for Last Remnants12/9/2015 c3 
4the lone soul
heee, not bad someone actually gone the multi player route, this is going to be good, however, I cant really picture the two OCs in my mind, Lucifer in the direction like Lucemon holy mode, other then that I agree with you I guess we wont see Overlord till 2020, well only solution would be the open plot holes. One could fill these holes and maybe give it a proper ending.
Good Job so far )
4the lone soulheee, not bad someone actually gone the multi player route, this is going to be good, however, I cant really picture the two OCs in my mind, Lucifer in the direction like Lucemon holy mode, other then that I agree with you I guess we wont see Overlord till 2020, well only solution would be the open plot holes. One could fill these holes and maybe give it a proper ending.
Good Job so far )
12/8/2015 c3 1LightningDestroyer
I think you've gotted right about the Lich thing more or less, but, in low levels Lich isn't considered Skeleton Mage? Maybe is wrong what im going to say, but, never as been cleared much things about the game itself in the LN...
I always believed that the way to refer to Momonga is for the highest Racial trait in this sense :
Skeleton MageElder lichOverlord. I don't know if you get what im triying to say lol.
Or maybe is only Elder Lich because yes...
And other thing that is still bothering me, Tigris still have the World Item that he take away from Albedo?
Or Momonga get the Item in the Treasury in Out of screen?
I like this very much and looking forward to more.
Saludaciones.
1LightningDestroyerI think you've gotted right about the Lich thing more or less, but, in low levels Lich isn't considered Skeleton Mage? Maybe is wrong what im going to say, but, never as been cleared much things about the game itself in the LN...
I always believed that the way to refer to Momonga is for the highest Racial trait in this sense :
Skeleton MageElder lichOverlord. I don't know if you get what im triying to say lol.
Or maybe is only Elder Lich because yes...
And other thing that is still bothering me, Tigris still have the World Item that he take away from Albedo?
Or Momonga get the Item in the Treasury in Out of screen?
I like this very much and looking forward to more.
Saludaciones.
12/4/2015 c3 Guest
i am totally hooked in this story but my god i can't stand lucifer, tigris is something of an ass too. seriously someone needs to smack those two. anyway this story is really good, i really hope to see some more soon
i am totally hooked in this story but my god i can't stand lucifer, tigris is something of an ass too. seriously someone needs to smack those two. anyway this story is really good, i really hope to see some more soon
12/2/2015 c3 3Jack of Blade's Daughter
In all honesty I'm conflicted. I was a great fan of your previous fic Kage Naruto, but you never finished it. And when I found this series and then looked up and found your fic of it I now worry that the same might happen here. You always write such incredible, lengthy stories but I never saw an end. That and for some reason I just can't bring myself to like Lucifer, idk why.
But if you can, stick with it. You've been one the first authors I ever read fan fiction from, I'd hate to have to see this never develop properly.
3Jack of Blade's DaughterIn all honesty I'm conflicted. I was a great fan of your previous fic Kage Naruto, but you never finished it. And when I found this series and then looked up and found your fic of it I now worry that the same might happen here. You always write such incredible, lengthy stories but I never saw an end. That and for some reason I just can't bring myself to like Lucifer, idk why.
But if you can, stick with it. You've been one the first authors I ever read fan fiction from, I'd hate to have to see this never develop properly.
12/2/2015 c3 4MatthewC
Interesting take on an Overlord story. I like how you've obviously gone back through the light novels and taken notes on all the little canon details.
I think Lucifer is in danger of coming across as a little too much of an author-insert, what with taking charge and telling everybody what to do with his 'sensible' suggestions. The fact that he's announced his intentions to bang Shalltear makes it even more awkward if he smacks of author avatar. It would be nice to see some pushback from the other three and not just have him steamroll everybody. My impressions so far:
Lucifer - Bossy, thinks he's the smartest guy in the room, feels no shame at exploiting anyone in his way. Also, his remark about a boss needing to know he can do his subordinate's jobs is actually a sign of a bad boss. A good boss needs to understand that practicing leadership skills means he has no time to practice the technical skills of his subordinates. Hoping someone calls him on that.
