for The Enterprises Wizard1/10/2017 c6 
1The Phenomenal 0ne
Great to see a new Chapter in this Story. Just a hint. In the Beginning you wrote the Enterprise as a Constellation-Class Starship, but in the Films both old and new the Kirk-Enterprise is a Constitution-Class Starship. Was the reclassification of the Enterprise intended or just a slip-up?
1The Phenomenal 0neGreat to see a new Chapter in this Story. Just a hint. In the Beginning you wrote the Enterprise as a Constellation-Class Starship, but in the Films both old and new the Kirk-Enterprise is a Constitution-Class Starship. Was the reclassification of the Enterprise intended or just a slip-up?
12/22/2016 c5 1MrBogus
Damn, this is a good story. I like how this progresses, but I have to admit, the 2. 2009er Star Trek movie was a pale comparison to the original fate of Khan in the oríginal 2. movie. But well...
Are you going to update?
1MrBogusDamn, this is a good story. I like how this progresses, but I have to admit, the 2. 2009er Star Trek movie was a pale comparison to the original fate of Khan in the oríginal 2. movie. But well...
Are you going to update?
12/12/2016 c5 atymer
This is so very intriguing with Harry tapping into the 'other side' which is comforting, and yet determined to excel in the fleet and rebuild on Earth. I hope the author continues to be inspired by this story line and look forward to more.
As always my thoughts are also with three actors who have had such impact on my life. The characters they brought to life were held in affection, flaws and all, and but me more in touch with our humanity. I will miss them and remember.
This is so very intriguing with Harry tapping into the 'other side' which is comforting, and yet determined to excel in the fleet and rebuild on Earth. I hope the author continues to be inspired by this story line and look forward to more.
As always my thoughts are also with three actors who have had such impact on my life. The characters they brought to life were held in affection, flaws and all, and but me more in touch with our humanity. I will miss them and remember.
11/24/2016 c5 Guest
Please update this story soon its great
Please update this story soon its great
9/15/2016 c5 Rheya Ramsey
Very nice story so far! Looking forward to more.
I have only 1 small nit-pick: married names. For example, Ginny would be Molly Ginevra Weasley Potter, or, alternately, Molly Ginevra Potter, nee Weasley. Her husbands name would come after her name, because they're adding his name after their maiden name. Molly would be Molly Prewitt Weasley. Tonks would be Nymphadora Tonks Lupin. Although, most women don't use their maiden name after marriage, so it would just be Ginny Potter, Molly Weasley, etc.
I really hope you take this in the spirit of constructive criticism it is intended, because I really have enjoyed your story so far.
Very nice story so far! Looking forward to more.
I have only 1 small nit-pick: married names. For example, Ginny would be Molly Ginevra Weasley Potter, or, alternately, Molly Ginevra Potter, nee Weasley. Her husbands name would come after her name, because they're adding his name after their maiden name. Molly would be Molly Prewitt Weasley. Tonks would be Nymphadora Tonks Lupin. Although, most women don't use their maiden name after marriage, so it would just be Ginny Potter, Molly Weasley, etc.
I really hope you take this in the spirit of constructive criticism it is intended, because I really have enjoyed your story so far.
8/1/2016 c5 3Sharkbaitx42
Great story ! I really love it. Each chapter kinda feels like a mini story. But in a great way.
3Sharkbaitx42Great story ! I really love it. Each chapter kinda feels like a mini story. But in a great way.
7/23/2016 c5 Guest
Looking forward to the next chapter
Looking forward to the next chapter
7/22/2016 c3 Calebros
Not a bad story but please before you post any new chapter for the story reread what you have written so far (including the chapter you are about to post)
Not a bad story but please before you post any new chapter for the story reread what you have written so far (including the chapter you are about to post)
7/22/2016 c2 Calebros
if Harry was sleeping for about 200 years, then he would have left Earth around 2060 according to your timeline... thatis a bit off. More so since that would mean that humans (Archer) for example can live for 200 hundread years
if Harry was sleeping for about 200 years, then he would have left Earth around 2060 according to your timeline... thatis a bit off. More so since that would mean that humans (Archer) for example can live for 200 hundread years
7/7/2016 c3 K
Very unconventional but very well written and I have enjoyed ever second of reading it.
Very unconventional but very well written and I have enjoyed ever second of reading it.