for Last Remnants2/24/2016 c6 Maryz Fayner
Nice chapter. Tigris hanging up on LuciFer was great.
I know Momonga got the dryad to relocate to Nazarick and grow food there, and all floor guardians fought the treant. You changed it in a way I'm mostly OK with.
I wonder what happened while he was gone, can't wait for next chapter.
Nice chapter. Tigris hanging up on LuciFer was great.
I know Momonga got the dryad to relocate to Nazarick and grow food there, and all floor guardians fought the treant. You changed it in a way I'm mostly OK with.
I wonder what happened while he was gone, can't wait for next chapter.
2/24/2016 c5 Maryz Fayner
Hmmm... Enri is dead. I did not expect that. I thought you will have Momonga resurrect her and her sister to test it, as in the original novel he erased the fact that he is a Lich from her mind. So he could potentially erase her memory after resurrection. their guilt over unintentionally killing the girls would be reasonable motivation to do it, I think.
I like how LuciFer is gathering information. I don't like that Momonga let some knights survive. He is not that nice.
Enri's point of view is well done. The knight's also.
I adore Herohero's part. I suppose the three rulers of the forest are being dealt with, along with ancient treant.
Hmmm... Enri is dead. I did not expect that. I thought you will have Momonga resurrect her and her sister to test it, as in the original novel he erased the fact that he is a Lich from her mind. So he could potentially erase her memory after resurrection. their guilt over unintentionally killing the girls would be reasonable motivation to do it, I think.
I like how LuciFer is gathering information. I don't like that Momonga let some knights survive. He is not that nice.
Enri's point of view is well done. The knight's also.
I adore Herohero's part. I suppose the three rulers of the forest are being dealt with, along with ancient treant.
2/24/2016 c4 Maryz Fayner
Delightful chapter. We get the viewpoint of two characters that were rather enigmatic until now, and events are progressing. As much as I'd like to deny it, LuciFer is not wrong about Momonga's personality.
The fact they are all unageing is something I was disappointed Momonga in original Overlord light novels did not consider. If he wanted to conquer the world he has all the time he needs.
Momonga treasures NPCs of Nazarik as mementos of his missing firends so he does not want to harm them. LuciFer obviously does not share his viewpoint. I wonder if it will create conflict between them. After all Momonga claimed several times they did not get along.
Experiments with magic and scrying are under way. I can't wait what happens next.
Delightful chapter. We get the viewpoint of two characters that were rather enigmatic until now, and events are progressing. As much as I'd like to deny it, LuciFer is not wrong about Momonga's personality.
The fact they are all unageing is something I was disappointed Momonga in original Overlord light novels did not consider. If he wanted to conquer the world he has all the time he needs.
Momonga treasures NPCs of Nazarik as mementos of his missing firends so he does not want to harm them. LuciFer obviously does not share his viewpoint. I wonder if it will create conflict between them. After all Momonga claimed several times they did not get along.
Experiments with magic and scrying are under way. I can't wait what happens next.
2/24/2016 c3 Maryz Fayner
Lich is technically a necromancer who raised himself from the dead. Elder Lich is a Lich that commands other Liches. So as Momonga is Overlord I think he qualifies as such. It's mentioned in light novels that Momonga started as Skeleton and Mage. As I understand it, he then specialized Mage into Necromancer and evolved his Skeleton in combination with it into Lich. If he was a warrior he would probably evolve into Death Knight or something like that. After that he could stay Lich but evolved into Elder Lich, possibly as he has over 5 levels in it, and after that into Overlord and later Eclipse. So I consider Elder Lich and Overlord to be one of stages of racial evolution, while Necromancer a job evolution and Eclipse as combination of both as it requires them both to access.
To sum it up I think a low level Lich, from levels 1 to 5 or 7 would be a Lich while around level 10 would be Elder Liches.
I agree with you on Magic Caster, it sounds clunky and all media I know use Spell Caster or Mage instead.
