for i know your eyes in the morning sun1/15/2019 c1 Guest
Lol she's so blind
Lol she's so blind
9/15/2017 c1 laura
Love it..will enjolras tell her the next day?
Love it..will enjolras tell her the next day?
1/12/2017 c1 Iris
Very good. Hot.
Small critique: a bit wordy. I know you want them to sound educated, but it makes it more difficult for the reader to feel immersed when the dialogue is wordy and strained. Listen to yourself and those you love talk. It's okay if they have a good vocabulary, but don't let the words control it. It's good, you have great potential, love the premise, but write like they're real people from 2016 having a conversation. They sounded more 1800's than modern.
This is really good story, please continue. Maybe edit the dialogue choices next time.
Very good. Hot.
Small critique: a bit wordy. I know you want them to sound educated, but it makes it more difficult for the reader to feel immersed when the dialogue is wordy and strained. Listen to yourself and those you love talk. It's okay if they have a good vocabulary, but don't let the words control it. It's good, you have great potential, love the premise, but write like they're real people from 2016 having a conversation. They sounded more 1800's than modern.
This is really good story, please continue. Maybe edit the dialogue choices next time.
1/21/2016 c1 Lilac
Whoa, interesting story, I'm waiting for next chapter
Whoa, interesting story, I'm waiting for next chapter
11/8/2015 c1 guest
I love this! please update soon :)
I love this! please update soon :)
11/8/2015 c1 Guest
I need the next part seriously ㅠㅠ
I need the next part seriously ㅠㅠ
11/7/2015 c1 prettyfuschia
I'm glad you're back! Interesting story, looking forward for next chapter :). Thank you
I'm glad you're back! Interesting story, looking forward for next chapter :). Thank you
11/6/2015 c1 
20shadows-of-1832
Quite interesting...Really enjoying this take on them and can't wait to see where it leads.
20shadows-of-1832Quite interesting...Really enjoying this take on them and can't wait to see where it leads.
11/6/2015 c1 62astoryinred
*glomps* You're back!
Aw this is sweet. And it's funny how they really must dissect everything despite falling deep anyway. :)
62astoryinred*glomps* You're back!
Aw this is sweet. And it's funny how they really must dissect everything despite falling deep anyway. :)
11/6/2015 c1 Guest
Oh my god, this is awesome! Ep's pining, and all that tension between them! Nice job, I'm really looking forward to reading more! :D
Oh my god, this is awesome! Ep's pining, and all that tension between them! Nice job, I'm really looking forward to reading more! :D