7/21 c20 Guest
Im a bit late. But its a great story, if a bit slow(chapt12-18).
Disappointed tyrion wasnt more in the story considering the pairing.
Im a bit late. But its a great story, if a bit slow(chapt12-18).
Disappointed tyrion wasnt more in the story considering the pairing.
6/29 c20 1Gregory Graham
Hey I found your fic absolutely amazing and just wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved the direction you were taking it in.
It's a real a shame that you have decided not to continue it but I wanted to just let you know that it is a very good premise and that you wrote exceptionally realistically so well done.
However, I believe we will never see this fic continued let alone finished so I guess this is just to let you know of my gratefulness that you let me see a different type of Tyrion and Sansa story that is unique from all the others on the site.
And yes I agree with Sansa's realisation that she should've just married tyrion and worried about him falling in love with her later.
Hey I found your fic absolutely amazing and just wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved the direction you were taking it in.
It's a real a shame that you have decided not to continue it but I wanted to just let you know that it is a very good premise and that you wrote exceptionally realistically so well done.
However, I believe we will never see this fic continued let alone finished so I guess this is just to let you know of my gratefulness that you let me see a different type of Tyrion and Sansa story that is unique from all the others on the site.
And yes I agree with Sansa's realisation that she should've just married tyrion and worried about him falling in love with her later.
2/26 c20 1kaisonsheart
This story has long been left to gather dust, yet it is well written and deserves praise. Character development is well done. The feeling of arrogance and superiority of having future knowledge and seeing results from your actions in changing things was brought out Wonderfully! You have done well to write both joyous and tense emotional undercurrents in appropriate situations. Your foreshadowing is not heavy-handed, nor is it overly frequent. Actions and Consequences feel as a very natural flow with the story. There have not been large, un-mendable plot holes nor have you led the story in absurd directions. I would love to see more, and experience the vision you had/have for this.
Health and Happiness be your companions
This story has long been left to gather dust, yet it is well written and deserves praise. Character development is well done. The feeling of arrogance and superiority of having future knowledge and seeing results from your actions in changing things was brought out Wonderfully! You have done well to write both joyous and tense emotional undercurrents in appropriate situations. Your foreshadowing is not heavy-handed, nor is it overly frequent. Actions and Consequences feel as a very natural flow with the story. There have not been large, un-mendable plot holes nor have you led the story in absurd directions. I would love to see more, and experience the vision you had/have for this.
Health and Happiness be your companions
7/29/2023 c20 Ellie.Cast4
Such a good story!
We were just getting to the meat of it, I like this Sansa’s sense of direction and ability to think critically about her actions, such potential for growth. She takes criticism well (which canonically and in most fics is not really a thing). Bummed I can’t see her flourish in your story.
Following on the small chance you decide to continue. I’ve seen authors come back to a tale five years later, here’s hoping year six is the magic number.
Such a good story!
We were just getting to the meat of it, I like this Sansa’s sense of direction and ability to think critically about her actions, such potential for growth. She takes criticism well (which canonically and in most fics is not really a thing). Bummed I can’t see her flourish in your story.
Following on the small chance you decide to continue. I’ve seen authors come back to a tale five years later, here’s hoping year six is the magic number.
7/11/2023 c20 Guest
I wish there were more. It's fine if you're sure you won't continue this, but if you're ever undecided, think about this: as of now this is the most favorited story for this ship on the whole website. I see that people still leave reviews years after you stopped updating. I bet you'd have a readership if you started again. If you do, please don't do that thing a lot of writers do where they get overly critical of their past work, and the first thing they want to do is revise. If you revisit this at all, just find your notes and jump into that next chapter!
I wish there were more. It's fine if you're sure you won't continue this, but if you're ever undecided, think about this: as of now this is the most favorited story for this ship on the whole website. I see that people still leave reviews years after you stopped updating. I bet you'd have a readership if you started again. If you do, please don't do that thing a lot of writers do where they get overly critical of their past work, and the first thing they want to do is revise. If you revisit this at all, just find your notes and jump into that next chapter!
2/17/2023 c1 15Andromedanaea
I read this last night.
Great story!
Disappointing that you abandoned it bore the plague years started. I hope you are still alive and will come back to this some day!
Looking at how it happened, It seems obvious that Roose Bolton set up the attack on Sansa and that Reek was one of the assailants. But how did he know she was there, at Riverrun? Seems like it would have been easier for him to set up an attack at Winterfell.
I feel it was foolish for Sansa to bring Lacy to a crowded public event. There is too much risk of someone panicking and shooting her.
I read this last night.
Great story!
Disappointing that you abandoned it bore the plague years started. I hope you are still alive and will come back to this some day!
Looking at how it happened, It seems obvious that Roose Bolton set up the attack on Sansa and that Reek was one of the assailants. But how did he know she was there, at Riverrun? Seems like it would have been easier for him to set up an attack at Winterfell.
I feel it was foolish for Sansa to bring Lacy to a crowded public event. There is too much risk of someone panicking and shooting her.
10/30/2021 c2 5Lindy Rose
YAAAAAAASSSS Just that while internal rant at the end was amazing. I cannot WAIT to see her wreck some shit and play some Slytherin mind games with all the bad guys. I hope she still has a friendship with Sandor? Also, I was kinda confused on how she got married to a Tyrion in your timeline, would you mind clarifying?
So excited for this fic!
Rose
YAAAAAAASSSS Just that while internal rant at the end was amazing. I cannot WAIT to see her wreck some shit and play some Slytherin mind games with all the bad guys. I hope she still has a friendship with Sandor? Also, I was kinda confused on how she got married to a Tyrion in your timeline, would you mind clarifying?
So excited for this fic!
Rose
8/19/2021 c20 3BADfangirl18
This is honestly one of the best time travel fanfiction‘s I’ve ever read, not just in the Game of Thrones fandom either. It’s a strong story and it’s well written, there are a few grammatical mistakes but they’re easy to overlook because the characters are so well written, and I really like that every once in a while we get a different point of view, Tyrion was absolutely a treat and I really hope we get to see more of Arya’s POV as the story goes on. I also really like that we get a deeper characterization for Robert Baratheon. I also can’t wait to see how you write Baelish! How well you’ve written everyone else in the story just has me so excited to see your take on him. I hope to read more soon!
This is honestly one of the best time travel fanfiction‘s I’ve ever read, not just in the Game of Thrones fandom either. It’s a strong story and it’s well written, there are a few grammatical mistakes but they’re easy to overlook because the characters are so well written, and I really like that every once in a while we get a different point of view, Tyrion was absolutely a treat and I really hope we get to see more of Arya’s POV as the story goes on. I also really like that we get a deeper characterization for Robert Baratheon. I also can’t wait to see how you write Baelish! How well you’ve written everyone else in the story just has me so excited to see your take on him. I hope to read more soon!
4/19/2021 c20 Charanko Pebble
Such a good story...
Author, I am kind... and willing to give you 1 year to return and continue writing.
Fail to do so and I will send you to the Wall!
Thanks for sharing your story with us :)
Such a good story...
Author, I am kind... and willing to give you 1 year to return and continue writing.
Fail to do so and I will send you to the Wall!
Thanks for sharing your story with us :)