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Trash.
Trash.
11/11/2023 c8 Curclark
I wish you didn't show other people's points of view unless it is non-canon material. Like the mages from the Scripture when they surround the town. It was necessary to show the fight with the Chief Warrior since none of the main characters were fighting. I like all the changes. Thanks for writing this. If I wrote a fanfiction centered around this universe, I'd change how profession job classes worked. Instead of taking up levels out of your possible 100, allow each character the option of having a profession up to the max, but if they want to continue with that job or have more than one it would have to come from the 100 levels allowed. So you could be a level 15 blacksmith, but to be a master blacksmith or whatever you'd have to sacrifice combat potential. That way, all players could have a craft unless they refuse the free levels. Hm. Or completely change how the craftsmen system works. It could be more like WoW, where you can choose two and specialize as you level it up. Having crafting potential in a new world would be very useful.
I wish you didn't show other people's points of view unless it is non-canon material. Like the mages from the Scripture when they surround the town. It was necessary to show the fight with the Chief Warrior since none of the main characters were fighting. I like all the changes. Thanks for writing this. If I wrote a fanfiction centered around this universe, I'd change how profession job classes worked. Instead of taking up levels out of your possible 100, allow each character the option of having a profession up to the max, but if they want to continue with that job or have more than one it would have to come from the 100 levels allowed. So you could be a level 15 blacksmith, but to be a master blacksmith or whatever you'd have to sacrifice combat potential. That way, all players could have a craft unless they refuse the free levels. Hm. Or completely change how the craftsmen system works. It could be more like WoW, where you can choose two and specialize as you level it up. Having crafting potential in a new world would be very useful.
11/11/2023 c5 Curclark
Lucifer is a total ass. it may sound like I'm picking in Lucifer, but he is actually by far my favorite of the main characters. HeroHero is beyond lame. Who would choose to play as a blob monster? The other guy left a really bad taste in my mouth when he yelled at children. Momonga is a spineless, virgin, coward. He is so hung up on the glory days that he sees his friends through rose tented glasses. I think being stuck with some of his guildmates is making him realize that to some degree.
Lucifer is a total ass. it may sound like I'm picking in Lucifer, but he is actually by far my favorite of the main characters. HeroHero is beyond lame. Who would choose to play as a blob monster? The other guy left a really bad taste in my mouth when he yelled at children. Momonga is a spineless, virgin, coward. He is so hung up on the glory days that he sees his friends through rose tented glasses. I think being stuck with some of his guildmates is making him realize that to some degree.
11/11/2023 c3 Curclark
As main character Momonga truly leaves a lot to be desired. However, I feel like Luicifer is abusive and is more likely to pull a betrayal than the NPCs. I feel a lot of pity for poor Momonga and not just because he's a hopeless virgin.
As main character Momonga truly leaves a lot to be desired. However, I feel like Luicifer is abusive and is more likely to pull a betrayal than the NPCs. I feel a lot of pity for poor Momonga and not just because he's a hopeless virgin.
7/29/2022 c3 
1nantono
I have a bad feeling about Lucifer, he doesn't care about his son from outside, he plays an online game despite being very old, etc...maybe he has a grudge and wants to get out everything he has repressed.
1nantonoI have a bad feeling about Lucifer, he doesn't care about his son from outside, he plays an online game despite being very old, etc...maybe he has a grudge and wants to get out everything he has repressed.
7/29/2022 c2 nantono
Lucifer has the dictator syndrome, I think it is due to his new powers that believe him to be omnipotent...probably a villain.
Lucifer has the dictator syndrome, I think it is due to his new powers that believe him to be omnipotent...probably a villain.
7/18/2022 c5 Jay
Lucifer : *brutally murders a 10 year old girl*
Ainz : "Oh no I accidentally killed someone due to my own stupidity. I hope my friends won't think of me as a monster huhuhu"
Dropped. Canon Ainz stood up against Ulbert, lead the AOG to 9th rank globally, and singlehandedly maintained and defended the guild for several years.
Your Ainz is pushover who allowed himself to be gaslighted hard by some guy who just dropped by and got in for the ride.
Like, his backstory isn't even that different compared to the canon but why is your Ainz a huge loser?
Lucifer : *brutally murders a 10 year old girl*
Ainz : "Oh no I accidentally killed someone due to my own stupidity. I hope my friends won't think of me as a monster huhuhu"
Dropped. Canon Ainz stood up against Ulbert, lead the AOG to 9th rank globally, and singlehandedly maintained and defended the guild for several years.
Your Ainz is pushover who allowed himself to be gaslighted hard by some guy who just dropped by and got in for the ride.
Like, his backstory isn't even that different compared to the canon but why is your Ainz a huge loser?
2/17/2022 c1 jarjarhead
moar? the premise is gud. but u aint posting for a long time. I wish you do so. keepsafe
moar? the premise is gud. but u aint posting for a long time. I wish you do so. keepsafe
11/29/2021 c1 3binyhun
I really love this fic, thank you for your hard work. I don’t have much hopes for continuation after such a long hiatus, but it would be amazing if you managed to continue. The story has so much potential.
3binyhunI really love this fic, thank you for your hard work. I don’t have much hopes for continuation after such a long hiatus, but it would be amazing if you managed to continue. The story has so much potential.
10/10/2021 c6 2KingdomDone
Having touch me in this story would've been interesting. He would probably everything everyone was doing.
2KingdomDoneHaving touch me in this story would've been interesting. He would probably everything everyone was doing.
8/17/2021 c4 Victor Bello
damn, he killed her?
damn, he killed her?
12/4/2020 c12 2Nathaniel999
I was so absorbed in this and now Im angry. HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME ON THE EDGE! lol
I love the reaction to Clementine. I wanted to see where that was going...
2Nathaniel999I was so absorbed in this and now Im angry. HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME ON THE EDGE! lol
I love the reaction to Clementine. I wanted to see where that was going...