for Rise of the Whirling Tides9/7/2024 c46 Guest
Bro the constant he’s not taking this seriously reminders gets annoying your Naruto is too fucking strong a story isn’t interesting if the Mc isn’t flawed because flaws make them relatable and interesting. But your iteration of Naruto is just BORING AS SHIT. Everyone from the op verse is just going “oh my god impossible” “he’s so strong” stop constantly stroking Naruto’s cock. Worst part is this doesn’t even feel like Naruto he acts like an emo overpowered d&d character but with random elements of Naruto put in there. Also why your at it resurrect the entire Naruto verse but with different looks and names. Your writing style is so boring and predictable. It’s literally just a fight happens Naruto gets involved everyone is shocked at his power Naruto is a badass oh my god he’s so strong and cool and someone this strong is totally unbeatable and then you go back to recreating the Naruto cast as ocs. Literally just feels like a writers self insert but instead of an Oc self insert they use a pre existing character from another story or the same story and twist their entire original personality into becoming your self insert completely destroying who they were to become your overpowered badass character that has no flaws and everybody is afraid and shocked of his power and he gets all the baddest bitches because he’s just so hot and cool and better than every other man. Hopefully in your rewrite you can actually make an interesting story instead of this unoriginal op Isekai harem protagonist.
Bro the constant he’s not taking this seriously reminders gets annoying your Naruto is too fucking strong a story isn’t interesting if the Mc isn’t flawed because flaws make them relatable and interesting. But your iteration of Naruto is just BORING AS SHIT. Everyone from the op verse is just going “oh my god impossible” “he’s so strong” stop constantly stroking Naruto’s cock. Worst part is this doesn’t even feel like Naruto he acts like an emo overpowered d&d character but with random elements of Naruto put in there. Also why your at it resurrect the entire Naruto verse but with different looks and names. Your writing style is so boring and predictable. It’s literally just a fight happens Naruto gets involved everyone is shocked at his power Naruto is a badass oh my god he’s so strong and cool and someone this strong is totally unbeatable and then you go back to recreating the Naruto cast as ocs. Literally just feels like a writers self insert but instead of an Oc self insert they use a pre existing character from another story or the same story and twist their entire original personality into becoming your self insert completely destroying who they were to become your overpowered badass character that has no flaws and everybody is afraid and shocked of his power and he gets all the baddest bitches because he’s just so hot and cool and better than every other man. Hopefully in your rewrite you can actually make an interesting story instead of this unoriginal op Isekai harem protagonist.
9/7/2024 c4 Guest
Are you serious? 1 billion is the highest bounty ever released? Also making Naruto this powerful really takes the fun out of this story because he doesn’t have any challenge and we know nobody will be able to challenge this damn Mary Sue
Are you serious? 1 billion is the highest bounty ever released? Also making Naruto this powerful really takes the fun out of this story because he doesn’t have any challenge and we know nobody will be able to challenge this damn Mary Sue
8/22/2024 c10 dkainallen
yup this has been ruined shirone is a mist for Naruto s harem he. since shes not this story is trash
yup this has been ruined shirone is a mist for Naruto s harem he. since shes not this story is trash
8/17/2024 c45 TheGoodDoctor13
I wish kaido was more like he was in canon. He's still evil in the anime but he's kinda cool and respectful and whatnot, like how he let Luffy charge his bajrang gun instead of blasting him out the sky. In this story he's just an arrogant guy with too much pride who kills his subordinates just because he can, don't like that too much
I wish kaido was more like he was in canon. He's still evil in the anime but he's kinda cool and respectful and whatnot, like how he let Luffy charge his bajrang gun instead of blasting him out the sky. In this story he's just an arrogant guy with too much pride who kills his subordinates just because he can, don't like that too much
8/17/2024 c43 TheGoodDoctor13
The story is interesting but I feel like the war with big mom is dragging on too long. It's already been going nearly 20 chapters now and it's still not finished
The story is interesting but I feel like the war with big mom is dragging on too long. It's already been going nearly 20 chapters now and it's still not finished
8/15/2024 c12 TheGoodDoctor13
Well this chapter answered some of my concerns from previous ones.
