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47Alisi Thorndyke
As promised, I read and reviewed a chapter each of your stories. :) I'm not done yet so expect more from me. :) Although not this morning though lol
I really like how Rose Quartz had a speaking role and place in this chapter. :) There aren't many stories that gives her that privilege so it was a happy moment for me to read that. :) And Pearl was not her pet despite how close she was to Rose :)
But awesome job! :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
47Alisi ThorndykeAs promised, I read and reviewed a chapter each of your stories. :) I'm not done yet so expect more from me. :) Although not this morning though lol
I really like how Rose Quartz had a speaking role and place in this chapter. :) There aren't many stories that gives her that privilege so it was a happy moment for me to read that. :) And Pearl was not her pet despite how close she was to Rose :)
But awesome job! :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
2/2/2016 c10 1Araitsume
Man, this story was a ride. That Prism Vs. Steen Emeralnie fight was something I expected to happen in the actual series, but I don't think they can match what I read. I find it rather sad that despite Steven's efforts, Juniper's friends will be still have to forget about this character-building adventure (unless they all manage to become wizards). And man, you've got a knack for universe expansion in ways that keeps me shocked (please tell me Telepath!Waddles's has N.D. Tyson's voice). Also, we all know what you were going for with that acronym, dude.
1AraitsumeMan, this story was a ride. That Prism Vs. Steen Emeralnie fight was something I expected to happen in the actual series, but I don't think they can match what I read. I find it rather sad that despite Steven's efforts, Juniper's friends will be still have to forget about this character-building adventure (unless they all manage to become wizards). And man, you've got a knack for universe expansion in ways that keeps me shocked (please tell me Telepath!Waddles's has N.D. Tyson's voice). Also, we all know what you were going for with that acronym, dude.
1/31/2016 c10 8The Keeper of Worlds
Dude! I can't wait to see that bear fruit with all the new members! I almost want an OC me in there to aid it!
8The Keeper of WorldsDude! I can't wait to see that bear fruit with all the new members! I almost want an OC me in there to aid it!
1/30/2016 c10 Jonesy
I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE YOU!( gives you a big hug but suddenly realised what i did and coughed nervously) heh heh sorry but its true can't wait for your next story!
But sorry is this still a cartoon x over, cause Norman and coraline are in movies x overs like the incredibles so they don't fall in this trope .but this girl likes to keep it real. And marco I love him he should be praised for his skills, keeping a cool head, Mexican/American background, and hanging out with a magical princess from another dimension how much cooler can you be?
-perhaps an undersea adventure,demon revolution, time travel or future sneak peek,dimension travel to mewni,origins of magic,guy hamdon getting a girlfriend,theresa Fowler going on a mission date with randy,mcfist goes on trial,timeline dates for your stories,the heroes get a movie shezow,ninja,dragon,Danny,and tigre. Males or females are gone. Toxzon pollutes the ocean which makes seaman(the awesomes season 3) want their children back, world organizations are arguing,alien magic, the rainbooms(equestriagirls girls) use their song "welcome to the show" to cure the world of dark Baxter(lps) partakes in the pet of the turn into takes a step up.
-BTW sorry for grammar and such its auto correct I only have a tablet.
I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE YOU!( gives you a big hug but suddenly realised what i did and coughed nervously) heh heh sorry but its true can't wait for your next story!
But sorry is this still a cartoon x over, cause Norman and coraline are in movies x overs like the incredibles so they don't fall in this trope .but this girl likes to keep it real. And marco I love him he should be praised for his skills, keeping a cool head, Mexican/American background, and hanging out with a magical princess from another dimension how much cooler can you be?
-perhaps an undersea adventure,demon revolution, time travel or future sneak peek,dimension travel to mewni,origins of magic,guy hamdon getting a girlfriend,theresa Fowler going on a mission date with randy,mcfist goes on trial,timeline dates for your stories,the heroes get a movie shezow,ninja,dragon,Danny,and tigre. Males or females are gone. Toxzon pollutes the ocean which makes seaman(the awesomes season 3) want their children back, world organizations are arguing,alien magic, the rainbooms(equestriagirls girls) use their song "welcome to the show" to cure the world of dark Baxter(lps) partakes in the pet of the turn into takes a step up.
