for Of Big Lunches and First Impressions11/24/2015 c1 
70BettyHall223
Great idea to build a story around that line. Perhaps you could do more of these.
70BettyHall223Great idea to build a story around that line. Perhaps you could do more of these.
11/23/2015 c1 63ebineez01
Nice :-) and also ties in why she says 'I won't let you down Sir.' On the gate ramp as they're leaving. Thanks for sharing
63ebineez01Nice :-) and also ties in why she says 'I won't let you down Sir.' On the gate ramp as they're leaving. Thanks for sharing
11/22/2015 c1 bluebari1
I like it how you take that single sentence and write a very enjoyable story around it. Nice addition to how it all began.
I like it how you take that single sentence and write a very enjoyable story around it. Nice addition to how it all began.
11/22/2015 c1 63djenie
Good interaction between the two of them. Also nice job staying away from the instant sexual tension that always seems to dominate first meetings between Sam and Jack! I enjoyed the story very much. Thanks for sharing.
*small chuckle at the image of Carter stuffing her face*
63djenieGood interaction between the two of them. Also nice job staying away from the instant sexual tension that always seems to dominate first meetings between Sam and Jack! I enjoyed the story very much. Thanks for sharing.
*small chuckle at the image of Carter stuffing her face*
11/22/2015 c1 taurigirl1
This was a nice story and showed the interaction between Jack and Sam very well. To my knowledge I've never read a story that addressed the big lunch she had before going through the gate. That was a great idea. Good job
This was a nice story and showed the interaction between Jack and Sam very well. To my knowledge I've never read a story that addressed the big lunch she had before going through the gate. That was a great idea. Good job