for Shinobi On Board20h c2 apex11599
I live the dact that im reading a story thats just expaining the scenes insread of just writing the fucking story. Its so unenjoyable. I dont understand why you wont just write the story. And the little scenes you do write you take 1 or 2 characters from the scene to write about and forget all the others thats there.
I live the dact that im reading a story thats just expaining the scenes insread of just writing the fucking story. Its so unenjoyable. I dont understand why you wont just write the story. And the little scenes you do write you take 1 or 2 characters from the scene to write about and forget all the others thats there.
5/12 c1 Yeet
I'm starting to believe that the Naruto fandom makes so many Naruto harem fanfics to try to hide or disguise that in the manga canon he seemed in love with Sasuke and never had the courage to come out, whatever it is, it still bores me that they want to put him in everything, it's like when you have 100 PlayStation games but you only play FIFA... I mean, use other characters, don't lock yourselves into just one, that limits you, since most Naruto fics seem like copy and paste because they repeat the same resources and sometimes even the dialogues wtf
I'm starting to believe that the Naruto fandom makes so many Naruto harem fanfics to try to hide or disguise that in the manga canon he seemed in love with Sasuke and never had the courage to come out, whatever it is, it still bores me that they want to put him in everything, it's like when you have 100 PlayStation games but you only play FIFA... I mean, use other characters, don't lock yourselves into just one, that limits you, since most Naruto fics seem like copy and paste because they repeat the same resources and sometimes even the dialogues wtf
5/2 c75 Borello
really good work
really good work
4/30 c75 
14Power of Magic
It'll be interesting why the World Government fears Joyboy and Nika (unless its just Imu and the Five Elders, as they like to keep the world as it is, with no freedom or anything like that for slaves)
14Power of MagicIt'll be interesting why the World Government fears Joyboy and Nika (unless its just Imu and the Five Elders, as they like to keep the world as it is, with no freedom or anything like that for slaves)
4/20 c1 Guest
See... you lose points when you say, "I can tell you're not like other pirates." No, the fuck, you can't. That did not inspire much hope for this story at all.
See... you lose points when you say, "I can tell you're not like other pirates." No, the fuck, you can't. That did not inspire much hope for this story at all.
3/30 c74 Borello
nice work
nice work
3/27 c74 14Power of Magic
Oh, boo hoo. Grow up, Who's Who and stop being such a petulant child. It was just bad luck for you, that Shanks happened to know what you were transporting, when you were doing it and your route and it could've happened to anyone
14Power of MagicOh, boo hoo. Grow up, Who's Who and stop being such a petulant child. It was just bad luck for you, that Shanks happened to know what you were transporting, when you were doing it and your route and it could've happened to anyone