for Enhanced9/5/2018 c1 1991-Old-school-kid
I'm not working but DC or Marvel fan but I enjoyed this one shot! I would love to see what happens when Four & Tris run away... Will Max & David track them down? Would they beat to have happily ever after? If they were to have offsprings would they have the same enhanced abilities as well? So many unanswered questions! Great story!
I'm not working but DC or Marvel fan but I enjoyed this one shot! I would love to see what happens when Four & Tris run away... Will Max & David track them down? Would they beat to have happily ever after? If they were to have offsprings would they have the same enhanced abilities as well? So many unanswered questions! Great story!
12/28/2015 c1 leek812
What a unique story. I am excited to read more. I love Worth 1000 Words and I am so excited to read more of your work.
What a unique story. I am excited to read more. I love Worth 1000 Words and I am so excited to read more of your work.
12/4/2015 c1 Eunice339
Wow! Love the story line and how you're applying it to FourTris. Tris reminds me of Rogue. I always felt sad that she couldn't touch anyone, but luckily Tris has Four. I like the end of your chapter where they are questioning the ethics behind their enhancements and what their creators are doing to them. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Wow! Love the story line and how you're applying it to FourTris. Tris reminds me of Rogue. I always felt sad that she couldn't touch anyone, but luckily Tris has Four. I like the end of your chapter where they are questioning the ethics behind their enhancements and what their creators are doing to them. Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
11/27/2015 c1 Manasi
This is absolutely amazing. I'm so glad you started this. It's a very unique idea!
Btw, I was wondering on when you'd update Worth A Thousand Words though? I'm dying to know how it turns out!
This is absolutely amazing. I'm so glad you started this. It's a very unique idea!
Btw, I was wondering on when you'd update Worth A Thousand Words though? I'm dying to know how it turns out!
11/27/2015 c1 
8milner
I already told you that I liked the idea behind this, and I am so looking forward to reading what comes next.
8milnerI already told you that I liked the idea behind this, and I am so looking forward to reading what comes next.
11/24/2015 c1 Guest
THIS WAS AMAZING. I really like this idea and hope to continue reading. Can you mention which marvel story you got it from, sorry just curious. Hope to read more.
THIS WAS AMAZING. I really like this idea and hope to continue reading. Can you mention which marvel story you got it from, sorry just curious. Hope to read more.
11/25/2015 c1 28cjgwilliams
This is a really interesting start! I'm an XMen fan and Rogue is one of my favorite characters so I love the inspiration for this. I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter of this and all your other stories!
28cjgwilliamsThis is a really interesting start! I'm an XMen fan and Rogue is one of my favorite characters so I love the inspiration for this. I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter of this and all your other stories!
11/24/2015 c1 It's Kris
I don't know which Marvel (comic?) this is based from, but I love this idea! Tris kind of reminds me of Juliette from Shatter Me, but I really loved reading this! :-)
I don't know which Marvel (comic?) this is based from, but I love this idea! Tris kind of reminds me of Juliette from Shatter Me, but I really loved reading this! :-)
11/24/2015 c1 4AllOfTheSeasonsLiveInsideMe
These are words I would never thought to say: this chapter is too long. I like it though. You could have converted it into SUVs different 1000 word chapters and your viewer would have been happy. It is interesting. Keep writing. Just slightly shorter chapters.
4AllOfTheSeasonsLiveInsideMeThese are words I would never thought to say: this chapter is too long. I like it though. You could have converted it into SUVs different 1000 word chapters and your viewer would have been happy. It is interesting. Keep writing. Just slightly shorter chapters.