for Last Remnants7/1/2018 c1 superdart
Erm... Luci Fer was known to be a troublemaker and Momonga did not like him because of said reason, so you making him act in another way (along with the fact that his and tigris's appearances are uknown) is like making a OC.
It is the same with Tigris we do not know if tigris is male or not same with Luci Fer, we do not know Tigris appearance as I mentioned however he was known to be a scout and thief so the tall stature does not fit with his class description.
Congratulations, you messed up because of your lack of information.
Erm... Luci Fer was known to be a troublemaker and Momonga did not like him because of said reason, so you making him act in another way (along with the fact that his and tigris's appearances are uknown) is like making a OC.
It is the same with Tigris we do not know if tigris is male or not same with Luci Fer, we do not know Tigris appearance as I mentioned however he was known to be a scout and thief so the tall stature does not fit with his class description.
Congratulations, you messed up because of your lack of information.
5/14/2018 c3 Dragon0905
Due note at the beginning of chapter 3, I just thought I'd throw this out there. Now I've read the manga to a point and seen the first two seasons of the anime. I admit to not having read the light novels at all. By this point I think you should have seen the anime or read the manga. But I may be wrong. Anyway, the point is that when cacitus(?) Was sent to destroy the lizard men, in the back there was a spell castor, looked like a thin mage with sunken cheeks and such. That is a standard lich. I sorcerer (typically necromancer) that has died and is raised from the dead, can become a lich. An elder lich is basically a supper up version of this. Typically much older and much more powerful. Thus the title "elder lich". Kinda like the difference between a vampire and a vampire lord. Apprentice and master. God and elder God. Wolf and dire wolf.
Due note at the beginning of chapter 3, I just thought I'd throw this out there. Now I've read the manga to a point and seen the first two seasons of the anime. I admit to not having read the light novels at all. By this point I think you should have seen the anime or read the manga. But I may be wrong. Anyway, the point is that when cacitus(?) Was sent to destroy the lizard men, in the back there was a spell castor, looked like a thin mage with sunken cheeks and such. That is a standard lich. I sorcerer (typically necromancer) that has died and is raised from the dead, can become a lich. An elder lich is basically a supper up version of this. Typically much older and much more powerful. Thus the title "elder lich". Kinda like the difference between a vampire and a vampire lord. Apprentice and master. God and elder God. Wolf and dire wolf.
4/19/2018 c12 Guest
I'm loving this story, it's nice to see the juxtaposition of the characters and their avatar species and the changes that has on their psyche. I'm really excited to see where you go from here! I also love how you're keeping with the original guild theology being against humans, it gives the whole story a depth of realism, they're no longer human, why would they think like humans anymore with this being their new reality? Plus even that old spark of humanity would start to go as they acclimate to the changes, both mental and physical, that come with their new reality. Overall I'm just trying to say I adore this story and can't wait to read more!
I'm loving this story, it's nice to see the juxtaposition of the characters and their avatar species and the changes that has on their psyche. I'm really excited to see where you go from here! I also love how you're keeping with the original guild theology being against humans, it gives the whole story a depth of realism, they're no longer human, why would they think like humans anymore with this being their new reality? Plus even that old spark of humanity would start to go as they acclimate to the changes, both mental and physical, that come with their new reality. Overall I'm just trying to say I adore this story and can't wait to read more!
4/6/2018 c5 lieutenant Orion Zete
yeah this story suck at this point may as well turn this into a warhammer fantasy story cause this just turn dark like the warhammer series so I am bailout of this sucky story
yeah this story suck at this point may as well turn this into a warhammer fantasy story cause this just turn dark like the warhammer series so I am bailout of this sucky story
3/24/2018 c12 
4Greatazuredragon
Nice story so far. I like how all the small changes are already snowballing into greater changes.
Nice work, keep it up.
4GreatazuredragonNice story so far. I like how all the small changes are already snowballing into greater changes.
Nice work, keep it up.
3/10/2018 c1 Diamondfiend
Holy crap, the guest reviewer below me is one hell of a salty sailor. Don't listen to what he's saying, the way you introduce perspectives of other characters into the story is actually done really well, and makes them believable characters, especially with one of the prerequisites being that every member of the guild has to have a job. They are written in a way that seems pretty consistent with the style of the original, just with more guild members to work with (and I say this after having just finished volume 12 of the LN). Keep up the good work, I daresay this is the most well written Overlord (light novel) fic on this site.
