for Astraphobia6/8/2016 c1 Anonymous
Nice work, I was expecting this is to a cheap nockoff of Yeminki's 'thunder' but it was actually very different story line. Thank you for writing this excellent peice of fanfiction.
Nice work, I was expecting this is to a cheap nockoff of Yeminki's 'thunder' but it was actually very different story line. Thank you for writing this excellent peice of fanfiction.
1/6/2016 c1 
10Seasonally
Sorry for the really late review Read this a long time ago and the first thing I thought was fluff fluff fluff god it's really sweet. I can imagine Zhalia alone in her flat trying to shut herself out from the storm and now she has someone to remind her she's not alone. So calm so soothing. Nice piece :)
10SeasonallySorry for the really late review Read this a long time ago and the first thing I thought was fluff fluff fluff god it's really sweet. I can imagine Zhalia alone in her flat trying to shut herself out from the storm and now she has someone to remind her she's not alone. So calm so soothing. Nice piece :)
11/24/2015 c1 4LiliumHeart
You did it, aww, thank you! It's so sweeeet, I loved it. Of course Zhalia always tries to keep her composure but she can't hide it from Dante and he doesn't press her. He just calms her down so sweetly as he always does, aww! *.*
4LiliumHeartYou did it, aww, thank you! It's so sweeeet, I loved it. Of course Zhalia always tries to keep her composure but she can't hide it from Dante and he doesn't press her. He just calms her down so sweetly as he always does, aww! *.*
11/24/2015 c1 2Dragonrider44
Coincidentally I was looking at that HC earlier and you did really well turning it into a one shot, very sweet.
2Dragonrider44Coincidentally I was looking at that HC earlier and you did really well turning it into a one shot, very sweet.
11/24/2015 c1 PTAtomic78
awww so cuuuuute and I love that he didn't press on the fact she was scared when she denied it. He just held her close and calmed her. That is so Dante. At least how I imagine him to be.
awww so cuuuuute and I love that he didn't press on the fact she was scared when she denied it. He just held her close and calmed her. That is so Dante. At least how I imagine him to be.