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11/3/2015 c1 1deeed22
Great story
11/3/2015 c1 The One and Only MUDKIP
M8, M8y... M8.
M8, This story...
m8, I r8 it an 8/8, for the great Emperors g8 of f8...
There is no h8 m8.
This story altered he f8.

Okay, the real review, Good story, the plot so far is nice, a decent amount of backstory.
But there is one problem, that fucking ending...
Why...
WHY A CLIFFHANGER.
WHY!?
:U
Other then that, I rate it a 10/10.
Keep up the good work.
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11/3/2015 c1 Reichtangle
more please
11/3/2015 c1 Guest
Wow... posted 14 hours ago gg. Nice story though id love to see a part 2 to this. This is awsome.
11/3/2015 c1 champion
I like it. Update soon
11/3/2015 c1 Seer
A good read, especially considering the protagonist is a cog-boy.

Keep up the good work!
11/3/2015 c1 TAINTLORD
Cardsharp is a little too human for techpriest, but then again he is a younger and less augmented one. id like to see a new chapter soon!
11/3/2015 c1 6The Prophet of Courage
woow keep going my friend this bound to at least interest me more than a Krieger as the mechanicus would be more prone to fighting for justice league than against someone the ova guys
11/3/2015 c1 Danriver
I like it.
11/2/2015 c1 Guest
Not bad. Looking forward to more.
11/2/2015 c1 15Heir of the void
Nice start. Grammar and terminology could use a bit of polish, but other than that, everything was great. If you want some help with a BETA read, shoot me a PM.
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