Tigris Euphrates gets character development. Nice. Brilliant of him, staying after the meet to spy on Guardians.
I wonder if LuciFer considered the fact that Shalltear is stuffing her chest. As someone who is wierded out by Japanese Loli fetish, I would be disappointed with her as partner. I like that he seems to know what he is doing, but I hope he wont just take control of guild and teaches Momonga leadership skills instead.
The discussion on staying where they are is great point. Momonga decided that pretty fast in original novels and it's nice to see them making that decision realistically.
This chapter is another great reed and I thank you for it.
Lich is technically a necromancer who raised himself from the dead. Elder Lich is a Lich that commands other Liches. So as Momonga is Overlord I think he qualifies as such. It's mentioned in light novels that Momonga started as Skeleton and Mage. As I understand it, he then specialized Mage into Necromancer and evolved his Skeleton in combination with it into Lich. If he was a warrior he would probably evolve into Death Knight or something like that. After that he could stay Lich but evolved into Elder Lich, possibly as he has over 5 levels in it, and after that into Overlord and later Eclipse. So I consider Elder Lich and Overlord to be one of stages of racial evolution, while Necromancer a job evolution and Eclipse as combination of both as it requires them both to access.
To sum it up I think a low level Lich, from levels 1 to 5 or 7 would be a Lich while around level 10 would be Elder Liches.
I agree with you on Magic Caster, it sounds clunky and all media I know use Spell Caster or Mage instead.
Tigris Euphrates gets character development. Nice. Brilliant of him, staying after the meet to spy on Guardians.
I wonder if LuciFer considered the fact that Shalltear is stuffing her chest. As someone who is wierded out by Japanese Loli fetish, I would be disappointed with her as partner. I like that he seems to know what he is doing, but I hope he wont just take control of guild and teaches Momonga leadership skills instead.
The discussion on staying where they are is great point. Momonga decided that pretty fast in original novels and it's nice to see them making that decision realistically.
This chapter is another great reed and I thank you for it.
2/24/2016 c2 Maryz Fayner
I really like where you are going with this.
LuciFer seems to be becoming the brains behind the operation. I'd like to see Momonga get more active, as he is not stupid, just uncertain and second guessing himself too often. And unwilling to admit he made a mistake to his subordinates which limits his options later. Tigris Euphrates seems to be solid dependable partner. Maybe having him and others around will help Momonga be the Guildleader he can be rather than one he has to be.
The racial trouble you gave Herohero are pure genius. Both as story element, comedic gold and background info. Which ties in to players discovering their racial traits now actually work.
I thought Albedo bursting in despite direct orders was a bit out of character for her. Even if it moved the events of plot forward rather well.
Overall, this was another well-written chapter.
I really like where you are going with this.
LuciFer seems to be becoming the brains behind the operation. I'd like to see Momonga get more active, as he is not stupid, just uncertain and second guessing himself too often. And unwilling to admit he made a mistake to his subordinates which limits his options later. Tigris Euphrates seems to be solid dependable partner. Maybe having him and others around will help Momonga be the Guildleader he can be rather than one he has to be.
The racial trouble you gave Herohero are pure genius. Both as story element, comedic gold and background info. Which ties in to players discovering their racial traits now actually work.
I thought Albedo bursting in despite direct orders was a bit out of character for her. Even if it moved the events of plot forward rather well.
Overall, this was another well-written chapter.
2/24/2016 c1 Maryz Fayner
Well flowing and detailed writing. Dialogue that make sense and characters act with reason and in-setting logic. You follow cannon as much as your story allows and that is always great to have in a fanfic.
You have made even Luci*Fer likeable and the scene with getting girlfriends was hilarious. I was worried that with more people there Momonga changing Albedo's settings would feel like it was wrestled in, but it actually felt very natural. Too bad Herohero didn't ask for Solution as girlfriend they are both slimes after all.
This is very nice start and I feel a lot of potential in this work. I'll be reviewing each chapter separately to be thorough.
Thank you for a good read.