Holy crap, the guest reviewer below me is one hell of a salty sailor. Don't listen to what he's saying, the way you introduce perspectives of other characters into the story is actually done really well, and makes them believable characters, especially with one of the prerequisites being that every member of the guild has to have a job. They are written in a way that seems pretty consistent with the style of the original, just with more guild members to work with (and I say this after having just finished volume 12 of the LN). Keep up the good work, I daresay this is the most well written Overlord (light novel) fic on this site.
3/3/2018 c5 did not enjoy it
chap 5: you freaking bastard, you really need some help! i thought the characters were bad, but they aren't bad, your the problem! you literally made ainz and lucifer killed those two sister, not only that but you made tigris burned a bunch of goblin baby, even though you didn't mention it! GET SOME FREAKING HELP! can't believe i already hate this fanfic the moment i read chap 5. you know, i thought this was gonna be a good fanfic. I was hoping for funny moments in this story with some exciting moment. But all i see is that you made some overpowered character that doesn't give a shit when they kill 2 innocent sister, heck your character not human anymore, only reason ainz so popular is because he overpowered and he human, but you freakin turn him into some overpowered monster. I HOPE THE REST OF YOUR CHAPTER AREN'T GONNA SHIT ON YOUR CHAPTER FOR ME, BECAUSE I LOVE THIS FANFIC, ONLY PROBLEM IS YOU, YOU WANT TO MAKE THIS FANFIC DARK. OVERLORD ISN'T THAT DARK. I DON'T SEE A SINGLE FUNNY MOMENT! want better oppinion, than quit making this dark, and make it exciting.
chap 5: you freaking bastard, you really need some help! i thought the characters were bad, but they aren't bad, your the problem! you literally made ainz and lucifer killed those two sister, not only that but you made tigris burned a bunch of goblin baby, even though you didn't mention it! GET SOME FREAKING HELP! can't believe i already hate this fanfic the moment i read chap 5. you know, i thought this was gonna be a good fanfic. I was hoping for funny moments in this story with some exciting moment. But all i see is that you made some overpowered character that doesn't give a shit when they kill 2 innocent sister, heck your character not human anymore, only reason ainz so popular is because he overpowered and he human, but you freakin turn him into some overpowered monster. I HOPE THE REST OF YOUR CHAPTER AREN'T GONNA SHIT ON YOUR CHAPTER FOR ME, BECAUSE I LOVE THIS FANFIC, ONLY PROBLEM IS YOU, YOU WANT TO MAKE THIS FANFIC DARK. OVERLORD ISN'T THAT DARK. I DON'T SEE A SINGLE FUNNY MOMENT! want better oppinion, than quit making this dark, and make it exciting.
3/3/2018 c1 LoL
yes, i finally find another great fanfic with alot words to read, hope the typer doesn't quit typing and leave it only 1% complete.
yes, i finally find another great fanfic with alot words to read, hope the typer doesn't quit typing and leave it only 1% complete.
2/11/2018 c1 2Hercules8
This is an interesting story! I really like the Overlord anime, so finding good fanfic stories about Overlord is really cool. Keep up the great work, I am looking forward to the next chapter! :D
2Hercules8This is an interesting story! I really like the Overlord anime, so finding good fanfic stories about Overlord is really cool. Keep up the great work, I am looking forward to the next chapter! :D
2/7/2018 c12 Unca Bob
Alright well despite a little lingering misgiving over Momonga I've really enjoyed what you've got here. You've put a lot of thought into this work and it's clearly paid off. I hope that life and inspiration are kind, and more of this great work comes soon.
Alright well despite a little lingering misgiving over Momonga I've really enjoyed what you've got here. You've put a lot of thought into this work and it's clearly paid off. I hope that life and inspiration are kind, and more of this great work comes soon.
2/7/2018 c10 Unca Bob
Hmmm, well this chapter does mollify most of my issues with Momonga. That said I still think he's a little too timid with his companions. Speaking as someone who's worked with children for the past 5 years, sometimes you do just have to put the metaphorical boot down, and I don't think Momonga's experience as Guildmaster would have given him a different lesson. Sometimes you just gotta wrangle your friends.
Hmmm, well this chapter does mollify most of my issues with Momonga. That said I still think he's a little too timid with his companions. Speaking as someone who's worked with children for the past 5 years, sometimes you do just have to put the metaphorical boot down, and I don't think Momonga's experience as Guildmaster would have given him a different lesson. Sometimes you just gotta wrangle your friends.