
5/15/2024 c14 Kaylen.b4444
I wish she could date someone else before Sirius. I don’t like him much right now
I wish she could date someone else before Sirius. I don’t like him much right now
3/29/2024 c14 Guest
Liked the heap part at the end of 14.
Keep it up.
Liked the heap part at the end of 14.
Keep it up.
8/13/2022 c4
1Li-Ion78
gah i know that im probably inept with relationships, but surely a romance to develop quite early doesnt bid well into the story? it's so blatant, it overshadows the the worldbuilding. i wish it was a little slower

gah i know that im probably inept with relationships, but surely a romance to develop quite early doesnt bid well into the story? it's so blatant, it overshadows the the worldbuilding. i wish it was a little slower
8/13/2022 c3 Li-Ion78
he's literally falling in love with his friend's oldest daughter. shouldnt this drag a little longer before they are comfortable with all these flirting? it's weird that they developed feeling already just because of a few nicknames and stuff. why not putting them in a serious situation that they need to pull through? the romance doesnt click because of how quick it was. a debt of time dragged on so long, i was so thankful that the pairing got together with such a large age gap, but here, theyre a little few years apart and it's not developed slightly
he's literally falling in love with his friend's oldest daughter. shouldnt this drag a little longer before they are comfortable with all these flirting? it's weird that they developed feeling already just because of a few nicknames and stuff. why not putting them in a serious situation that they need to pull through? the romance doesnt click because of how quick it was. a debt of time dragged on so long, i was so thankful that the pairing got together with such a large age gap, but here, theyre a little few years apart and it's not developed slightly
5/6/2022 c14
2vampdreams
Loved it!
I really wish you had continue, but thanks for bringing this story to life
Adore the characters and the magic you've created in the thread...

Loved it!
I really wish you had continue, but thanks for bringing this story to life
Adore the characters and the magic you've created in the thread...
3/21/2021 c14 ItMeYaGril
This fic was a very good read. I love AUs where something fundamental about the Wizarding World is shifted, and yours has been a fun one to dive into. Thank you for what you've written here. Best of luck with your future projects.
This fic was a very good read. I love AUs where something fundamental about the Wizarding World is shifted, and yours has been a fun one to dive into. Thank you for what you've written here. Best of luck with your future projects.
3/14/2021 c8 shie3
truly love this story, wish you could come back and update me :(
truly love this story, wish you could come back and update me :(