for A Change of Fate11/17/2020 c2 
25stevem1
Sansa is blabbing a lot, but if she thinks her time travel is a dream or heaven, she would. It’ll take time for her to settle into her thoughts and realize what has happened. I give the author kudos in that aspect of this story.
I like she’s getting a clue and passing some of her knowledge of as being a warg (which has a social stigma but is known to be a Stark trait) and green seeing (ditto).
25stevem1Sansa is blabbing a lot, but if she thinks her time travel is a dream or heaven, she would. It’ll take time for her to settle into her thoughts and realize what has happened. I give the author kudos in that aspect of this story.
I like she’s getting a clue and passing some of her knowledge of as being a warg (which has a social stigma but is known to be a Stark trait) and green seeing (ditto).
10/24/2020 c20 Gamelord42
This is hands down the best written Ice and Fire fic I've ever read! I hope if you ever become inspired to continue that you will update this! I am so curious to see what happens next! I wish you the best in your endeavors and may the muses grant you their favor! :D
This is hands down the best written Ice and Fire fic I've ever read! I hope if you ever become inspired to continue that you will update this! I am so curious to see what happens next! I wish you the best in your endeavors and may the muses grant you their favor! :D
10/1/2020 c20 DieTeeFee
HeyI love this story even though there is a serious shortage of tyrion here. Is there any chance you are continuing this?
HeyI love this story even though there is a serious shortage of tyrion here. Is there any chance you are continuing this?
5/22/2020 c2 DawnScarlet19610
Sansa isn't handling the time travel well at all. She's actually really smart in the show, especially after all she went through. She wouldn't act so rashly if sent to the past. She would know very well to act her part while gathering information about what's going on. She may not be able to completely hide changes in her personality, but blurting things out like she is and acting totally weird is just annoying. I don't like how you portray Sansa. You don't do her justice.
Sansa isn't handling the time travel well at all. She's actually really smart in the show, especially after all she went through. She wouldn't act so rashly if sent to the past. She would know very well to act her part while gathering information about what's going on. She may not be able to completely hide changes in her personality, but blurting things out like she is and acting totally weird is just annoying. I don't like how you portray Sansa. You don't do her justice.
5/22/2020 c1 DawnScarlet19610
I'm disappointed by your changes to the story. I really enjoyed Littlefinger's death in the show and how it was such a stepping stone for Sansa. It was so important for her character development, along with killing Ramsay. I feel like you took that away for her with your changes and possibly weakened her character. I wish you had sent her back during the battle with the Knight King or something along with Tyrion. Their relationship could have developed from both waking up in the past with terrible knowledge of the future and relying on one another to build a better one. The build up of her and Tyrion's love is now in your story's past, and something already developed that your readers won't get the chance to explore or understand because you've decided to just make it a reality of your timeline. It would have been more interesting without the crazy changes, I think.
I'm disappointed by your changes to the story. I really enjoyed Littlefinger's death in the show and how it was such a stepping stone for Sansa. It was so important for her character development, along with killing Ramsay. I feel like you took that away for her with your changes and possibly weakened her character. I wish you had sent her back during the battle with the Knight King or something along with Tyrion. Their relationship could have developed from both waking up in the past with terrible knowledge of the future and relying on one another to build a better one. The build up of her and Tyrion's love is now in your story's past, and something already developed that your readers won't get the chance to explore or understand because you've decided to just make it a reality of your timeline. It would have been more interesting without the crazy changes, I think.
4/29/2020 c7 TheWateringWizard
While Sansa fucking with Jamie, Tyrion and Sandor's mind is funny, I'm more miffed about how Sansa was touching them (well except Tyrion at the moment). It's hard to believe that they would allow her to do so like she did...
It's also unsettling to see that there are some things that can't be changed ! Maybe it's because this needs to happen to Bran so that he leaves for North to ultimately become the Three Eyed Raven ?
While Sansa fucking with Jamie, Tyrion and Sandor's mind is funny, I'm more miffed about how Sansa was touching them (well except Tyrion at the moment). It's hard to believe that they would allow her to do so like she did...
It's also unsettling to see that there are some things that can't be changed ! Maybe it's because this needs to happen to Bran so that he leaves for North to ultimately become the Three Eyed Raven ?
4/28/2020 c5 TheWateringWizard
I'm really struggling with this fic... I really like the idea but it's hard to stomach this Mary-Sue Sansa who's never wrong and always has a witty comeback ready to be delivered.
And why on earth would Cersei ask for Sansa's death ?! How completely stupid is that ! Do you have any idea what kind of character Cersei ? Because with how you're portraying her, she's just missing a moustache to twirl.
Also it's a bit late to be fostering the Reed children, no ? Sansa is gonna be leaving for King's Landing with Ned and Arya in like a week.
I'm really struggling with this fic... I really like the idea but it's hard to stomach this Mary-Sue Sansa who's never wrong and always has a witty comeback ready to be delivered.
And why on earth would Cersei ask for Sansa's death ?! How completely stupid is that ! Do you have any idea what kind of character Cersei ? Because with how you're portraying her, she's just missing a moustache to twirl.
Also it's a bit late to be fostering the Reed children, no ? Sansa is gonna be leaving for King's Landing with Ned and Arya in like a week.
4/28/2020 c4 TheWateringWizard
Ohh that's a disappointing chapter... Feels way too Mary-Sue-ish. She's just there to shock and awe people she interacts with. She seemingly shocked and awed the Hound and Jaime in one evening ! They just listened AND apparently believed what she said, a 12 year old girl...
Ohh that's a disappointing chapter... Feels way too Mary-Sue-ish. She's just there to shock and awe people she interacts with. She seemingly shocked and awed the Hound and Jaime in one evening ! They just listened AND apparently believed what she said, a 12 year old girl...
4/28/2020 c3 TheWateringWizard
Okay I've got to say that Sansa is handling the 'time travel' business really badly. She's showing off too much unexpected knowledge ! She basically kinda told Jon that she knew the future...
Her Ser Arthur Dayne comments were unnecessary and just draw more attention to her
Okay I've got to say that Sansa is handling the 'time travel' business really badly. She's showing off too much unexpected knowledge ! She basically kinda told Jon that she knew the future...
Her Ser Arthur Dayne comments were unnecessary and just draw more attention to her