for Actions Speak Louder than Words8/29/2016 c5 
2DoomMarine55
Response to your idiot review of 'The Choices we Make'.
I love how in your idiotic story you bash Natsu by making him act out of character and saying Lucy's weak but in TCWM you bash him because he didn't fucking hold her hand and had faith in her to look after herself. Fu-ck you you do-uche bag Laxus fangirl.
The reason you bash Natsu and like Laxus is because you're some shallow bi-tch who only cares about looks.
2DoomMarine55Response to your idiot review of 'The Choices we Make'.
I love how in your idiotic story you bash Natsu by making him act out of character and saying Lucy's weak but in TCWM you bash him because he didn't fucking hold her hand and had faith in her to look after herself. Fu-ck you you do-uche bag Laxus fangirl.
The reason you bash Natsu and like Laxus is because you're some shallow bi-tch who only cares about looks.
7/13/2016 c5 1vacress
Update bro! I'm dying! Please, please, PLEASE, update. I don't want to pressure you but seriously! Please man, just please update! I don't want to put this pressure on you but please update!
1vacressUpdate bro! I'm dying! Please, please, PLEASE, update. I don't want to pressure you but seriously! Please man, just please update! I don't want to put this pressure on you but please update!
3/20/2016 c5 2AvidReader016
helloooo!
I love your story very much!
and i want to know what will happen in the heartfillia estate!
but i assume that you will go through the rest of the group's pov and laxus's team
Anyway keep up the good work!
and update asap!
2AvidReader016helloooo!
I love your story very much!
and i want to know what will happen in the heartfillia estate!
but i assume that you will go through the rest of the group's pov and laxus's team
Anyway keep up the good work!
and update asap!
12/29/2015 c5 Flamexofxchaos
Plz plz plz plz plz plz update! I can't stand the suspense! I love this story too much for my own good so plz plz plz update!
Plz plz plz plz plz plz update! I can't stand the suspense! I love this story too much for my own good so plz plz plz update!
12/3/2015 c5 8bleachTG.GC
The suspense with the alpha protocol is really killing me!
Loving it so far!
8bleachTG.GCThe suspense with the alpha protocol is really killing me!
Loving it so far!
12/2/2015 c5 19ArabellaIris17
coming along very nicely. I love the differences in the perspectives and back stories
19ArabellaIris17coming along very nicely. I love the differences in the perspectives and back stories
11/27/2015 c4 8bleachTG.GC
Loving the loyalty to Lucy, it'll be a great chance maybe later, to see how far they're willing to go for her!
8bleachTG.GCLoving the loyalty to Lucy, it'll be a great chance maybe later, to see how far they're willing to go for her!
11/26/2015 c3 bleachTG.GC
Another amazing chapter from levys POV. Love how youre reinforcing how The Forgotten are treated, n adding new info with every POV.
Btw, im sure Alpha Protocol will be very COOL! Cant wait!
Another amazing chapter from levys POV. Love how youre reinforcing how The Forgotten are treated, n adding new info with every POV.
Btw, im sure Alpha Protocol will be very COOL! Cant wait!
11/26/2015 c2 bleachTG.GC
Awesome chapter from Wendy's POV. It's good to see the effect on other members: not just Lucy. Very believable, n very convincing. Well done! Off to chapter 3!
Awesome chapter from Wendy's POV. It's good to see the effect on other members: not just Lucy. Very believable, n very convincing. Well done! Off to chapter 3!
11/26/2015 c4 2Akakocat
Wow,
Nice glimpse of juvia's life before fairy tail.
Keep up the awesome work!
2AkakocatWow,
Nice glimpse of juvia's life before fairy tail.
Keep up the awesome work!
11/26/2015 c4 Ms.CookieSmugler
After reading this I see Juvia as a better person. I can't wait to read the others PoV and figure out what Lucy's big plan is.
After reading this I see Juvia as a better person. I can't wait to read the others PoV and figure out what Lucy's big plan is.