
9/23/2019 c3
5GhostFang GF
I think Adam would look good with a Black-Blue lightsaber (Its basically a lightsaber with a black blade that has a blue glow to it).

I think Adam would look good with a Black-Blue lightsaber (Its basically a lightsaber with a black blade that has a blue glow to it).
1/17/2017 c2
8Imaginary Guy117
Hey, I just read the Krillin and the Avengers fic and hope you can get your life together to continue working. Some of the readers don't want this to be over without a proper ending.

Hey, I just read the Krillin and the Avengers fic and hope you can get your life together to continue working. Some of the readers don't want this to be over without a proper ending.
12/2/2015 c2 Guest
will earth be classified as the home world of the human race, and will they learn all of earth's histories and mythologies?
will earth be classified as the home world of the human race, and will they learn all of earth's histories and mythologies?
11/15/2015 c2 Guest
are the star wars and M.I.B. universes the same and the same galaxy yes or no? also will the star wars humans have earth as there species home world as well?
are the star wars and M.I.B. universes the same and the same galaxy yes or no? also will the star wars humans have earth as there species home world as well?
11/5/2015 c2 Darth Perfidious
Nice chapter, and it still has that same flow the old story had. Good work.
Nice chapter, and it still has that same flow the old story had. Good work.
11/3/2015 c2
8Species Unknown
*hugs him* I also have Asperger's. It's quite hard to deal with at times, isn't it?

*hugs him* I also have Asperger's. It's quite hard to deal with at times, isn't it?
10/31/2015 c1 louiss667
It's nice to see you write again. If I have to say one thing is that going from OotB (which ended with the Mortis storyline) and starting with this; Is that a lot has happened between the two fics. For example in OotB, Jordan was just introduced at the last part of the last chapter and now in this fic Jordan is buddy buddy with everyone. (looks up at bold paragraph at the end of this chapter) ...I think I found part of my answer. So his story has not caught up with OotB yet. All I am saying is it appears a lot has happened between both of your stories. Because of your sudden ending to OotB, there is a lot of loose story and plot threads that are still open and need closure. Anyway enough constructive criticism about the story gap. This chapter is a great example of your writing style (which is great by the way) can't wait for the next!
It's nice to see you write again. If I have to say one thing is that going from OotB (which ended with the Mortis storyline) and starting with this; Is that a lot has happened between the two fics. For example in OotB, Jordan was just introduced at the last part of the last chapter and now in this fic Jordan is buddy buddy with everyone. (looks up at bold paragraph at the end of this chapter) ...I think I found part of my answer. So his story has not caught up with OotB yet. All I am saying is it appears a lot has happened between both of your stories. Because of your sudden ending to OotB, there is a lot of loose story and plot threads that are still open and need closure. Anyway enough constructive criticism about the story gap. This chapter is a great example of your writing style (which is great by the way) can't wait for the next!
10/29/2015 c1
8Species Unknown
Oooooh. This is gonna be goood! All the nerds will be getting respect now. :3 Hopefully.

Oooooh. This is gonna be goood! All the nerds will be getting respect now. :3 Hopefully.