for Last Remnants4/27/2016 c7 pwashington
I love the fluff you gave the gilded devil I am a suckered for immersion and fluffy description whats the fluff on the mother of oblivion it sounds Lovecraftian the only other eldritch abomination are momongas dark young of shub niggruth more Lovecraft monsters you also have some interesting undead what other types of monsters can you make and please add more depth to the floral guardians abilities in find them lacking albedo is a succubus she should have abilities to match
I love the fluff you gave the gilded devil I am a suckered for immersion and fluffy description whats the fluff on the mother of oblivion it sounds Lovecraftian the only other eldritch abomination are momongas dark young of shub niggruth more Lovecraft monsters you also have some interesting undead what other types of monsters can you make and please add more depth to the floral guardians abilities in find them lacking albedo is a succubus she should have abilities to match
4/27/2016 c7 
3Ashzaroth
Another fantastic chapter. I like how cautious you are making the charecters, and also like how you are handling the time scenes. Everything is slowly coming together. Lucifer remains my favorite charecter, and I would personally love to see more interactions between him and Shalltear. The fight was great, and I want wait to see how the four will react when they realize the 'strongest man' struggled aginst a lv35 npc. Hope the next chapter is out soon!
3AshzarothAnother fantastic chapter. I like how cautious you are making the charecters, and also like how you are handling the time scenes. Everything is slowly coming together. Lucifer remains my favorite charecter, and I would personally love to see more interactions between him and Shalltear. The fight was great, and I want wait to see how the four will react when they realize the 'strongest man' struggled aginst a lv35 npc. Hope the next chapter is out soon!
4/12/2016 c6 16ahsoei
It's a good story, I'll follow this because I'm looking forward for the twist, but I can't believe that you killed those two sisters!
16ahsoeiIt's a good story, I'll follow this because I'm looking forward for the twist, but I can't believe that you killed those two sisters!
3/28/2016 c6 3T51b Moridin
I'd be curious to see someone get Momonga a stat respec so he can make himself and his build done well. As I"m sure he has a lot of wasted levels and the like.
3T51b MoridinI'd be curious to see someone get Momonga a stat respec so he can make himself and his build done well. As I"m sure he has a lot of wasted levels and the like.
3/26/2016 c5 Guest
I. Loved. The things. You've done.
It was genius, and beautifully written with that.
I. Loved. The things. You've done.
It was genius, and beautifully written with that.
3/26/2016 c4 Momonga ainz
I love this chapter and have been waiting for this though i kind of want momonga to be more badass.
I love this chapter and have been waiting for this though i kind of want momonga to be more badass.
3/27/2016 c5 T51b Moridin
Heh~. I'm rather excited about the darker turn things seem to be taking. In fact I'm almost hoping the group of four succumb to their monstrous species and begin an age of darkness the likes of which no one has ever seen before and will never be seen again...and that's mostly because it will never end.
Heh~. I'm rather excited about the darker turn things seem to be taking. In fact I'm almost hoping the group of four succumb to their monstrous species and begin an age of darkness the likes of which no one has ever seen before and will never be seen again...and that's mostly because it will never end.
3/27/2016 c4 T51b Moridin
Hm. It seems Luci Fer-san's form has insighted ruthelessness, cruelty, and outright indifference in his behavior. He might not have even realized it yet that his behavior is much more callous than the usual. While the Evil Djinni has at least noted and is rather fearful of his future behavior. Momonga I think is the most dangerous long term though. While the others have the potential for bad personality changes, Momonga has the capacity to make anything justified in his eyes and will do anything to accomplish his goal even if it means genocide. Also, as an undead overlord with the eclipse set up, he has the capacity to realize how to become truly immortal to the extent of never being able to die no matter what. Such is the power of the Anti-life build.
Hm. It seems Luci Fer-san's form has insighted ruthelessness, cruelty, and outright indifference in his behavior. He might not have even realized it yet that his behavior is much more callous than the usual. While the Evil Djinni has at least noted and is rather fearful of his future behavior. Momonga I think is the most dangerous long term though. While the others have the potential for bad personality changes, Momonga has the capacity to make anything justified in his eyes and will do anything to accomplish his goal even if it means genocide. Also, as an undead overlord with the eclipse set up, he has the capacity to realize how to become truly immortal to the extent of never being able to die no matter what. Such is the power of the Anti-life build.
3/27/2016 c3 T51b Moridin
I note that Momonga actually has pretty low numbers in comparison to others. He was rated at around 600 something ish. Needs training.
I note that Momonga actually has pretty low numbers in comparison to others. He was rated at around 600 something ish. Needs training.
3/27/2016 c2 T51b Moridin
Very interesting. Though I'll be the first one who hopes they learn that they can in essence train themselves in more skills and even technically gain further levels past what they have. Think about it, if there are no more restrictions on so much then why would their be a level cap anymore right? :C Meaning they all could become even more powerful in their specialties and even become well rounded. Though Momonga does have that badass warrior mode spell.
Very interesting. Though I'll be the first one who hopes they learn that they can in essence train themselves in more skills and even technically gain further levels past what they have. Think about it, if there are no more restrictions on so much then why would their be a level cap anymore right? :C Meaning they all could become even more powerful in their specialties and even become well rounded. Though Momonga does have that badass warrior mode spell.
3/27/2016 c1 T51b Moridin
Are you possibly going to continue your Naruto story later? I'm rather inclined to read it but haven't picked it up as of yet due to the update date being so far back. Its really a small peeve of mine and I do try to read older stories but hesitate on ones that haven't been updated in a while.
Are you possibly going to continue your Naruto story later? I'm rather inclined to read it but haven't picked it up as of yet due to the update date being so far back. Its really a small peeve of mine and I do try to read older stories but hesitate on ones that haven't been updated in a while.