for Legend of Gunpla: Trails in the Future11/24/2015 c2 
30kazikamikaze24
Hmm, an interesting tale that has me curious to see how our main character shall develop. Until next time, stay golden!
30kazikamikaze24Hmm, an interesting tale that has me curious to see how our main character shall develop. Until next time, stay golden!
11/16/2015 c2 1Natoko Mizuki
The slower pacing works very well with the somber tone of the chapter. This also explains why she pulled Nakoto into the hobby store with her.
1Natoko MizukiThe slower pacing works very well with the somber tone of the chapter. This also explains why she pulled Nakoto into the hobby store with her.
11/9/2015 c1 6Eldenwind
I will now admit to a lack of familiarity with GBF. But it's not that hard to grasp the references... Although, Sabrina "Sari" Sudac? Sounds a bit familiar... And, Hamon Prana Overbreak? Really? Finally, I don't think that's how the Biosensor works... although it IS magical bullshit so why not.
And then One Shot Man, the guy who trained so hard for so long that he went bald and one-shots gigantic enemies... subtle. Although how he himself training forever makes him able to one-shot things with his plastic remote controlled model...
Amusing enough, although if you're going to reference Ryusei's character then don't make a normal more quiet person do it, Ryusei is boisterous by nature, while this seems borderline split-personality.
Oh, and Goldfish actually have perfectly average short-term memory. The whole thing with them having bad short-term memory is a myth, much like with how elephants supposedly have good long-term memory.
But the story itself was pretty good though, so if you keep at it it might become something worth remembering.
6EldenwindI will now admit to a lack of familiarity with GBF. But it's not that hard to grasp the references... Although, Sabrina "Sari" Sudac? Sounds a bit familiar... And, Hamon Prana Overbreak? Really? Finally, I don't think that's how the Biosensor works... although it IS magical bullshit so why not.
And then One Shot Man, the guy who trained so hard for so long that he went bald and one-shots gigantic enemies... subtle. Although how he himself training forever makes him able to one-shot things with his plastic remote controlled model...
Amusing enough, although if you're going to reference Ryusei's character then don't make a normal more quiet person do it, Ryusei is boisterous by nature, while this seems borderline split-personality.
Oh, and Goldfish actually have perfectly average short-term memory. The whole thing with them having bad short-term memory is a myth, much like with how elephants supposedly have good long-term memory.
But the story itself was pretty good though, so if you keep at it it might become something worth remembering.
11/9/2015 c1 17Admiral Muffin
I just finished a six hour SC session and then this is the first thing I see when I check this section... The TITS fever is running wild.
Also, the first few text is literally from ZeroxSEED's Gundam Build Fighters - Colorful Rhapsody fic. Does he know about this or is this some sort of alternate account?
17Admiral MuffinI just finished a six hour SC session and then this is the first thing I see when I check this section... The TITS fever is running wild.
Also, the first few text is literally from ZeroxSEED's Gundam Build Fighters - Colorful Rhapsody fic. Does he know about this or is this some sort of alternate account?
11/9/2015 c1 1The Otaku Critic
Nice story and beginning. But that Chris guy is fucking OP. He does deserve the name Saitaman.
1The Otaku CriticNice story and beginning. But that Chris guy is fucking OP. He does deserve the name Saitaman.