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1/30 c44 7Arwenia
Look the story is good but Hermione is the definition of humble braggard (how she invents spells, how she speaks to people and gets her way). She also airs every dirty laundry out to everyone and can't keep anything private. (How the twins and Oliver treated her, etc.) I don't think I will continue reading this. I like Mary Sue' stories, and I don't mind overpowered, but I can't read about people who are entitled or act like they are the only smart thing in the room. So thank you so far and I wish you the best.
1/18 c57 7jada951
thanks for updating and reviewing.
I know I read this some time ago and enjoyed it.

gotta say, Barney chocolate is pretty awesome. Too bad she wasn't compelled to sing that song too!
12/12/2023 c32 1LadyBlackHart
If Hermione is a descendent of a Gaunt she should be able to hear the snake talk. Just like Harry, since he got the power from Riddle. Who is also a descendent from that family line.
12/6/2023 c18 desiree-pow-37-1986
Hello Sweetheart...

I'm am loving this story but one thing Oliver Wood is not part of the Sacred 28 like the Weasley or Malfoy are...
12/1/2023 c15 13thxenos
This is a terrible story.
I've read a bunch of reviews for the previous chapters and it seems some people do actually enjoy this, but I'm giving up. I was hopeful because you said you have grown a lot as a writer and I thought I could endure until then, but for now, I will give it a rest. Maybe later I could carry on.
For now, let me tell you which parts I think are terrible, which might help you if you think they are valid criticism. I understand if you think my opinion is trash and don't follow it.
First of all, I don't have any problems with Mary Sues. Some say they are boring. But I think we can also enjoy stories where the MC doesn't have any problems. The whole genre of slice-of-life proves it. In this story, you can't even call the MC a Mary Sue, because she does have problems that can't be solved with power.
What I have a problem with, is the repetitive manner of annoying things. Many reviews pointed out that the hateful bullying was offputting. I think you either should provide a better reason for the bullying, for example showing the girls' jealousy better, or tone it down.
Another thing I didn't like, was the overexaggeration. The bullying escalated very quickly to the point of unbelievability even in such a fantastical universe. I mean, Angelina shoved Hermione down when she was on top of the twins! That just won't happen. Or the part where they have tears on their faces every time Hermione cracks a dumb joke which is not even funny. Or the part where the boys call her the most kind, amazing selfless girl in existence when they talk to her for 2 hours for the first time. Or the fact that her sorting took so long while the whole castle waited on the edge of their seat.
This review is getting long as is, so I just put the things I had in mind at the time of writing.
I hope you have a blast writing more fanfictions for your audience to enjoy.
11/20/2023 c89 3Xhex25
thank you for the long awaited ending. loved it
11/17/2023 c89 2Slutty Mouse
Read this whole thing over the space of 3 days... couldn't stop reading. Amazing story that had me gripped from the start. loved that you covered every single book and still kept some events canon while making it a whole new story.
11/17/2023 c73 desiree-pow-37-1986
I'm am absolutely loving this story, darling, and you done my favorite pairings for Hermione...

But one thing you actually got wrong I this...

Sirus was wrong when he said that she might be richer than the Malfoy and Black's combine...

WHICH IS ABSOLUTELY FALSE...

Licius Malfoy is one the richest wizard in the Wizarding World, and he has a net worth 1.3 billion gallons...
11/14/2023 c89 Neshaisabookworm
Absolutely beautiful ending! It was fun to revist this fic agter so mamy years.
11/9/2023 c89 21CallaRose4ever
Wow I really enjoyed reading that again. Thanks so very much for sharing this with me. I truly enjoy all of your stories.
11/6/2023 c59 CallaRose4ever
So I'm rereading the story and I love it still. I thought I would drop a line and let you know.
11/2/2023 c89 CaitlinMariann
I absolutely love this story and the ending! It’s sucks that it has ended but I love all your work!
11/1/2023 c88 3Bella and Jacob fan 423
Thank you for adding this chapter in! I love this story and have read it many times and always wondered what happened during the battle. Thank you! It now feels complete.
11/1/2023 c89 jjw.jade
What a surprise but glad we got closure on this story! Thanks for all the hardwork
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