-BTW sorry for grammar and such its auto correct I only have a tablet.
1/30/2016 c10 33LegionnaireBlaze
I recognize a few of those names, I say Marco Diaz, Coraline Jones, Jimmy Neutron, Cindy Vortex, Dib Membrane, and Dipper Pines of course. If I have any other suggestions I'll tell you through private messages. Love your stories by the way.
33LegionnaireBlazeI recognize a few of those names, I say Marco Diaz, Coraline Jones, Jimmy Neutron, Cindy Vortex, Dib Membrane, and Dipper Pines of course. If I have any other suggestions I'll tell you through private messages. Love your stories by the way.
1/30/2016 c10 nightmaster000
Great chapter and awesome story.
700,000 it's going to be hard find them all. What kind of chaos will the balls that still out there cause?
Loved the twist at the end with the D.I.C.S. Looking forward to seeing what moves the forces of darkness will makes to restore the balance. Also looking forward to seeing how Waddles plan develops.
Great chapter and awesome story.
700,000 it's going to be hard find them all. What kind of chaos will the balls that still out there cause?
Loved the twist at the end with the D.I.C.S. Looking forward to seeing what moves the forces of darkness will makes to restore the balance. Also looking forward to seeing how Waddles plan develops.
1/23/2016 c9 11OMAC001
Great way to beat Prism. Now they just have to figure out what to do with the stank and deal with covering up magic again.
11OMAC001Great way to beat Prism. Now they just have to figure out what to do with the stank and deal with covering up magic again.
1/15/2016 c8 Jonesy
I like the story and update hope for more but alexandrite is amestyst and has nothing to with gems can't fuse with humans only Steven can since he's half human and what do you think Randy does in norrisville since the sorcerer is gone,maybe global villains are arriving since that sorcerer is not around anymore and mcfist is on did you know someone will die on Weirdmageddon in the pines family.
I like the story and update hope for more but alexandrite is amestyst and has nothing to with gems can't fuse with humans only Steven can since he's half human and what do you think Randy does in norrisville since the sorcerer is gone,maybe global villains are arriving since that sorcerer is not around anymore and mcfist is on did you know someone will die on Weirdmageddon in the pines family.
1/11/2016 c4 47Alisi Thorndyke
Now I'm REALLY going to have to catch up with SU now becuase there is another gem?! Glass Prism?! User, I'm out of touch as I jsut recently caught up with what was missed when I could no longer keep up with what time the episodes came on. They moved them around so much that I couldn't keep up! But I'm going to pull an online stream and that should do it, sometime today...after working maybe, after getting some sleep lol. Sometime today, don't quote me XD
Well I'm off to bed as I only had time to read one chapter :) The rest will surely follow later on :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
47Alisi ThorndykeNow I'm REALLY going to have to catch up with SU now becuase there is another gem?! Glass Prism?! User, I'm out of touch as I jsut recently caught up with what was missed when I could no longer keep up with what time the episodes came on. They moved them around so much that I couldn't keep up! But I'm going to pull an online stream and that should do it, sometime today...after working maybe, after getting some sleep lol. Sometime today, don't quote me XD
Well I'm off to bed as I only had time to read one chapter :) The rest will surely follow later on :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
1/9/2016 c3 Alisi Thorndyke
Even though I'm not all caught up with Steven Universe, I did view screenshots of what Rose looked like and might I add, her genes are too strong in Steven. XD I can't determine who Steven looks like more, his mom or his dad. Though both genes appear to be dominate, but still lol!
Well I'm off to bed now, despite it being after 7am lol. I will do my best to catch up with the rest of this today after doing what I have to do. :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
Even though I'm not all caught up with Steven Universe, I did view screenshots of what Rose looked like and might I add, her genes are too strong in Steven. XD I can't determine who Steven looks like more, his mom or his dad. Though both genes appear to be dominate, but still lol!
Well I'm off to bed now, despite it being after 7am lol. I will do my best to catch up with the rest of this today after doing what I have to do. :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)