Tigris - More insecure than even Monmonga, meaning that he acts like an even bigger bully to cover it up. Probably does genuinely care about his guildmates.
Momonga - As per canon, but likely to get annoyed if his precious NPCs aren't treated with sufficient respect by his guildmates.
Herohero - The biggest cypher so far, as he's been mostly occupied figuring out how to be a slime. However, I am genuinely wondering what his name portends. Does he actually want to be a hero? This is clearly a guy with an overdeveloped sense of responsibility (which is why he lets himself be overworked), and it would be funny if the most inhuman of them is the one concerned with morality.
4MatthewCInteresting take on an Overlord story. I like how you've obviously gone back through the light novels and taken notes on all the little canon details.
I think Lucifer is in danger of coming across as a little too much of an author-insert, what with taking charge and telling everybody what to do with his 'sensible' suggestions. The fact that he's announced his intentions to bang Shalltear makes it even more awkward if he smacks of author avatar. It would be nice to see some pushback from the other three and not just have him steamroll everybody. My impressions so far:
Lucifer - Bossy, thinks he's the smartest guy in the room, feels no shame at exploiting anyone in his way. Also, his remark about a boss needing to know he can do his subordinate's jobs is actually a sign of a bad boss. A good boss needs to understand that practicing leadership skills means he has no time to practice the technical skills of his subordinates. Hoping someone calls him on that.
Tigris - More insecure than even Monmonga, meaning that he acts like an even bigger bully to cover it up. Probably does genuinely care about his guildmates.
Momonga - As per canon, but likely to get annoyed if his precious NPCs aren't treated with sufficient respect by his guildmates.
Herohero - The biggest cypher so far, as he's been mostly occupied figuring out how to be a slime. However, I am genuinely wondering what his name portends. Does he actually want to be a hero? This is clearly a guy with an overdeveloped sense of responsibility (which is why he lets himself be overworked), and it would be funny if the most inhuman of them is the one concerned with morality.
11/30/2015 c3 No Accountsry
Best fic ever!
Best fic ever!
11/29/2015 c3 tred
this shit is sooo good!
this shit is sooo good!
11/29/2015 c3 Anonym
Well the story is... convincing
Like the kind that most probably would happen if four people are put into the situation of the story.
I must say that I kinda feel Momonga is being blind-sided by Luci-Fer; his role is becoming less prominent.
I like Luci-Fer way of thinking that there's more fish in the ocean, he certainly know his ways with women. Hopefully that would give interesting development in romance section, since the way I see it in the Anime, Momonga is impotent lol. (I mean seriously, he is the overlord, why would he has to refrain himself so much anyway?)
Looking forward for your next update
Well the story is... convincing
Like the kind that most probably would happen if four people are put into the situation of the story.
I must say that I kinda feel Momonga is being blind-sided by Luci-Fer; his role is becoming less prominent.
I like Luci-Fer way of thinking that there's more fish in the ocean, he certainly know his ways with women. Hopefully that would give interesting development in romance section, since the way I see it in the Anime, Momonga is impotent lol. (I mean seriously, he is the overlord, why would he has to refrain himself so much anyway?)
Looking forward for your next update
11/27/2015 c1 Guest
Another great chap!
Another great chap!
11/27/2015 c3 Erin
Good chapter , it was really long which I like and I hate lucifer.
Good chapter , it was really long which I like and I hate lucifer.
11/27/2015 c3 astral trinity
Ive read the novel and it's pretty cool. most of the monsters are evil which i find to be cool how they are like that and can remember things from the game. the only thing that gets me is the mc. will world domination still be happening.
Ive read the novel and it's pretty cool. most of the monsters are evil which i find to be cool how they are like that and can remember things from the game. the only thing that gets me is the mc. will world domination still be happening.
11/28/2015 c3 3Iamwhononofyouare
Rather than the guardians revolting, they need to worry more about each other. Thanks for the chapter.
3IamwhononofyouareRather than the guardians revolting, they need to worry more about each other. Thanks for the chapter.
11/28/2015 c3 Shirosaki Kizuro
The things that Lucifer done, will probably the same thing I will do in real life. Love ur story, please continue
The things that Lucifer done, will probably the same thing I will do in real life. Love ur story, please continue