinxshinx1595
Its a mystery at the beginning, but its starting off spectacularly! ;3 Can't wait for the next chapter!

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