Such as the bounty and whatnot and Akainu having his mind read to see what happened. Good to see that
Well this chapter answered some of my concerns from previous ones.
Such as the bounty and whatnot and Akainu having his mind read to see what happened. Good to see that
8/15/2024 c11 TheGoodDoctor13
Naruto had no reason to let Akainu live. He killed hundreds of random fodder Marines and maimed Akainu and kizaru but left them alive to "leave a message". He only needed one for that and he's stated he hates Akainu so why let him live at all when you slaughter everyone else around you? Really its out of character for this naruto, he's only alive so he stays in the canon I imagine
Naruto had no reason to let Akainu live. He killed hundreds of random fodder Marines and maimed Akainu and kizaru but left them alive to "leave a message". He only needed one for that and he's stated he hates Akainu so why let him live at all when you slaughter everyone else around you? Really its out of character for this naruto, he's only alive so he stays in the canon I imagine
8/15/2024 c4 TheGoodDoctor13
"1,000,000,000 Beri! The highest bounty ever to be released" I get that this is slightly AU but that's just insulting. Whiteboard and Roger had 5 billion beri, it's confirmed by the time this fic was written too so idk why you had Roger at 700mil and wb at like 500mil, that's just lame
"1,000,000,000 Beri! The highest bounty ever to be released" I get that this is slightly AU but that's just insulting. Whiteboard and Roger had 5 billion beri, it's confirmed by the time this fic was written too so idk why you had Roger at 700mil and wb at like 500mil, that's just lame
8/11/2024 c7 TheMuzicMan
Isn't Jewelry Bonney like 9 years old in Canon and just uses her devil fruit to appear older?
Isn't Jewelry Bonney like 9 years old in Canon and just uses her devil fruit to appear older?
8/2/2024 c1 Soul Sendant
I will never understand why one piece is popular. I can not even force myself to watch that dumb shit or read it. pirates who can't swim because a special fruit gave them powers but makes them unable to swim? yeah, im not ignorant enough to find that shit interesting. That is barely scratching the surface of the issues plaguing one piece, not to mention luffy is the dumbest piece of shit with one of the weakest powers and would never have accomplished much at all. Seriously, one piece is for ignorant kids. Anyhow, i hope the one piece elements are minimal because fan fictions are already hard enough to try and read without extra ignorance.
I will never understand why one piece is popular. I can not even force myself to watch that dumb shit or read it. pirates who can't swim because a special fruit gave them powers but makes them unable to swim? yeah, im not ignorant enough to find that shit interesting. That is barely scratching the surface of the issues plaguing one piece, not to mention luffy is the dumbest piece of shit with one of the weakest powers and would never have accomplished much at all. Seriously, one piece is for ignorant kids. Anyhow, i hope the one piece elements are minimal because fan fictions are already hard enough to try and read without extra ignorance.
6/17/2024 c35 Guest
Nah, I tried but it just isn’t hitting. There is legit no need at add other villains especially OCs over 30 chapters and we aren’t close to “canon” I’m honestly not seeing the point of this story anymore for 4 years he could have helped the world but didn’t because you didn’t make him it’s disappointing
Nah, I tried but it just isn’t hitting. There is legit no need at add other villains especially OCs over 30 chapters and we aren’t close to “canon” I’m honestly not seeing the point of this story anymore for 4 years he could have helped the world but didn’t because you didn’t make him it’s disappointing
6/17/2024 c15 Guest
Bro we don’t give a shit about the kids. A Naruto story should be about Naruto I’ve been skipping every chapter so far, my god
Bro we don’t give a shit about the kids. A Naruto story should be about Naruto I’ve been skipping every chapter so far, my god