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6/22/2016 c1 7TheWriterWhoWaited
Hello! Okay first is that your are telling, not showing. Detail the scenes out and sprinkle in some things about Cassie (you) and all. It felt rushed and kind of like a surprise attack with the dialogue. That's the only major concern I am seeing here :)

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