for The Gaming Magus6/13 c5 elizabethtyler937
This was a fantastic read! I really enjoyed it. It kept me engaged from start to finish, and I found myself really drawn into the world you created . I’d love to hear more about your thoughts while writing this what inspired certain choices? Any behind-the-scenes details you’d like to share? Overall, this piece stands strong as it is, and I just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!.
This was a fantastic read! I really enjoyed it. It kept me engaged from start to finish, and I found myself really drawn into the world you created . I’d love to hear more about your thoughts while writing this what inspired certain choices? Any behind-the-scenes details you’d like to share? Overall, this piece stands strong as it is, and I just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!.
6/8 c1 pltrgst
Why "Error"? And not "unidentified" or "?" Is his trait beyond the system? More powerful than the system? Or just stylistic choice?
Why "Error"? And not "unidentified" or "?" Is his trait beyond the system? More powerful than the system? Or just stylistic choice?
4/21 c5 Juliasimon77
A breathtaking journey that transcends mere storytelling, weaving together the threads of heartache, triumph, and discovery into an intricate tapestry of human emotion. Each character pulses with life flawed yet achingly real inviting the reader to see reflections of their own joys and struggles within their journeys. The prose flows like a melody, balancing elegance with raw authenticity, painting vivid scenes that linger in the mind like echoes of a dream. With every twist and turn, the narrative unfolds not just as a story, but as an experience immersing the reader in a world that feels both distant and intimately familiar. This is not simply a tale to be read, but one to be felt, cherished, and revisited, leaving an imprint that resonates long after the final page is turned.
A breathtaking journey that transcends mere storytelling, weaving together the threads of heartache, triumph, and discovery into an intricate tapestry of human emotion. Each character pulses with life flawed yet achingly real inviting the reader to see reflections of their own joys and struggles within their journeys. The prose flows like a melody, balancing elegance with raw authenticity, painting vivid scenes that linger in the mind like echoes of a dream. With every twist and turn, the narrative unfolds not just as a story, but as an experience immersing the reader in a world that feels both distant and intimately familiar. This is not simply a tale to be read, but one to be felt, cherished, and revisited, leaving an imprint that resonates long after the final page is turned.
4/8 c6 
1SentinalSlice
So regarding reinforcement. Wouldn’t it give him a larger boost already? So is that 1% on top of how much his reinforcement would normally boost? Because otherwise it doesn’t make much sense as he would have noticed that he was moving slower than normal when reinforced right?
So Shirou now has Caladbolg in UBW, he just doesn’t know it yet. It’s interesting. I wonder at what point will he be able to read the history of a weapon just by looking at it. Because I know his eyes already do they subconsciously, but I’m wondering when he will actively be able to do that.
A random Emiya appeared. That’s even more interesting.
Was he summoned as a counter guardian for some reason?
Actually, thinking about it, that could actually be the case. If they are in the future or super far in the past, more likely the future, they could be the last humans on earth. And Alaya and the counterforce will prioritize humanities survival. So sending Emiya there to save them would make sense. That would actually be so clever!
Great chapter! Can’t wait for more!
1SentinalSliceSo regarding reinforcement. Wouldn’t it give him a larger boost already? So is that 1% on top of how much his reinforcement would normally boost? Because otherwise it doesn’t make much sense as he would have noticed that he was moving slower than normal when reinforced right?
So Shirou now has Caladbolg in UBW, he just doesn’t know it yet. It’s interesting. I wonder at what point will he be able to read the history of a weapon just by looking at it. Because I know his eyes already do they subconsciously, but I’m wondering when he will actively be able to do that.
A random Emiya appeared. That’s even more interesting.
Was he summoned as a counter guardian for some reason?
Actually, thinking about it, that could actually be the case. If they are in the future or super far in the past, more likely the future, they could be the last humans on earth. And Alaya and the counterforce will prioritize humanities survival. So sending Emiya there to save them would make sense. That would actually be so clever!
Great chapter! Can’t wait for more!
4/5 c1 Brin
Not quite sure what to think of this story, although I will give it a try.
One (mostly) minor point: The entire reason for the 'Brownie' nick-name was because of his assistance in maintenance issues. So instead of a 10% to reputation gain, perhaps a similar buff when repairing, mending, or similar work? If anything a reputation gain is the *opposite* of being a brownie, which in legends and folklore is well known for being unassuming and easily over-looked.
Not quite sure what to think of this story, although I will give it a try.
One (mostly) minor point: The entire reason for the 'Brownie' nick-name was because of his assistance in maintenance issues. So instead of a 10% to reputation gain, perhaps a similar buff when repairing, mending, or similar work? If anything a reputation gain is the *opposite* of being a brownie, which in legends and folklore is well known for being unassuming and easily over-looked.
4/4 c1 Brin
You might get more views if you place this story in the crossover section (FSN x The Gamer).
You might get more views if you place this story in the crossover section (FSN x The Gamer).
4/3 c6 E
Ah, Counter Guardian EMIYA is here to say "you're gaming a little too hard, bro; tone that shit down". I suppose Alaya would probably take issue with the Gaming power, yeah.
I await more, as always.
Ah, Counter Guardian EMIYA is here to say "you're gaming a little too hard, bro; tone that shit down". I suppose Alaya would probably take issue with the Gaming power, yeah.
I await more, as always.
3/31 c6 Guest
Is that Archy?!
Is that Archy?!
3/31 c4 8Wickerstein
That dungeon is either an entirely separate Reality Marble, or it's UBW in a unique alteration by the System.
8WickersteinThat dungeon is either an entirely separate Reality Marble, or it's UBW in a unique alteration by the System.
3/30 c6 isoulmani
Archer missed? We must really be in the weeds if the counter guardian didn’t take the shot when he was well within his duty. Since, and I’m assuming here, the world should be treating the dungeon instance as a reality marble without a host and trying to destroy it with all available force. It should also know who spawned it.
Archer missed? We must really be in the weeds if the counter guardian didn’t take the shot when he was well within his duty. Since, and I’m assuming here, the world should be treating the dungeon instance as a reality marble without a host and trying to destroy it with all available force. It should also know who spawned it.