for The Vasto of White10/31/2015 c1 Guest
so is this a rewrite of hollow feeling or a different story altogether?
so is this a rewrite of hollow feeling or a different story altogether?
10/31/2015 c1 
3The Richmaster
This seems like a really interesting story idea, I wonder if any other canon characters have come under Shirou's protection.
I wonder how various characters are going to react to the high concentration of power within Shirou's territory; three Vasto Lorde (assuming Harribel chooses to stay), dozens of Adjuchas (I assume) and who knows how many low-level hollows (I noticed a lack of gillians though; I'm assuming that the reason for that is that Gillians are the result of many souls in a single being which don't evolve until one has dominated the rest, however since the hollows in this area don't eat souls then they would not need to do so, thus bypassing the Gillian stage)
- it's likely that Nel and her fraccion are either part of the group (pre-shinigamification) or will become so after the betrayal, though I do wonder, with with the higher level of spiritual energy in the area, would she revert to her adult form if she joined afterwards
- Aizen would probably be interested in recruiting them but I'm not sure how much effort he'd be willing to put into it, especially if this is from when he still had to put up a facade for Soul Society
- Uryuu would probably just be insulted that there exists a hollow better at archery than him
- As for the Soul Society in general, they don't seem to care much about what happens in Hueco Mundo unless it spills over into another dimension(?); Mayuri, on the other hand...
- Barragan probably doesn't like the idea of someone else having their own territory but so long as his 'kingdom' isn't encroached upon, I doubt that he would be willing to personally act
- Ulquiorra would be something of a wild card, since he sees no real value in anything which would make him rather unpredictable. Shirou might be able somewhat relate to him, as I imagine that is what he was like just before Kiritsugu rescued him
- Grimmjow's group would probably not like the idea of Shirou's area but would be smart enough to not start anything (unless they were the group of Adjuchas that were killed in this chapter)
Great start; hope to see more
3The RichmasterThis seems like a really interesting story idea, I wonder if any other canon characters have come under Shirou's protection.
I wonder how various characters are going to react to the high concentration of power within Shirou's territory; three Vasto Lorde (assuming Harribel chooses to stay), dozens of Adjuchas (I assume) and who knows how many low-level hollows (I noticed a lack of gillians though; I'm assuming that the reason for that is that Gillians are the result of many souls in a single being which don't evolve until one has dominated the rest, however since the hollows in this area don't eat souls then they would not need to do so, thus bypassing the Gillian stage)
- it's likely that Nel and her fraccion are either part of the group (pre-shinigamification) or will become so after the betrayal, though I do wonder, with with the higher level of spiritual energy in the area, would she revert to her adult form if she joined afterwards
- Aizen would probably be interested in recruiting them but I'm not sure how much effort he'd be willing to put into it, especially if this is from when he still had to put up a facade for Soul Society
- Uryuu would probably just be insulted that there exists a hollow better at archery than him
- As for the Soul Society in general, they don't seem to care much about what happens in Hueco Mundo unless it spills over into another dimension(?); Mayuri, on the other hand...
- Barragan probably doesn't like the idea of someone else having their own territory but so long as his 'kingdom' isn't encroached upon, I doubt that he would be willing to personally act
- Ulquiorra would be something of a wild card, since he sees no real value in anything which would make him rather unpredictable. Shirou might be able somewhat relate to him, as I imagine that is what he was like just before Kiritsugu rescued him
- Grimmjow's group would probably not like the idea of Shirou's area but would be smart enough to not start anything (unless they were the group of Adjuchas that were killed in this chapter)
Great start; hope to see more
10/31/2015 c1 37kyugan
would definately like to see more of this. Especially if Aizen tries his recruitment thing.
Hell, I don't see Barragan taking this well either.
37kyuganwould definately like to see more of this. Especially if Aizen tries his recruitment thing.
Hell, I don't see Barragan taking this well either.
10/31/2015 c1 xbox432
Interesting take on the story, I'll be looking forward to seeing how this progresses.
Interesting take on the story, I'll be looking forward to seeing how this progresses.
10/31/2015 c1 3Reishin Amara
now THIS...has very interesting premise...so..is it Archer perhaps?(The one that Rin says goodbye to in Unlimited Blade Works...)
3Reishin Amaranow THIS...has very interesting premise...so..is it Archer perhaps?(The one that Rin says goodbye to in Unlimited Blade Works...)
10/31/2015 c1 Darth Lelouch
Very good.
I just have one concern, I hope Shidou should not be able to copie Zankpato.
Anyways good luck.
Very good.
I just have one concern, I hope Shidou should not be able to copie Zankpato.
Anyways good luck.
10/31/2015 c1 BruceLeeNagato
Well that was awesome :D
Wich fate route is this based on?
How long has passed since then?
Does he have his Reality Marble?
Is it Shirou or Archer?
Hero of Justice ... Tousen would have a field day.
Looking foward to next chapter.
Well that was awesome :D
Wich fate route is this based on?
How long has passed since then?
Does he have his Reality Marble?
Is it Shirou or Archer?
Hero of Justice ... Tousen would have a field day.
Looking foward to next chapter.