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12/2/2016 c5 herald of the scourge
this is great, I just found this fic so I hope your planning continue it, anyhow, as far as constructive criticism goes I really haven't noticed anything bad about it so far, I'm really enjoying reading it
6/26/2016 c5 5ShugoYuuki123
Awesome story, hope you still plan to continue it :)
6/16/2016 c1 P0lluxxx
I'm sorry I just can't get rid of old habits. You keep repeating 'cavaries' when it should really be 'cavalries' :D
6/9/2016 c1 19CAVALRYMAN1863
I thought this chapter was pretty good, made a lot of good points. :)
6/3/2016 c5 fswgfsdgffsdg
Name: Akarui Suno

Age: 18

Nationality: American Atheist who believes in his own power

Appearance: His hair is dark brown with slight curved spikes sticking out that goes down to the nape of his neck, on his ears, and covers most of his forehead. He is slim and muscular with a matured face (Idk how to describe faces), blue eyes and usually wears a grey vest with a blue t-shirt over it and black leggings with combat boots.

Weapons: His singing and dancing make him vulnerable to people looking to ambush him, so he combines his dancing practice with combat training and wields 2 knives at once and has 10 extras on his belt, throwing and stabbing with movement like leaves in the wind.
-Has 225 HP

Sing: With a dark and melancholy tune, sings with an explosion of energy that damages all of his enemies who hear it. If you want a rough idea of what it sounds like, here's a link: watch?vhTABGGrUdEM
Dance: He spins and moves fluidly, and leaves a trail of darkness behind which step, which poisons the earth below and makes the ground like acid to his enemies.
Ultimate: His song and dance filled with passion and bravery, inspire his allies to fight with twice as much health, defense, power and even forms their weapons to have more ammo when fighting.

Faction: Overwatch

Background: Akarui loved watching his mother sing while his father danced. His mother was his inspiration while the father was the muse. One day, they went for a trip to perform in front of Queen Elizabeth herself! Akarui got to go with them as well! But unfortunately, a gang decided to rob the house in the middle of the night and made off with almost every possession, even his parents wedding rings, and later that night: Their lives. Akarui hid under his bed after the two gunshots. Now to keep the memory alive, he learnt to sing and dance to keep their memories alive.

Personality: He is like a statue, never showing any emotion to people he feels apathy towards. However, whenever he sees some sort of artist who gives morale in the battlefield, he hesitates to fight because of his parents death. When he lets people in they see, he is a excellent listener and conversationalist with a passion for exercising constantly. A little strange, but he's a good person.
5/30/2016 c5 Kat
Omg pls post more often this fanfiction is pawsome, I'm always looking fur fanfictions like this and this is one of the few that I found and I nearly cry every time I check and there's no update
5/28/2016 c1 4Shadowjonathan
Noice, also, please try more on the spelling, its not that right juju yet.
5/23/2016 c5 mudly
Name: Rifter
Age: 19
Nationality: Canadian
Appearance: extremely tall (7.5ft-9ft) hair black, purple seams to flow in it, eye are purple were white usually is pupals are yellow (warm, friendly look to them) ,skin is the color of shadows wispy at out line of body three long sharper fingers(same on feet), green shorts ,pink shirt, fedora(color flows in a spiral on it)
weapons: sickle(primary) sword or spear(secondary) tower shield (see abilities)
abilities: control over shadows (use to form weapons, hide, and making fire(by removing all shadows in one area)) quick healing, shoots blasts of pure shadow
Faction: Overwatch
Background: Rifter is mystery to man. Most of his kind are savage, brutal, and all around bad. He on the other hand is a nice helping and kind and because of this he was banished. he was found by overwatch and loves to work with them. quick to make friends and will protect them with his life.
misc: fascinated by mechanical items, love gems, a little crazy at times
sorry not logged on, forgot to :( my screen name is mudly
5/21/2016 c4 Andyyyy
LOVING THIS STORY. Can't wait for the update tonight!
5/11/2016 c3 4Arcane Charmcaster
The story is NOT abandoned, I just have alot of school stuff right now taking up my time. but as soon as thats done I will be updating more frequently.
5/10/2016 c3 4cryptexus
I really love how you have the personalities down in this, the story itself is really great! I just wish it would be updated more frequently (or at least more steadily), it's a bit disappointing to see no updates when I check in the morning. Other than that, awesome story! can't wait for the next chapter! :D
4/22/2016 c3 Guest
When is the next
4/18/2016 c3 Guest
Nice story can't wait for the next chapter
4/10/2016 c3 Zwack15
I am really happy that you write such an awsome story with your idea of tracers Background :) i really love that kind of storys and hope you will continue
4/9/2016 c2 KatrinaA
It is Very good so far
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