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5/21/2018 c129 Guest
:)
5/21/2018 c129 3topaz3
What happened to Cortez?
5/21/2018 c129 41Eternal Nexus Warrior
I understand the power going out. It went out a few times here as well. That said, ouch, Poor Portugal and India. Portugal for dealing with India's wrath, and India for losing Romano. Panarus really is evil incarnate.

Wait, so if Italy attacked all the capitals, would that me Vilnius as well? I'm not sure but curious, so I just thought to ask.

Anyways, great job with this chapter, and it looks like we're seeing the aftermath coming up in the future chapters to come.
5/16/2018 c128 Guest
Ooh damn! A lot of people are about to get the axe aren't they?! Italy ain't happy.
5/15/2018 c128 Tomatoes
Ooh, things are getting interesting and heated up! I love how finally a very important character to the plot got killed, but Lovino was one of my favorites. Anyways great chapter but please don’t kill off Turkey I actually like him as well :(
5/15/2018 c128 Guest
I can't believe Lovino is dead! I was so sure Feliciano would be the one to die, but I guess I was wrong. But oh boy I can't wait to see the aftermath of this~ Also curious on who Panarus has his sights set on. But there is one thing i'm confused about. Surely from that distance Lebanon couldn't have hit any vital spots, especially since she was aiming for Feliciano, so how did Lovino instantly die? Ahhhh so many deaths.
5/15/2018 c128 Guest
¿y si ese es el único idioma que conocemos? Me gusta tu historia, pero tengo que leer a través de un traductor. Si respondo, voy a en mi lengua materna como Microsoft te da el cuadro de revisión cuando traduce toda la página. ¿eso realmente nos hace extranjeros cobardes? ¿de verdad crees que soy cobarde para expresar mi amor por tu historia, el dolor que me ha dado cobarde también? Me alegro de no haber revisado su trabajo antes de ahora. Es mejor saber ahora que después que mi lengua es cobardía.

Aún me gusta tu historia, aunque pienses que soy un cobarde por responder en el único idioma que conozco.
5/15/2018 c128 Guest
You do know, the author could be pulling your leg in order to get attention. They could be sending themselves the reviews like a child that wants attention. My little brother does this exact thing, creating drama for attention.

Don't feed them, they are just trying to drag you into the trolling mess they created.

Though if they are, I hope you removed their rec from your story. You only recommended on, and it don't take a genius to figure out who. So, if it is real instead of a baby who has to send themselves flames to get more reviews and attention, then you just lit a bigger fire onto them.
5/14/2018 c128 Elsa
No, Romano! But dang North Italy is so going to kill everyone for that. Oh, I'm stuck between grieving for a cab and wanting some massive killing sphere to occur.

P.S. You probably made their situation worse by speaking out. While it is nice to get defended, you did wrong. You cannot let your instincts take over. Once a work is out there, you lose control. You let people react, you step aside. You have to take all forms of criticism, even the harshest forms. If people don't like a work, they have a right to voice. Compare it to another, do you know how many fantasy books get compared to Harry Potter? Percy Jackson? It is natural to do so, especially if inspired by said work. You can't say they are not allowed to.

You as the author of the work inspired really have no way over comparisons between yours and another. You have no way over people's reactions, and how it is voiced. You as the one who have attention to it, probably lead to them getting the attention, and now even more attention is brought. Trolls, if they are, thrive on it or you just made them angrier and so it may continue. I get where you are coming from, as an older sister of four, but I let them face the harsh world on there own cause they won't learn if we hold their hand constantly. When I got harassed for something I said, I had to face it on my own as my mom told me I did this, I must face up to it. I grew stronger for it.

But they took that risk to write the work inspired, and thus they have to take the consequences for that. Being constantly compared to the other. They also must take risk of all comments. If they can't handle hard comments, why post it to the public. This is reality, life is full of disapproval and approval. You got to take both, or you won't learn. I can't say anything about the threat without reading the comment myself, but did you consider that they might have reason for it to be given?

You can't shield them from reality. If they weren't prepared for the backlash their writing might cause, or for criticisms, threats, then they shouldn't be sharing to the public, or to a more restrictive site like Wattpad. This site also supports freedom of speach, they warned before you report a review and in their rules to respect people's opinion. They don't care if your feelings get hurt because of it. It's why this site is one of the best, cause it simulates what writers to through, but also one of the worst cause of the freedom.

I'm sorry they got threatened, and have to go through it. But that is the cold reality of life.

I look forward to see what North Italy does, and to see if he is the prophecy monster.
5/15/2018 c128 Singing Night Owl
Oh my God. Oh no. Well say goodbye everyone, I guess you'll be dying today.
Poor Italy. I would be like that too if my sibling got killed. I don't name him.
The fear and adrenaline in this chapter are really there. Good job, I can't wait for the next chapter!
5/15/2018 c128 Undecidedanimelover
I love this story, and I have a suggestion to make. You should add another nature spirit, for Japan. Basically the spirit of the typhoons that stopped the mongols from coming to Japan. I feel it would be cool if it wanted to avenge Japan's death. Sorry if this doesn't make sense. I'm not too good at English, so I don't comment so often.
5/15/2018 c128 8GalaxyWolf2.0
I really hope you get better soon, I am really interested in this story so far. Australia is my favourite character of all (being from Oz myself), he really needs more love in the anime. But I'm glad that Wy and Hutt River showed him and New Zealand mercy, after all they are some of the only ones that take care of them. So I really hope he and New Zealand regain their memories and are able to get back their nation status. But Please update again soon, I really need to know what happens :)
5/14/2018 c128 BelgianHetalian
Good story, also get Well soon :)
5/14/2018 c128 41Eternal Nexus Warrior
Holy Shit, you are the master of surprises and cliffhangers. I didn't expect Romano to take the shot for his brother like that! And now that he's dead, I can tell that Italy is beyond pissed off. And I know another who is gonna be like that as well. *shudders* Portugal, better watch out, India's pissed and he's gonna be looking for someone to take his rage out on like North did.
5/11/2018 c127 Eternal Nexus Warrior
I have a lot of mixed feelings on this chapter, one for almost each section. My first feeling is the suspense and anticipation on the Belarus and Russia battle. I really wanna find out who's gonna win on this battle, but I know I have to be patient on the matter.

I kinda feel bad for Liechtenstein if I had to be honest. She's been a thorn in america's side, but all she wants is someone to just kill her so she can join Molossia. You can't help but hate/pity her situation at the same time. That said, It's the same for South Korea right now. Rip Cambodia though. That was a brutal death.

I am curious to see if Anika will be brought back to life, because she's one of my favorite characters. Even though I was shocked/saddened by her death, you can't help but admire her for dying a noble death, to protect Brazil.

Lots of kills, but still more to come! And I will await each chapter patiently. And slightly eagerly, cause literally the first thing I do to wake up on mondays is read the latest chapter of the story. XD
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