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11/8/2015 c2 Sceonn
A diamond in the rough alright! Can't believe I just stumbled upon this gem here.
11/8/2015 c2 Velzon
I have to say this story really has piped my interest I like how you make Archer behave.

Since the story is still so new I have no idea in what direction you will take it.

But I hope you keep up the good work!
11/8/2015 c2 Bleach Fan
...and let loose the wolves of war!
11/8/2015 c1 Guest
love it!
11/8/2015 c2 Shirosaki Kizuro
Love the Story, hope u update soon
11/8/2015 c2 FateLover
A new chapter? So quickly? Well this is a pleasant surprise!

Well the interactions between lilynette and appachi/others is spot on! Not to mention how we see a little of what lily feels and how her world has changed for the better.

Going to be honest I was expecting Nellial to remind Shiro of Saber due to her beliefs and how she is like a knight.

And we see all the hollows who grow due to shiro, and the feelings of gratitude they have for him. Unless your going to go int details of some of their stories of before and after shiro arrived. Though you made it so I want to know the name of that Raven fellow!

And it seems I was right on the whole "war" between Barraggan and Shiro! And now he has slowly gotten the attention of Barraggan. Though honestly I know that shiro as several ways to take him down even with time ability. After all given what he faced in the past...

Stark may be lazy but when you get him serious...well there is a reason why he's number 1 in the series...

Speaking of which I look forward to shiro trancing shimigami swords and seeing all their reactions as shiro continues to go and throw all the rules of world out the window!

So good luck and looking forward to future chapters!
11/8/2015 c2 4Mythfan
11/7/2015 c2 Rose Knight of Neptune

Why are your stories so good.

Every time I read them I just scream in agony as I wait for the next chapter.
11/7/2015 c2 einargs
Heh. That... that was awesome. Shirou trying to figure out bits of his past, Saber... just awesome. I normally prefer Archer for fanfiction, but... yeah. This makes it work, and work well.
11/7/2015 c2 alex.rushing.5
Loving it. Loving thie update. So barragan vs shirou? How will this go?

Also for constructive criticism, is Harribel truly acting in such a close manner to Shirou?
11/7/2015 c2 MetaTR0N
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next update :D
11/7/2015 c1 16Aburg76
nice concept I hope you continue it
11/7/2015 c2 2Phnxfyr1
dang was getting into it and then cliff hanger arghh
11/7/2015 c2 Guest
this is getting good
11/7/2015 c2 Squadpunk 2.0
And the shots were fired... Knowing Shirou he may have a loophole against Barragan's time power, given the amount of weaponry he possess in his 'inventory', provided he still has 'it'...
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