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Hello!
I hope you’re doing well! I just read your amazing stories, Two Dragons, and I really loved them. Your storytelling is impressive, and I think making a comic from your work could help it reach even more people.
I’m a digital artist, and I have experience turning stories into beautiful comics. I would love to work with you on this project! I can adapt each chapter into comic format while keeping your characters and story just as you wrote them.
Since your stories have such great worlds, we can create special art styles for each one, making them unique but still looking good together.
I have some open slots for commissions and would be excited to discuss this more with you. You can check out my portfolio to see my previous work. I always aim to provide high-quality art at fair prices.
If you’re interested, let’s talk on Discord! My username is yushishigawa
and you can also find me on Twitter: blogmepaula
I look forward to hearing from you!
Hello!
I hope you’re doing well! I just read your amazing stories, Two Dragons, and I really loved them. Your storytelling is impressive, and I think making a comic from your work could help it reach even more people.
I’m a digital artist, and I have experience turning stories into beautiful comics. I would love to work with you on this project! I can adapt each chapter into comic format while keeping your characters and story just as you wrote them.
Since your stories have such great worlds, we can create special art styles for each one, making them unique but still looking good together.
I have some open slots for commissions and would be excited to discuss this more with you. You can check out my portfolio to see my previous work. I always aim to provide high-quality art at fair prices.
If you’re interested, let’s talk on Discord! My username is yushishigawa
and you can also find me on Twitter: blogmepaula
I look forward to hearing from you!
5/8/2024 c1 ArtKing07
The excerpt portrays the aftermath of a decisive victory for Fairy Tail on Tenrou Island against the Grimoire Heart guild. It highlights the resilience of the guild members, particularly Natsu Dragneel, who remains lively despite his injuries. The dialogue between Natsu and Gildarts reflects their camaraderie, albeit somewhat forced. While the theme of resilience and camaraderie is evident, the writing could benefit from deeper worldbuilding, more immersive descriptions, naturalistic dialogue, and seamless integration of themes for a more engaging reading experience. Overall, the excerpt sets the stage for further exploration of the world of Fairy Tail but requires refinement to fully captivate readers.
The excerpt portrays the aftermath of a decisive victory for Fairy Tail on Tenrou Island against the Grimoire Heart guild. It highlights the resilience of the guild members, particularly Natsu Dragneel, who remains lively despite his injuries. The dialogue between Natsu and Gildarts reflects their camaraderie, albeit somewhat forced. While the theme of resilience and camaraderie is evident, the writing could benefit from deeper worldbuilding, more immersive descriptions, naturalistic dialogue, and seamless integration of themes for a more engaging reading experience. Overall, the excerpt sets the stage for further exploration of the world of Fairy Tail but requires refinement to fully captivate readers.
4/7/2024 c28 Jlova
I hope you update more. I really enjoyed this story, and this cliffhanger is leaving me in anticipation.
I hope you update more. I really enjoyed this story, and this cliffhanger is leaving me in anticipation.
4/4/2024 c28 Pixie Duck
The concept is interesting, I like the pairing, and I like the interactions between Wendy and Natsu but maaan, this story is disappointing when it comes to plot and power levels
He hated to admit it but he was stronger than him at this moment
What fucking bullshit. Natsu who was around for 7 years and has second origin unlocked is still weaker than Laxus?
And what kind of bullshit is having Laxus casually use Dragon Force? He literally could never do it in canon after years but after being frozen for 7 years he can pull it out of his ass?
Natsu's and Wendy's unison raid does literally nothing but knocking people away is another bullshit.
Wendy losing on the first day... come on! Then struggling against Kagura who isn't even going all out...
They're pathetically weak aside from literally against Sting which I remind you, Natsu fucked him up and Rogue at the same time casually. So "impressive" scene against Sting isn't going to actually look impressive.
Sorry, but this is bullshit. 7 years and Natsu is barely around Laxus fucking level? And Laxus's magical power awe both him and Wendy?
