for The Twin Heroes3/18/2020 c6 Guest
Make more of this hopefuly IT Will be in the cartoon
Make more of this hopefuly IT Will be in the cartoon
6/6/2018 c6 
5Ray Akaba 210
This story has a lot of potential, but you might want to fix up the dialogue little bit with Maxine. Try adding in some more description too
5Ray Akaba 210This story has a lot of potential, but you might want to fix up the dialogue little bit with Maxine. Try adding in some more description too
9/15/2017 c6 22bajy
great story so far!
will there be more soon?
and the part where max was able to see what was happening to Maxine, that's "sight sharing"! sweet!
22bajygreat story so far!
will there be more soon?
and the part where max was able to see what was happening to Maxine, that's "sight sharing"! sweet!
4/13/2017 c6 4Asuth20
When will you be updating again? I would like to know what happens next for Max and Maxine.
4Asuth20When will you be updating again? I would like to know what happens next for Max and Maxine.
3/14/2017 c6 Turbo Girl
I really love this fanfiction that you are makeing. I cant wait to see what happens with this new villan.
I really love this fanfiction that you are makeing. I cant wait to see what happens with this new villan.
11/17/2016 c6 Mudsbreath
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11/15/2016 c1 Mudsbreath
OMG saw ur profile. i like maxsteel, how to train your dragon, minecraft(story mode)! we got a lot of simalar likings.
OMG saw ur profile. i like maxsteel, how to train your dragon, minecraft(story mode)! we got a lot of simalar likings.
9/25/2016 c6 Guest
Story is good keep on goin
Story is good keep on goin
5/22/2016 c6 kittkattt
Please update your story it's really good, there's not a lot of Max Steele fanfiction around . And I really want to read more of it.
Please update your story it's really good, there's not a lot of Max Steele fanfiction around . And I really want to read more of it.
3/13/2016 c6 2Sachika-Tsutano
you made a few typos.
for an amazingly suffocated automaton should be for an amazingly sophisticated automaton.
i will reenacted our pervious operation should be i will resume our previous operation.
i drain you to a husk should be i'll drain you to a husk.
glass contained dredd should be glass containing dredd.
and we are done being saddle should be we are done being subtle.
and if moan is not allowed then try groan.
but other than that, great story!
2Sachika-Tsutanoyou made a few typos.
for an amazingly suffocated automaton should be for an amazingly sophisticated automaton.
i will reenacted our pervious operation should be i will resume our previous operation.
i drain you to a husk should be i'll drain you to a husk.
glass contained dredd should be glass containing dredd.
and we are done being saddle should be we are done being subtle.
and if moan is not allowed then try groan.
but other than that, great story!
2/24/2016 c1 homophobic ass
no girl x guy it makes me uncomfortable
no girl x guy it makes me uncomfortable