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9/18/2018 c2 The Book of Eli
Fast chapter but still interesting...
9/18/2018 c1 The Book of Eli
Short start but interesting set up...
8/26/2018 c6 King69
Good chapter
8/8/2018 c5 43Atomsk the Pirate King
Looks like Marceline and Bubblegum get to see more of Finn ;) ;).
8/6/2018 c4 Atomsk the Pirate King
Glad you’re finally continuing this. Hope you’ll keep going.
10/19/2016 c3 Atomsk the Pirate King
What happens next?
3/8/2016 c3 FoxsoulRedux
This story has some good concepts behind it, but the cliffhangers and the lack of details in some parts, like Finn waking up from a few years sleep, are slightly disappointing.
I believe you can improve your writing though. Trying writing two or three of these chapters as a whole chapter. Maybe include other POVs during Finn's sleep to give the reader an impression of time passing Finn by.
Hoping this is taken as helpful advice; it's intended to be. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
11/6/2015 c2 FuzenMunashi
A Demon..?
-Moony

Definitely A Demonoid
-Fuzen
11/3/2015 c1 52brewer235
Has promised but is pretty short and feels a bit rushed. But is still a great start to a story.

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