for Threads Of Time9/7/2016 c11 
40deathgeonous
This is very interesting, both in idea and execution. I really like this alternate world you've created. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
40deathgeonousThis is very interesting, both in idea and execution. I really like this alternate world you've created. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
9/3/2016 c3 Axel Fones
I get the feeling Frank and Alice Longbottom are A-okay. I hope the feeling bears out.
I get the feeling Frank and Alice Longbottom are A-okay. I hope the feeling bears out.
9/3/2016 c1 Axel Fones
This is quite the doozy. Sirius must feel so out of his depth right now. 2 of his best friends dead, another a traitor, and now Bella dropping the bomb of truth.
This is quite the doozy. Sirius must feel so out of his depth right now. 2 of his best friends dead, another a traitor, and now Bella dropping the bomb of truth.
8/16/2016 c11 paulaa90
I loved Bella's line, that Sirius was going to do something foolish, Sirius do something foolish, never.
That was on very hooooooot kiss, even if it took enchanted mistletoe for them to kiss. I absolutely love it, and wished it could have gone on longer.
Oh Sirius is going to be soooooooo pissed at Bella for what she is doing to him. We all know it's to save him from himself, but he doesn't care he wants to get revenge on Peter one way or another.
Oh I love the fact that Remus is in on this little plan. I wonder how Sirius is going to react to that information?
I wonder how Sirius is going to react to Bella basically killing his love life? Also loved the appearance of Umbridge at the trail. I hope that we get to see more of her.
Oh Helen's reaction to finding Sirius was priceless. I loved that she was the one to let him out. I can't wait to read how this is going to affect Sirius relationship with Bella and Remus.
Looking forward to the next chapter...
Please update soon...
Paulaa90
I loved Bella's line, that Sirius was going to do something foolish, Sirius do something foolish, never.
That was on very hooooooot kiss, even if it took enchanted mistletoe for them to kiss. I absolutely love it, and wished it could have gone on longer.
Oh Sirius is going to be soooooooo pissed at Bella for what she is doing to him. We all know it's to save him from himself, but he doesn't care he wants to get revenge on Peter one way or another.
Oh I love the fact that Remus is in on this little plan. I wonder how Sirius is going to react to that information?
I wonder how Sirius is going to react to Bella basically killing his love life? Also loved the appearance of Umbridge at the trail. I hope that we get to see more of her.
Oh Helen's reaction to finding Sirius was priceless. I loved that she was the one to let him out. I can't wait to read how this is going to affect Sirius relationship with Bella and Remus.
Looking forward to the next chapter...
Please update soon...
Paulaa90
8/16/2016 c11 17SelenaKat
This was bloody brilliant! I loved the way you got Bella and Sirius' feelings spot on! The lust was so sexy and it totally worked! I also liked the fact that Bella stopped Sirius from doing something stupid out of feelings for him but that she also felt exhilaration. I think you're really good at capturing different feelings between them and making Bella seem like a realistic person.
I also like the reference to Walburga and the tiny bit about the stenographer. I think they just add to the plot really well. I loved Remus being the one to mostly take charge and for him to have an opportunity to laugh. I thought it was really well written!
Good job!
xx
17SelenaKatThis was bloody brilliant! I loved the way you got Bella and Sirius' feelings spot on! The lust was so sexy and it totally worked! I also liked the fact that Bella stopped Sirius from doing something stupid out of feelings for him but that she also felt exhilaration. I think you're really good at capturing different feelings between them and making Bella seem like a realistic person.
I also like the reference to Walburga and the tiny bit about the stenographer. I think they just add to the plot really well. I loved Remus being the one to mostly take charge and for him to have an opportunity to laugh. I thought it was really well written!
Good job!
xx
8/14/2016 c11 Guest
Loved it.
Loved it.
8/13/2016 c11 2MotsPassants
Oh my, kinky stuff o-o thank you Helen, really. The kiss was so hot *-* I just jope that Sirius will understand her motives ' kiss and diner as apologie ?
2MotsPassantsOh my, kinky stuff o-o thank you Helen, really. The kiss was so hot *-* I just jope that Sirius will understand her motives ' kiss and diner as apologie ?
8/12/2016 c11 Rachel
I know that stories need drama, but PLEASE do not make Sirius hate Bella for what she did. Remus could talk to Sirius about it and make him see that Bella was trying to protect him. I'd be so disappointed and pissed, if you made Sirius go off and date (or have sex with) another woman just because he is angry at Bella. It would be such a gross turn off for me. I'm sure the silent treatment from Sirius would be enough to make Bella sorry for betraying his trust.
I know that stories need drama, but PLEASE do not make Sirius hate Bella for what she did. Remus could talk to Sirius about it and make him see that Bella was trying to protect him. I'd be so disappointed and pissed, if you made Sirius go off and date (or have sex with) another woman just because he is angry at Bella. It would be such a gross turn off for me. I'm sure the silent treatment from Sirius would be enough to make Bella sorry for betraying his trust.
8/12/2016 c11 Isabella
I'm so glad that we agree on how gorgeous Harri Musumeci is.
When I first saw his picture, I thought that if Sirius Black was a real person, he'd look like Harri.
I'm a little disapointed that he deleted all his older photos off his instagram, but the new "artsy" ones look good also.
I'm so glad that we agree on how gorgeous Harri Musumeci is.
When I first saw his picture, I thought that if Sirius Black was a real person, he'd look like Harri.
I'm a little disapointed that he deleted all his older photos off his instagram, but the new "artsy" ones look good also.