
2/5 c53 Krimzon Flygon
It's kind of funny reading the scene with the Melusine after the MonMusu chapter involving them.
Simply because now we know that there is no goddamn way it would play out like that: a Melusine turning down fun times just wouldn't friggin' happen on principle.
It's kind of funny reading the scene with the Melusine after the MonMusu chapter involving them.
Simply because now we know that there is no goddamn way it would play out like that: a Melusine turning down fun times just wouldn't friggin' happen on principle.
2/2 c159 TheAlphaMajora
Normally I'm not a huge fan of Yuri. When I read the premise of this fanfiction I just had to give it a try and I fell in love with this story. Haru and Yuisu are such an amazing couple and their first meeting had me rolling with laughter. Iormu and Quests had me saying "Aww" throughout and the trio of Mara, Tsuen and Rem are such a wonderful mismatched couple showing that difference can create something beautiful. The closer I got to the end the more I wanted it to keep going! However I still thoroughly enjoyed this story and the creativity of each liminal girl brought in even if only for a few chapters. I will definitely be reading this again and suggesting it to my friends who read fanfics. 10/10.
Normally I'm not a huge fan of Yuri. When I read the premise of this fanfiction I just had to give it a try and I fell in love with this story. Haru and Yuisu are such an amazing couple and their first meeting had me rolling with laughter. Iormu and Quests had me saying "Aww" throughout and the trio of Mara, Tsuen and Rem are such a wonderful mismatched couple showing that difference can create something beautiful. The closer I got to the end the more I wanted it to keep going! However I still thoroughly enjoyed this story and the creativity of each liminal girl brought in even if only for a few chapters. I will definitely be reading this again and suggesting it to my friends who read fanfics. 10/10.
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12/30/2021 c4 Huynh Minh Cong
Um, can you give me the image of Haru's underwear? It's hard to imagine it.
Um, can you give me the image of Haru's underwear? It's hard to imagine it.
12/9/2021 c17
2Ashton Giertz
I find it hard to believe that most liminal cultures are less progressive on sexuality given the behavior of half the cast of Mon Musume (Mia, Racnara, and Suu especially)

I find it hard to believe that most liminal cultures are less progressive on sexuality given the behavior of half the cast of Mon Musume (Mia, Racnara, and Suu especially)
12/9/2021 c15 Ashton Giertz
this adds a whole new layer to the plot hole of why a government that doesn't want humans and liminals having sex with each other keeps sending limals to hosts of the opposite sex. Assigning lesbian liminals to a lesbian hosts makes you wonder if the Japanese government is trying to set host families up for failure.
this adds a whole new layer to the plot hole of why a government that doesn't want humans and liminals having sex with each other keeps sending limals to hosts of the opposite sex. Assigning lesbian liminals to a lesbian hosts makes you wonder if the Japanese government is trying to set host families up for failure.
4/11/2021 c1 Ruby Liverance
I love this story I've read it like 20 times although I think you might be able to get more readers on wattpad
I love this story I've read it like 20 times although I think you might be able to get more readers on wattpad
1/1/2021 c156 HelpMeI'mTyping
Congrats. This is my number one, hands down, favorite story ever. Nothing else comes close. I- what else can I say!? I remember when the last chapter came out (not the bonus) and I couldn't decide to cry out in happiness or scream bloody murder, find where you live, and "here's Johnny!" You. I'm a guy ( strait as hell, no offence to those who aren't) and no other story can compare. This? This story is the pinnacle of fanfiction: a loving, dedicated story made out of the author's imagination, with a helping hand from other media.
Oh, and lad?
Never change.
Congrats. This is my number one, hands down, favorite story ever. Nothing else comes close. I- what else can I say!? I remember when the last chapter came out (not the bonus) and I couldn't decide to cry out in happiness or scream bloody murder, find where you live, and "here's Johnny!" You. I'm a guy ( strait as hell, no offence to those who aren't) and no other story can compare. This? This story is the pinnacle of fanfiction: a loving, dedicated story made out of the author's imagination, with a helping hand from other media.
Oh, and lad?
Never change.
6/21/2020 c157 SandwichLover
I... wow. I originally came for "plot" but ended up staying for plot. Tbh I was expecting all the chapters to be more like this one. But this story absolutely blew me away. Finishing the epilogue left me with that empty feeling, that good one where you finish an amazing book, that I haven't felt in such a long time. It was quite the ride that you took me on, and for that I thank you.
I... wow. I originally came for "plot" but ended up staying for plot. Tbh I was expecting all the chapters to be more like this one. But this story absolutely blew me away. Finishing the epilogue left me with that empty feeling, that good one where you finish an amazing book, that I haven't felt in such a long time. It was quite the ride that you took me on, and for that I thank you.