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5/10/2016 c1 159stevieLUVSAlex
Totally perfect!
11/23/2015 c1 hrhdana
Perfect.
11/21/2015 c1 Droolia
This was cute. It feels like a filler piece to get us to the next scene on the show, which would've been her showing up in the diner with his shirt on. And the huge thing from lorelai was pretty funny too.
11/16/2015 c1 26junienmomo
Good job capturing one of the most annoying things about later Lorelai: her inability to commit.
In season 1 she had a handle on the men who hit on her and could shut them down in a second, demonstrating that she knew what she wanted and didn't want.
Here she's playing a game with her best friend at first, not considering the consequences for him if she runs. And she steps out a couple of times within a few minutes. Every pause, every backwards step, Lorelai is sowing the seeds of doubt in Luke's mind.
People remember these doubts and they feed on them. It's a moment like this one that could easily explain the disastrous run of their relationship.
Nice story. Thanks.

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