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1LuminouShadowAlt
I think I had fallen into sink cost fallacy, that I kept reading despite knowing this isnt for me. And I happy that I realised this, tho maybe not fast enough.
1LuminouShadowAltI think I had fallen into sink cost fallacy, that I kept reading despite knowing this isnt for me. And I happy that I realised this, tho maybe not fast enough.
2/1 c15 LuminouShadowAlt
Ugh...
It is exactly what I feared. Shirou arriving just after they are back in soul society. So that shirou will be forced to take part in the invasion arc. I just hate this.
It was such a good fic, shorou being hollow so it will not be a canon fic, you know like karakura si or ichigo si type thing. But now you are making him take part in the invasion arc so blatantly, that it is clear that this is forced. I wouldn't even hate this plot if it was executed some other way so that it doesn't feel forced.
I just didn't expect this from an author like you
Ugh...
It is exactly what I feared. Shirou arriving just after they are back in soul society. So that shirou will be forced to take part in the invasion arc. I just hate this.
It was such a good fic, shorou being hollow so it will not be a canon fic, you know like karakura si or ichigo si type thing. But now you are making him take part in the invasion arc so blatantly, that it is clear that this is forced. I wouldn't even hate this plot if it was executed some other way so that it doesn't feel forced.
I just didn't expect this from an author like you
2/1 c14 LuminouShadowAlt
I like both og Aizen and shirou.
But here you made shirou both intelligent and naive depending when the plot demands it, that I dont like him. And whole point of Aizen character was that he was insanely clever mastermind. But here it isnt being shown infact all things are happening because of shirou naivety. That when I read Aizen thought process, it makes me see Aizen as cartoonish villain who thinks he is smart but viewers know he is not. And because you messing their character so badly, it makes me hate them.
Also there's just too much of forced author fiat that its blatant. You know its like one of those badly made movies, where you can already figure out what the next plot gonna be.
Also hope the next chapter is not what I think it is. Because it will be another cliche plot that I hate, you know cops just arriving after the thiefs are gone kinda plot.
I like both og Aizen and shirou.
But here you made shirou both intelligent and naive depending when the plot demands it, that I dont like him. And whole point of Aizen character was that he was insanely clever mastermind. But here it isnt being shown infact all things are happening because of shirou naivety. That when I read Aizen thought process, it makes me see Aizen as cartoonish villain who thinks he is smart but viewers know he is not. And because you messing their character so badly, it makes me hate them.
Also there's just too much of forced author fiat that its blatant. You know its like one of those badly made movies, where you can already figure out what the next plot gonna be.
Also hope the next chapter is not what I think it is. Because it will be another cliche plot that I hate, you know cops just arriving after the thiefs are gone kinda plot.
12/22/2024 c83 BeoWolf666
Finally finished this monster of a book and my reaction is HOLY SHIT IS WAS AWESOME
Finally finished this monster of a book and my reaction is HOLY SHIT IS WAS AWESOME
12/22/2024 c81 BeoWolf666
Damn these last chapters are getting my blood moving with how crazy it’s getting
Damn these last chapters are getting my blood moving with how crazy it’s getting
12/18/2024 c83 1uchiha-rune
This has been an awesome fanfiction. Thanks a lot Author-san, great as usual
1uchiha-runeThis has been an awesome fanfiction. Thanks a lot Author-san, great as usual
12/16/2024 c83 Eedura
great fic. binged it all recently. although the ending feels rushed and provides barely any conclusion to most characters in the story.
great fic. binged it all recently. although the ending feels rushed and provides barely any conclusion to most characters in the story.