for Flawed Heroes2/13/2016 c21 
25DWGolondor
This was one of the best stories I ever read! You characterized every character and flaw perfectly and even used some philosophical talk ('Everyone, even heroes, were flawed'). I enjoyed your story from the beginning to the end. It was really exciting to see how the flaws of the seven plus Nico were and how they would have an effect on them. Love your story!
25DWGolondorThis was one of the best stories I ever read! You characterized every character and flaw perfectly and even used some philosophical talk ('Everyone, even heroes, were flawed'). I enjoyed your story from the beginning to the end. It was really exciting to see how the flaws of the seven plus Nico were and how they would have an effect on them. Love your story!
2/13/2016 c8 3itsraininggumdrops
Here's something for Frank:
You're insecure. Don't know what for. You turn heads, when you walk, through the door.
-One Direction, What Makes You Beautiful.
3itsraininggumdropsHere's something for Frank:
You're insecure. Don't know what for. You turn heads, when you walk, through the door.
-One Direction, What Makes You Beautiful.
2/13/2016 c21 Lavender5687
Noooo! It's over! Well it was a really great story while it lasted! It still is a really great story! I can't wait to read your next stories!
Noooo! It's over! Well it was a really great story while it lasted! It still is a really great story! I can't wait to read your next stories!
2/13/2016 c21 4Rosycat
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I LOVED THIS. IT WAS SO ADORABLE WHEN THEY HUGGGED NICO AND HE NEEDED IT AND AWW. AND WONDERFUL ENDING AND I NEED MORE.
4RosycatAWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I LOVED THIS. IT WAS SO ADORABLE WHEN THEY HUGGGED NICO AND HE NEEDED IT AND AWW. AND WONDERFUL ENDING AND I NEED MORE.
2/13/2016 c20 Rosycat
Wow... I don't want this to end. Poor everyone... The books never reeally touch that subject enough... But you did it perfectly. I'll be sure to vote.
Wow... I don't want this to end. Poor everyone... The books never reeally touch that subject enough... But you did it perfectly. I'll be sure to vote.
2/13/2016 c19 Rosycat
Aww! Well, your story made mine! And sorry for lack of prescence on here... School sucks!
Wow. Well done. Go Grudge! And Piper's thoughts at the end... That was pure poetry.
Aww! Well, your story made mine! And sorry for lack of prescence on here... School sucks!
Wow. Well done. Go Grudge! And Piper's thoughts at the end... That was pure poetry.
2/13/2016 c21 9awesomeninja09
Beautiful. Wonderful. Tragic. This is all of those and more. This entire story is emotion racking and terrifying and keeps you on your feet. Just reading this, I know that it'll be in my mind for a very long time. A job well done, I'd say.
Have you ever read a story that you know is going to stick with you for at least a few years? That's this FanFiction. Every character was written so perfectly, I almost think that you're Rick Riordan in disguise (yes, I am coming back to that theory). This was fantastic.
I really don't want this to end. This story AND this review. I just never want to stop reading this, but I know that whatever comes up must go down. Whatever starts must end, and so on. Basically, I loved it!
I feel like this review is longer than my last. But since it's the last chapter, I feel like it deserves this. I've stuck with you for all of this story and have had to put up with all of your cliffhangers and whatnot (I love that word!), but in the end, it was all worth it. Therefore (I love that word too!), I applaud you in this. Congrats!
You're coming up with your own story idea? That's so cool! Will you ever post it on FP? If so, I'll go and check it out the second that you do post. You're amazing!
Even though the ending to this was happy, I'm almost crying in sadness. Why does this have to end!? Why can't you continue it for all time? Then again, I guess that your plot doesn't exactly last forever. It was an amazing idea (almost better than your first one!) and I'm proud to have read this story. Great job (I've probably said that multiple times by now)!
I'm stalling. I just don't want to post this review, because I know that when I do, it'll be the final review for this story.
And you're never going to kill me! I'll kill you first! SECTUMSEMPRA! I really hope that I said that incantation right... Oh well! :D
Sincerely (for the last time *sniff sniff*),
Awesomeninja09
9awesomeninja09Beautiful. Wonderful. Tragic. This is all of those and more. This entire story is emotion racking and terrifying and keeps you on your feet. Just reading this, I know that it'll be in my mind for a very long time. A job well done, I'd say.
Have you ever read a story that you know is going to stick with you for at least a few years? That's this FanFiction. Every character was written so perfectly, I almost think that you're Rick Riordan in disguise (yes, I am coming back to that theory). This was fantastic.
I really don't want this to end. This story AND this review. I just never want to stop reading this, but I know that whatever comes up must go down. Whatever starts must end, and so on. Basically, I loved it!
I feel like this review is longer than my last. But since it's the last chapter, I feel like it deserves this. I've stuck with you for all of this story and have had to put up with all of your cliffhangers and whatnot (I love that word!), but in the end, it was all worth it. Therefore (I love that word too!), I applaud you in this. Congrats!
You're coming up with your own story idea? That's so cool! Will you ever post it on FP? If so, I'll go and check it out the second that you do post. You're amazing!
Even though the ending to this was happy, I'm almost crying in sadness. Why does this have to end!? Why can't you continue it for all time? Then again, I guess that your plot doesn't exactly last forever. It was an amazing idea (almost better than your first one!) and I'm proud to have read this story. Great job (I've probably said that multiple times by now)!
I'm stalling. I just don't want to post this review, because I know that when I do, it'll be the final review for this story.
And you're never going to kill me! I'll kill you first! SECTUMSEMPRA! I really hope that I said that incantation right... Oh well! :D
Sincerely (for the last time *sniff sniff*),
Awesomeninja09
2/13/2016 c2 Lav
I'm from Houston,TX and our accents just sound kinda ghetto with a tiny hint of southern lol :)
I'm from Houston,TX and our accents just sound kinda ghetto with a tiny hint of southern lol :)
2/13/2016 c21 51riptidedauntlessgryffindor
That... was amazing. The whole story was perfectly beautiful. If I had to only read one fanfiction for the rest of my life, I'd pick this one. Great job, and don't ever stop writing, okay?
51riptidedauntlessgryffindorThat... was amazing. The whole story was perfectly beautiful. If I had to only read one fanfiction for the rest of my life, I'd pick this one. Great job, and don't ever stop writing, okay?
2/12/2016 c21 Illusions-and-Shadows
Well, really good ending! I usually have trouble finding good stories but this one was great! Have a nice day! :)
Well, really good ending! I usually have trouble finding good stories but this one was great! Have a nice day! :)