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3/5/2017 c9 37137
Great chapter as usual. I'm liking the portrayal of the characters; even though three of the main cast are OCs, they feel very well defined, and I could totally imagine them being part of canon. The parts where you had Nigun be smart enough to catch some things but unable to spot others was well done. Really looking forward to seeing more of Lucifer's build, since not only is he probably my favorite character, but also has so far my favorite abilities. I hope you give more physical descriptions of characters, because they're really well done; I absolutely loved the way you described the Gilded Devil a few chapters ago. Does the whole revival thing mean Nemi and Emu are back, too? If so, that might be interesting, especially as it would go to show that even if nothing in this world threatens the AOGs, that just means the biggest threat is themselves, which I think would be an awesome theme for the story. Speaking of, I also like that they're already displaying signs of their inhumanity. The only thing I didn't like is just a bit of grammar: I've noticed you occasionally use the same unique word twice in one sentence, as you did once in this chapter with the word 'finally'. Happy you updated, and even happier that you're planning on increasing your pace (something I need to work on as a writer, too).
3/5/2017 c9 1Lobisomen616
As always, the chapter was brilliant and completely worth the wait. I think Lucifer has become my favorite character in this story. He's an evil, conniving bastard, and I can't help but love him for it.

Can't wait to see what you come up with for volume two. Until then.
3/5/2017 c9 pwashington
Glory be to ainz ooal gown I like the idea of them forming a cult to spread there influence there disciples fanatically loyal to the Supreme beings willing to kill and die for them in got the idea from the overlord fanfic gods fall momongas can take over the necromancy cult zuranon hero can make the the cult of endless hunger lucifer can make satanism it would give them cannon fodder for espionage assassination kidnapping or other tasks when they can't get someone from nazerick to do it they can even start raising children ino the cult training them to be whatever is needed
3/5/2017 c9 JOOP-ROLL
Cool chapter. I like all those devious plans lucifer comes up with. He really lives up to the name.
1/10/2017 c8 IMaskelyne
I hunger for more
12/11/2016 c2 1Thorfaxdragonkin
Where can I find the bloody books so I can read them please help and great chapter
12/5/2016 c8 1ovan963
Why not "True Magic" as it is in essence true magic. I may be bias due to fate/ but Over rank magic is more a skill than orher magic but it is arguably more "magic" than the others as magic when first viewed is something mythical not something that can be associated with cost like ther tier magics.
11/4/2016 c8 3Judgment of the Arbiter
This story is damn good, I can't wait for the next update.
8/29/2016 c8 6S6D6
Personally, I don't give a sh!t about chapter length. The story is amazingly crafted and I would love to see more!

P.S. Maybe a bit more... romance... perhaps... ;3
7/13/2016 c8 vincentburns343
Lucifer sure is one high-and-mighty asshole, good job creating that character for him. Hopefully Herohero finally gets a bit of the spotlight soonish? He's had almost no screen-time so far, which makes me anxious to see what you'll do with him since you've created such vivid characters for Lucifer and Tigris-Euphrates.
That said, I feel you've been sweeping Momonga under the rug a bit much. I know he's supposed to come off humble and that he doubts himself, but those qualities are what makes him and incredible leader. He's the one who managed to hold together 41 oddball misfits with clashing personalities for years even after the charismatic Touch-Me gave up on trying to do so with only 30. His insecurities drive him to put maximum effort into the things he cares about, which is why a relatively small guild took one of the top 10 places in the servers, why he memorized the effects of over 700 spells to turn his weak joke/roleplaying character into both a PvP monster and something that could smooth-out and strengthen any party.
7/13/2016 c6 vincentburns343
In regards to Momonga's stats vs other players, his character would have been around mid-middle rank with all his gear. It was his ultra-rare class 'Eclipse' and his strategy skills that brought him to the mid-upper ranks of PvP, while he was considered one of the best party members available for PvE due to his unparalleled adaptability thanks to over 700 spells versus the standard maximum of 200 (300 with pay-to-win items) for other Lvl.100 mages.
7/12/2016 c8 Shin1gam1
Great work
7/6/2016 c1 Darth Hades
really liked how you made this story come to life! :) hope you update soon
7/3/2016 c3 3Jack vile Ripper
THIS. IS. AMAZING. AND. SUPERB.
7/2/2016 c8 8The Keeper of Worlds
Wow, so EVERYONE, even the sisters that got wasted early on are brought back?

This has played well:-)
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