Well flowing and detailed writing. Dialogue that make sense and characters act with reason and in-setting logic. You follow cannon as much as your story allows and that is always great to have in a fanfic.
You have made even Luci*Fer likeable and the scene with getting girlfriends was hilarious. I was worried that with more people there Momonga changing Albedo's settings would feel like it was wrestled in, but it actually felt very natural. Too bad Herohero didn't ask for Solution as girlfriend they are both slimes after all.
This is very nice start and I feel a lot of potential in this work. I'll be reviewing each chapter separately to be thorough.
Thank you for a good read.
2/23/2016 c6 
3Pagemaster96
Great chapter, and great fight, looking forward to the next update. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely, Pagemaster
3Pagemaster96Great chapter, and great fight, looking forward to the next update. Keep up the good work!
Sincerely, Pagemaster
2/22/2016 c6 3Iamwhononofyouare
Tigris seriously didn't even bother to message the others during the waiting period? This guy needs a spanking, he's way too reckless.
3IamwhononofyouareTigris seriously didn't even bother to message the others during the waiting period? This guy needs a spanking, he's way too reckless.
2/22/2016 c6 4the lone soul
Nicely done, so one of them can use "za warudo", to be honest I didn't expected that, I would've pegged him for another class, well I will look forward to the next chapter, finally some Lucifer Moments :)
4the lone soulNicely done, so one of them can use "za warudo", to be honest I didn't expected that, I would've pegged him for another class, well I will look forward to the next chapter, finally some Lucifer Moments :)
2/21/2016 c6 20Zaru
In going to assume that Mage or something is under others given the Fireball spell he used.
And a Level 80ish monster seen here in the New World! That's a very rare sight indeed! We don't see much in the way of high level toons and mobs and characters in the New World, so this enemy mob being seen is refreshing.
And Tigris acting awkward with praise is neat. He isn't going to ham it up like Lucifer or Momonga I feel, but rather give short answers in regards to praise but when it comes to combat he can give a lecture.
And the legend of Ainz Ooal Gown grows!
20ZaruIn going to assume that Mage or something is under others given the Fireball spell he used.
And a Level 80ish monster seen here in the New World! That's a very rare sight indeed! We don't see much in the way of high level toons and mobs and characters in the New World, so this enemy mob being seen is refreshing.
And Tigris acting awkward with praise is neat. He isn't going to ham it up like Lucifer or Momonga I feel, but rather give short answers in regards to praise but when it comes to combat he can give a lecture.
And the legend of Ainz Ooal Gown grows!
2/21/2016 c6 Alfonse08
Nice to see some good action in this one, hope to see more like it in the future.
Nice to see some good action in this one, hope to see more like it in the future.
2/21/2016 c6 Nosy John
I wouldn't say overpowered when Mister "I learned two or three times the spell limits and have super mana" is around.
Also, interesting chapter, which I liked it even more because a certain immoral prick wasn't an active participant. Momonga at least acted more amoral than immoral, but Luci here seems to dick around for the sake of it. He probably would have enslaved the little dryad.
Despite his alignment Tigris strikes me as more of a Chaotic Neutral and a con-artist/trickester type. He might have become a bit of a sadist due to his race and have no qualms about robbing people (that's mark of your average RPG protagonist after all) but he does not go out of his way to burn people's house for sh!t&giggle... or does not do that at every turn.
I wouldn't say overpowered when Mister "I learned two or three times the spell limits and have super mana" is around.
Also, interesting chapter, which I liked it even more because a certain immoral prick wasn't an active participant. Momonga at least acted more amoral than immoral, but Luci here seems to dick around for the sake of it. He probably would have enslaved the little dryad.
Despite his alignment Tigris strikes me as more of a Chaotic Neutral and a con-artist/trickester type. He might have become a bit of a sadist due to his race and have no qualms about robbing people (that's mark of your average RPG protagonist after all) but he does not go out of his way to burn people's house for sh!t&giggle... or does not do that at every turn.