for A Change of Fate4/19/2021 c20 Charanko Pebble
Such a good story...
Author, I am kind... and willing to give you 1 year to return and continue writing.
Fail to do so and I will send you to the Wall!
Thanks for sharing your story with us :)
Such a good story...
Author, I am kind... and willing to give you 1 year to return and continue writing.
Fail to do so and I will send you to the Wall!
Thanks for sharing your story with us :)
3/30/2021 c20 Vindictive lime
I rarely comment, but don't listen to the haters. your story is wonderful. taking good twists and turns.
I rarely comment, but don't listen to the haters. your story is wonderful. taking good twists and turns.
2/5/2021 c20 PAT2024
I knew when I started reading this story that it wasn’t complete, nevertheless after 20 chapters I’m still extremely sad that it will probably never be updated and completed. It is one of the very best stories in the GOT universe I have read so far (and I’ve read many) and it’s a pity you abandoned it and your eager readers. But I know, sometimes real life gets in the way and writing is not a priority anymore.
Sansa is not one of my favourite characters (I often find her either an insufferable spoiled brat or the awful by-product of Littlefinger and Cersei). But you have made her very very likeable. I loved her interactions with the other characters, but mostly with Tyrion and also Jaime, most of the time they were quite fun to read and I could really portray Nikolaj or Peter saying your words...
I unfortunately don’t have your fertile imagination and even if I attempt to foresee how you wanted this story to end I will probably be wrong and much less creative... if ever you intend to finish this story one day I’m sure you’ll make numerous readers very happy...
Anyway, thank you so much for writing this wonderful story, I enjoyed it tremendously. You are very talented and you shouldn’t stop writing.
Wishing you all the best !
I knew when I started reading this story that it wasn’t complete, nevertheless after 20 chapters I’m still extremely sad that it will probably never be updated and completed. It is one of the very best stories in the GOT universe I have read so far (and I’ve read many) and it’s a pity you abandoned it and your eager readers. But I know, sometimes real life gets in the way and writing is not a priority anymore.
Sansa is not one of my favourite characters (I often find her either an insufferable spoiled brat or the awful by-product of Littlefinger and Cersei). But you have made her very very likeable. I loved her interactions with the other characters, but mostly with Tyrion and also Jaime, most of the time they were quite fun to read and I could really portray Nikolaj or Peter saying your words...
I unfortunately don’t have your fertile imagination and even if I attempt to foresee how you wanted this story to end I will probably be wrong and much less creative... if ever you intend to finish this story one day I’m sure you’ll make numerous readers very happy...
Anyway, thank you so much for writing this wonderful story, I enjoyed it tremendously. You are very talented and you shouldn’t stop writing.
Wishing you all the best !
11/28/2020 c20 Crystalyna du Starrvan
Just found this story and enjoyed it very much, hope you continue it someday
Just found this story and enjoyed it very much, hope you continue it someday
11/24/2020 c1 Guest
I loved the story and found it very interesting. I wish you would have finished it since I read all of the chapters in one go.
I loved the story and found it very interesting. I wish you would have finished it since I read all of the chapters in one go.
11/17/2020 c20 
25stevem1
This story has some excellent ideas. Very well done.
Some of the language is awkward. Sansa is very ineffective in other ways. For example, Jon going to the Wall. Would it have killed her to ask Ned to have him squire for someone instead? The pack needs to stay together.
Some of the new scenes are excellent. Fostering Robin was well thought out. Using the rumors Littlefinger spread about the Tully sisters to dismiss him was good thinking. Getting Tyrion and Brynden on the small council was brilliant.
Sansa is clever, though she appears to be selective in her cleverness. For example, waking alone despite being ordered not to and despite knowing the rumors. It’s like she has a death wish.
25stevem1This story has some excellent ideas. Very well done.
Some of the language is awkward. Sansa is very ineffective in other ways. For example, Jon going to the Wall. Would it have killed her to ask Ned to have him squire for someone instead? The pack needs to stay together.
Some of the new scenes are excellent. Fostering Robin was well thought out. Using the rumors Littlefinger spread about the Tully sisters to dismiss him was good thinking. Getting Tyrion and Brynden on the small council was brilliant.
Sansa is clever, though she appears to be selective in her cleverness. For example, waking alone despite being ordered not to and despite knowing the rumors. It’s like she has a death wish.
11/17/2020 c17 stevem1
Sansa needs to be smart and focused, she’s right. I still can’t believe she let easy opportunities to strengthen the family go by.
Sansa needs to be smart and focused, she’s right. I still can’t believe she let easy opportunities to strengthen the family go by.
11/17/2020 c14 stevem1
I like how she dealt with the Boltons. Excellent thinking.
I wonder how she’ll deal with the Karstarks? As long as the sons aren’t murdered by Jaime they should be fine, but the underlying hubris remains. The Freys are still a problem also if war breaks out. Contingencies are necessary.
I like how she dealt with the Boltons. Excellent thinking.
I wonder how she’ll deal with the Karstarks? As long as the sons aren’t murdered by Jaime they should be fine, but the underlying hubris remains. The Freys are still a problem also if war breaks out. Contingencies are necessary.
11/17/2020 c10 stevem1
Jon is still going to the Wall? Has she explained the situation to her father? Has she made any effort other than a conversation with Jon? Sansa Stark, effectiveness 0.
Jon is still going to the Wall? Has she explained the situation to her father? Has she made any effort other than a conversation with Jon? Sansa Stark, effectiveness 0.
11/17/2020 c6 stevem1
So she knows Bran falls but she warned no one about it occurring in her dreams? They should have had guards on Bran 24/7. And Ned is still going to King’s Landing despite her warning as to the consequences? Jon is still going to the Wall?
Either they don’t believe her (and she’s said enough to establish her bonafides) or it is deep stupidity which caused their problems, not an excess of honor.
So she knows Bran falls but she warned no one about it occurring in her dreams? They should have had guards on Bran 24/7. And Ned is still going to King’s Landing despite her warning as to the consequences? Jon is still going to the Wall?
Either they don’t believe her (and she’s said enough to establish her bonafides) or it is deep stupidity which caused their problems, not an excess of honor.
11/17/2020 c3 stevem1
Jon did not insist on the Night’s Watch in canon. He brought it up to Benjen (who disapproved), Benjen passed it on to Ned and Catelyn jumped on it and backed by Luwin insisted. Jon felt somewhat betrayed as the process spun out, though he did think it honorable. Not a single person gave him another choice, which he would have jumped on.
Jon did not insist on the Night’s Watch in canon. He brought it up to Benjen (who disapproved), Benjen passed it on to Ned and Catelyn jumped on it and backed by Luwin insisted. Jon felt somewhat betrayed as the process spun out, though he did think it honorable. Not a single person gave him another choice, which he would have jumped on.