Plot... It's literally just canon with a bit of flavor. Nothing really changed despite it not making sense that canon will happen with both Wendy and Natsu around. And you continue to bend the story to rail road canon more. Chaning a boring event isn't a deviation.
Also, not shoving characters aside is one thing, but focus on core main characters. I don't care about most of the games because I don't give a shit about them. I'm here for Natsu/Wendy, and Erza and 2-3 more FT characters to a lesser extent. I found myself just scrolling past their scenes because they're a waste of time. Who cares about Elfman and Gray?
The concept is interesting, I like the pairing, and I like the interactions between Wendy and Natsu but maaan, this story is disappointing when it comes to plot and power levels
He hated to admit it but he was stronger than him at this moment
What fucking bullshit. Natsu who was around for 7 years and has second origin unlocked is still weaker than Laxus?
And what kind of bullshit is having Laxus casually use Dragon Force? He literally could never do it in canon after years but after being frozen for 7 years he can pull it out of his ass?
Natsu's and Wendy's unison raid does literally nothing but knocking people away is another bullshit.
Wendy losing on the first day... come on! Then struggling against Kagura who isn't even going all out...
They're pathetically weak aside from literally against Sting which I remind you, Natsu fucked him up and Rogue at the same time casually. So "impressive" scene against Sting isn't going to actually look impressive.
Sorry, but this is bullshit. 7 years and Natsu is barely around Laxus fucking level? And Laxus's magical power awe both him and Wendy?
Plot... It's literally just canon with a bit of flavor. Nothing really changed despite it not making sense that canon will happen with both Wendy and Natsu around. And you continue to bend the story to rail road canon more. Chaning a boring event isn't a deviation.
Also, not shoving characters aside is one thing, but focus on core main characters. I don't care about most of the games because I don't give a shit about them. I'm here for Natsu/Wendy, and Erza and 2-3 more FT characters to a lesser extent. I found myself just scrolling past their scenes because they're a waste of time. Who cares about Elfman and Gray?
3/23/2024 c28 NatsuDragneel56
First time reading, binged all the way through. I was enjoying for the first three quarters but the quality’s taken a huge fucking upturn in the last couple of chapters, newest one especially omg. Hopefully the writer’s block doesn’t hit you too hard I need more .
First time reading, binged all the way through. I was enjoying for the first three quarters but the quality’s taken a huge fucking upturn in the last couple of chapters, newest one especially omg. Hopefully the writer’s block doesn’t hit you too hard I need more .
3/7/2024 c28 Guest
See you all in 2031 o7
See you all in 2031 o7
3/3/2024 c28 ArtKing
FINALLY! Man, after years waiting you came back! I started reading this glorious fic years ago when you first started and always kept tabs on it from time to time to see if you would come back and it paid off. Thanks for the update. The most awaited Laxus clash is upon us and it doesn't disappoint. Am curious to see if you are gonna make Laxus immune to the lightning part of lightning flame dragon mode or not.
FINALLY! Man, after years waiting you came back! I started reading this glorious fic years ago when you first started and always kept tabs on it from time to time to see if you would come back and it paid off. Thanks for the update. The most awaited Laxus clash is upon us and it doesn't disappoint. Am curious to see if you are gonna make Laxus immune to the lightning part of lightning flame dragon mode or not.
2/9/2024 c28 
1Dragon Lord Draco
I "had to" reread the whole story to know what was going on. It's great to see you're back, I hope school is going well. I for one understand, real life always comes first.
1Dragon Lord DracoI "had to" reread the whole story to know what was going on. It's great to see you're back, I hope school is going well. I for one understand, real life always comes first.
2/9/2024 c28 zzkaizer
Ooooh yeaasss new chapter XD
Can’t wait for the next one :D
Keep up the excellent work
Ooooh yeaasss new chapter XD
Can’t wait for the next one :D
Keep up the excellent work