for Shinobi On Board12/4/2015 c2 
4Krazyfanfiction1
great as usual.
...can Naruto still Transfer Chakra? if so, what would happen to someone if he transfered Nature charka to someone who can't use it?
4Krazyfanfiction1great as usual.
...can Naruto still Transfer Chakra? if so, what would happen to someone if he transfered Nature charka to someone who can't use it?
11/29/2015 c1 2Uchiha Angga-sama
imagine this if you ever play DMC 4 you must know yamato sword ability
1. can apen hell's gate. in DMC the demon can't be controlling that demon. but, if you make naruto have this sword you can make naruto controlling the demon. that will be great in war between marine vs whitebeard pirates.
2, it is said to be able to cut through anything
3. Yamato is able to cut through space itself as evidenced many times
throughout Devil May Cry 3, and Devil May Cry 4 : Special Edition .
Vergil utilizes an ability called Judgement Cut in which he swings so
fast that Yamato doesn't appear to even leave its sheath. It creates a
distortion in space that engulfs his target which is sliced multiple
times by the blade in very rapid succession. The ability is capable of
hitting any enemies that are within the rather large distortion radius.
if you ask how naruto have that sword. before naruto in OP universe he was trown to underworld and meet Vergil, the fight and Vergil lose he gave yamato to naruto and with that sword naruto out from underworld and arrive In OP universe. hope you like my suggestion
2Uchiha Angga-samaimagine this if you ever play DMC 4 you must know yamato sword ability
1. can apen hell's gate. in DMC the demon can't be controlling that demon. but, if you make naruto have this sword you can make naruto controlling the demon. that will be great in war between marine vs whitebeard pirates.
2, it is said to be able to cut through anything
3. Yamato is able to cut through space itself as evidenced many times
throughout Devil May Cry 3, and Devil May Cry 4 : Special Edition .
Vergil utilizes an ability called Judgement Cut in which he swings so
fast that Yamato doesn't appear to even leave its sheath. It creates a
distortion in space that engulfs his target which is sliced multiple
times by the blade in very rapid succession. The ability is capable of
hitting any enemies that are within the rather large distortion radius.
if you ask how naruto have that sword. before naruto in OP universe he was trown to underworld and meet Vergil, the fight and Vergil lose he gave yamato to naruto and with that sword naruto out from underworld and arrive In OP universe. hope you like my suggestion
11/27/2015 c1 5Fox Boss
Nice fic. Will Naruto get a Devil Fruit, if so, do you already have one in mind or are you taking suggestions?
5Fox BossNice fic. Will Naruto get a Devil Fruit, if so, do you already have one in mind or are you taking suggestions?
11/27/2015 c1 5skg1991
Its Kohza, not Kuza. One tip: Don't make Naruto OP. What made Naruto on Board excellent was that you made him strong but not OP. Does Naruto have Chakra mode or Biju mode? Does he even have Kurama at all? Because these things alone make him OP. I personally think that Naruto with Biju Mode is pretty much Yonkou level. His spamming of clones, rasengans, rasen-shurikens, bijudamas and bijudama-shurikens and the destruction of each of these moves makes him capable of single-handedly destroying Marine Ford like White Beard. You mentioned that he'd be stronger than canon before the war which means that he'd be able to use Sennin Mode. Technically speaking, with Sennin Mode, he should be able to take on Logia users since he is pretty much using Nature as his weapon. For OC enemies, I suggest you bring them in from other anime besides Naruto and One Piece, though you better mention which anime they are from in your author's notes. Sword for some reason doesn't seem to suit Naruto. Knives coated with Fuuton chakra suit him more. I myself have him using knives in my story, the Yellow flash of the marines. First bounties tend to depend on where one is from. Since Luffy was in East Blue, by East Blue standards, he received a record bounty of 30m. Hancock's first bounty was 80m. Sanji-77m.
I suggest a first bounty of 75m.
I suggest you have it in such a way that the transfer of dimensions cost him Kurama. No Kurama ensures no OP Naruto. After the time-skip, Naruto with haki and Sennin Mode will be incredible.
5skg1991Its Kohza, not Kuza. One tip: Don't make Naruto OP. What made Naruto on Board excellent was that you made him strong but not OP. Does Naruto have Chakra mode or Biju mode? Does he even have Kurama at all? Because these things alone make him OP. I personally think that Naruto with Biju Mode is pretty much Yonkou level. His spamming of clones, rasengans, rasen-shurikens, bijudamas and bijudama-shurikens and the destruction of each of these moves makes him capable of single-handedly destroying Marine Ford like White Beard. You mentioned that he'd be stronger than canon before the war which means that he'd be able to use Sennin Mode. Technically speaking, with Sennin Mode, he should be able to take on Logia users since he is pretty much using Nature as his weapon. For OC enemies, I suggest you bring them in from other anime besides Naruto and One Piece, though you better mention which anime they are from in your author's notes. Sword for some reason doesn't seem to suit Naruto. Knives coated with Fuuton chakra suit him more. I myself have him using knives in my story, the Yellow flash of the marines. First bounties tend to depend on where one is from. Since Luffy was in East Blue, by East Blue standards, he received a record bounty of 30m. Hancock's first bounty was 80m. Sanji-77m.
I suggest a first bounty of 75m.
I suggest you have it in such a way that the transfer of dimensions cost him Kurama. No Kurama ensures no OP Naruto. After the time-skip, Naruto with haki and Sennin Mode will be incredible.
11/25/2015 c1 12JensenDaniels32
Dude, make him as strong as he is DURING the war. Golden cloak, possibly Six Paths Mode.
12JensenDaniels32Dude, make him as strong as he is DURING the war. Golden cloak, possibly Six Paths Mode.
11/22/2015 c1 Guest
Ok so this is Pre-War? I was gonna say, after the war he could pretty much one shot anything in the one piece world with ease.
Ok so this is Pre-War? I was gonna say, after the war he could pretty much one shot anything in the one piece world with ease.
11/22/2015 c1 6Lightningblade49
He just casual throws out he's from another world to complete strangers and hands over stack of cash just to travel with them... wow this naruto really doesn't give a crap.
what bonney for a pairing? Don't think ive seen Naruto with Bonney before.
6Lightningblade49He just casual throws out he's from another world to complete strangers and hands over stack of cash just to travel with them... wow this naruto really doesn't give a crap.
what bonney for a pairing? Don't think ive seen Naruto with Bonney before.
11/22/2015 c1 JJP123
I'm excited for this, its like a alt version of "Naruto on board" where that one is were he was born their and this one is were he was sent here, and loving the pairing so far
I'm excited for this, its like a alt version of "Naruto on board" where that one is were he was born their and this one is were he was sent here, and loving the pairing so far
11/22/2015 c1 1insanemaelstorm
Interesting prologue. So kaguya sent him here, wonder if she will appear again. Looking forward to more
1insanemaelstormInteresting prologue. So kaguya sent him here, wonder if she will appear again. Looking forward to more