
2/7/2018 c7 Unca Bob
I do like the Gilded Devil, although I question giving it a 7th tier spell.
That said I've got a bit of a problem with how Momonga is portrayed here. So to quote Lucifer, he's acting 'cowardly', which just isn't the case in the LN. He's very cautious, sure, but not cowardly. In the early novels Momonga's biggest focus is information gathering and it's not until he gets the scare with Shaltear and the World Item that he really ramps up the caution.
I also question how much Lucifer dominates the group. I understand that's his character, but I feel like Momonga (and the others too) is just letting himself be walked over. For someone that spent years coordinating a pack of 41 people that just feels off. Lucifer isn't Albedo or Demiurge with their vast intellect, he's Momonga's asshole friend.
I do like the Gilded Devil, although I question giving it a 7th tier spell.
That said I've got a bit of a problem with how Momonga is portrayed here. So to quote Lucifer, he's acting 'cowardly', which just isn't the case in the LN. He's very cautious, sure, but not cowardly. In the early novels Momonga's biggest focus is information gathering and it's not until he gets the scare with Shaltear and the World Item that he really ramps up the caution.
I also question how much Lucifer dominates the group. I understand that's his character, but I feel like Momonga (and the others too) is just letting himself be walked over. For someone that spent years coordinating a pack of 41 people that just feels off. Lucifer isn't Albedo or Demiurge with their vast intellect, he's Momonga's asshole friend.
2/7/2018 c5 Unca Bob
Interesting choices here. Certainly darker than canon, with some interesting implications for the future. Also a stark example of just how much damage such powerful beings can do unintentionally.
Interesting choices here. Certainly darker than canon, with some interesting implications for the future. Also a stark example of just how much damage such powerful beings can do unintentionally.
1/15/2018 c12
20Zaru
It’s nicd to see Clementine get some good looks. Alongside Nabe she’s one helluva babe.
And I’m liking Tigris the most out of the four. He’s a schemer but he’s honest about his emotions. He can let his emotions get the better of him but try to cool off even if they get boiled up. Plus him trolling Adventurers surely must have had you smiling. Far more enjoyable than always hungry Herohero, that ass Lucifer and Momonga the stoic.

It’s nicd to see Clementine get some good looks. Alongside Nabe she’s one helluva babe.
And I’m liking Tigris the most out of the four. He’s a schemer but he’s honest about his emotions. He can let his emotions get the better of him but try to cool off even if they get boiled up. Plus him trolling Adventurers surely must have had you smiling. Far more enjoyable than always hungry Herohero, that ass Lucifer and Momonga the stoic.
1/12/2018 c12
3Halariel
O.M.G THAT WAS SOOO COOOOOOL! Pls update ASAP DUDE! I totally love your story!

O.M.G THAT WAS SOOO COOOOOOL! Pls update ASAP DUDE! I totally love your story!
1/2/2018 c12 ulttoanova
Damn if that last line wasn't ominous as hell I don't know what is. Good chapter can't wait till the next one.
Damn if that last line wasn't ominous as hell I don't know what is. Good chapter can't wait till the next one.
12/30/2017 c12 sonic
I liked the chapter!
I liked the chapter!
12/29/2017 c12
4PervySageChuck
Best line in this whole chapter...
"THAT BASTARD TOOK MY PANTIES!"
AH-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!
I have a newfound respect for the Great Tigris Euphrates! He is truly a man after my own depraved heart!
ALL HAIL THE STOLEN PANTIES!
He should have appeared before her while wearing them on his head in an imitation of Hentai Kamen to further infuriate the poor girl.

Best line in this whole chapter...
"THAT BASTARD TOOK MY PANTIES!"
AH-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!
I have a newfound respect for the Great Tigris Euphrates! He is truly a man after my own depraved heart!
ALL HAIL THE STOLEN PANTIES!
He should have appeared before her while wearing them on his head in an imitation of Hentai Kamen to further infuriate the poor girl.
12/28/2017 c12 dangerverse
Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one. Tigris Euphrates is such a fun character to read about. Looking forwards to a fucking epic plan for them to pull off. I wonder if Tigris Euphrates will start to collect women as well as treasures seeing as his passion for women has increased along with his passion for treasures.
Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one. Tigris Euphrates is such a fun character to read about. Looking forwards to a fucking epic plan for them to pull off. I wonder if Tigris Euphrates will start to collect women as well as treasures seeing as his passion for women has increased along with his passion for treasures.
12/28/2017 c12 pwashington
i hope they do there flavor text slash lore justice momonga as an overlord the highest undead a supreme lord of death his lore says he is in search for ultimate magic summoning ancient spirits to learn there knowledge collecting magical artifacts like divine and world class items for study or even traveling to other worlds and dimensions to better understand the Universe it's magic is far beyond mere mortals what mortals call advanced it calls parlor tricks.
Lucifer and archdevil a lord of hell prince of darkness seeking more souls more territories increasing its power to rule all they encounter. And tigres euphretes and efreti subspecies of djinn or genie aligned with the fire elementals master of the wish he can reshape reality as he pleases preform feats that boggle the mind
i hope they do there flavor text slash lore justice momonga as an overlord the highest undead a supreme lord of death his lore says he is in search for ultimate magic summoning ancient spirits to learn there knowledge collecting magical artifacts like divine and world class items for study or even traveling to other worlds and dimensions to better understand the Universe it's magic is far beyond mere mortals what mortals call advanced it calls parlor tricks.
Lucifer and archdevil a lord of hell prince of darkness seeking more souls more territories increasing its power to rule all they encounter. And tigres euphretes and efreti subspecies of djinn or genie aligned with the fire elementals master of the wish he can reshape reality as he pleases preform feats that boggle the mind
11/1/2017 c2 kewllewk
If you DO happen to be actually interested, putting a star into text is actually pretty easy. The secret is alt codes. If you hold down alt and type in a code on your keypad(specifically the keypad, as in the nine numbers off to the side of most keyboards. Doesn't work if you don't have one unless your keyboard takes it into account and provides specific settings for keypad inputs.), you'll get a corresponding character in the type set. They should be consistent across programs, so you just have to look up the alt code for a star and use that whenever you want one. Of course, you can also just go find one and copy paste it, but I assumed you were confused as to where people get them in the first place.
If you DO happen to be actually interested, putting a star into text is actually pretty easy. The secret is alt codes. If you hold down alt and type in a code on your keypad(specifically the keypad, as in the nine numbers off to the side of most keyboards. Doesn't work if you don't have one unless your keyboard takes it into account and provides specific settings for keypad inputs.), you'll get a corresponding character in the type set. They should be consistent across programs, so you just have to look up the alt code for a star and use that whenever you want one. Of course, you can also just go find one and copy paste it, but I assumed you were confused as to where people get them in the first place.
10/25/2017 c1 timothy.nguyen.73
I dont really mind Mary or Gary sue as long as its done right. Look at Batman. But after Lucifer killed that maid in chapter 4 for a poor reason. His attitude is just putting me off now.
I dont really mind Mary or Gary sue as long as its done right. Look at Batman. But after Lucifer killed that maid in chapter 4 for a poor reason. His attitude is just putting me off now.
10/14/2017 c11 shadow
I liked the chapter!
I liked the chapter!