for The Fantastic Mr Walker4/6/2020 c120 RPM Shadow
Love it! Can Skylor/Kai have a few moments together?
Love it! Can Skylor/Kai have a few moments together?
4/6/2020 c120 Blazze Phoenix
Jeesh! Poor Kai, he just can't get a break, can he? Jay's really doing his best though! As soon as I saw that this story had been updated, I just HAD to read it, y'know? It's just SO GOOD! Best wishes to all the ninja, especially Lloyd, Zane and Cole!
Jeesh! Poor Kai, he just can't get a break, can he? Jay's really doing his best though! As soon as I saw that this story had been updated, I just HAD to read it, y'know? It's just SO GOOD! Best wishes to all the ninja, especially Lloyd, Zane and Cole!
4/6/2020 c117 
8RealtreeGal
Me: *Sees chapter title* Oh this should be funny haha
Chapter: *Violence, killing, bloodshed, Zane literally shredded alive*
Me: 0_o
8RealtreeGalMe: *Sees chapter title* Oh this should be funny haha
Chapter: *Violence, killing, bloodshed, Zane literally shredded alive*
Me: 0_o
4/5/2020 c119 CartoonBeth
OMG! Best story ever so far! Are you gonna update soon? Please do! This story is amazing so far! Keep up the good work!
OMG! Best story ever so far! Are you gonna update soon? Please do! This story is amazing so far! Keep up the good work!
4/3/2020 c96 Jens
And now it is just as long, heh. (To be honest, I've never read either of them. Am I missing something?).
These few chapters were the most tense chapters EVER. I'd forgotten this happened! Jay gone blind?! Mack dead?! Lloyd has too much on his conscience right now. No one's going to be able to spark their dragons at the end of the story.
And now it is just as long, heh. (To be honest, I've never read either of them. Am I missing something?).
These few chapters were the most tense chapters EVER. I'd forgotten this happened! Jay gone blind?! Mack dead?! Lloyd has too much on his conscience right now. No one's going to be able to spark their dragons at the end of the story.
3/31/2020 c119 2dorizard
Boooooy sorry I haven't been around to review much but these last few chapters have been phenomenal! Continuously punching me in the gut but still, it's so good XD
Absolutely loved Kai's confrontation with Nash in this chapter, and how you tied together all the growth he's had to this one moment. He got me cheering when he didn't give Nash the satisfaction of blaming everything on himself, he didn't break and he's come so far ;v;
What came after was a gut wrencher though for sure, I kind of figured that things would have to end this way with an enemy as dangerous as Nash but was never prepared for... this. It was pretty violent and hands-on as well, that's gotta be even worse on Kai's conscience... but maybe with his experience he could finally get through to Lloyd? hmm
Ack, Zane, why do you always have to be so self-sacrificing ;; None of us deserve that nindroid, man
Can't help but feel Silica might be a little bit relieved Nash is gone, but on the other hand, they're in real danger now. Still, looks like the worst is over for the ninja right? ...right? :'D
Amazing writing as always, can't wait for more!
2dorizardBoooooy sorry I haven't been around to review much but these last few chapters have been phenomenal! Continuously punching me in the gut but still, it's so good XD
Absolutely loved Kai's confrontation with Nash in this chapter, and how you tied together all the growth he's had to this one moment. He got me cheering when he didn't give Nash the satisfaction of blaming everything on himself, he didn't break and he's come so far ;v;
What came after was a gut wrencher though for sure, I kind of figured that things would have to end this way with an enemy as dangerous as Nash but was never prepared for... this. It was pretty violent and hands-on as well, that's gotta be even worse on Kai's conscience... but maybe with his experience he could finally get through to Lloyd? hmm
Ack, Zane, why do you always have to be so self-sacrificing ;; None of us deserve that nindroid, man
Can't help but feel Silica might be a little bit relieved Nash is gone, but on the other hand, they're in real danger now. Still, looks like the worst is over for the ninja right? ...right? :'D
Amazing writing as always, can't wait for more!
3/31/2020 c86 Jens.K
Okay, I'm wondering why I didn't review for this chapter last time I read it.
I had sooooo much fun! So much that Fire Oreo came to see what I was doing. (She's still exists!) My cheeks were about to fall off by the end of the mlrning service. Considering that I did a part-time job in a restaurant, I know how fun it is, sometimes. Even though it never rushed THIS much. That's what you get when fangirls takes action.
Kai and Skylor, though... (,,•ω•,,)ｷｭﾝ
You're doing great!
Okay, I'm wondering why I didn't review for this chapter last time I read it.
I had sooooo much fun! So much that Fire Oreo came to see what I was doing. (She's still exists!) My cheeks were about to fall off by the end of the mlrning service. Considering that I did a part-time job in a restaurant, I know how fun it is, sometimes. Even though it never rushed THIS much. That's what you get when fangirls takes action.
Kai and Skylor, though... (,,•ω•,,)ｷｭﾝ
You're doing great!
3/30/2020 c119 CrystalKunoichi
THAT WAS SO INTENSE! Your action scenes are amazing! I was legitimately worried on how they were gonna make it out of that! My reactions could only be described as keyboard mashes. But ding dong the Nash is finally dead! Poor Kai, I hope he doesn't hold this against himself for too long. And Zane, oh Zane, he loves his family so much and will put so much on the line for them! I wonder how things are gonna play out from here?
Also I found this kind of funny:
"Kai cursed so abruptly and so violently"
Kai: FREAKING
I get the actual curse was before that line but I just found the progression amusing.
Until next time!
~CrystalKunoichi~
THAT WAS SO INTENSE! Your action scenes are amazing! I was legitimately worried on how they were gonna make it out of that! My reactions could only be described as keyboard mashes. But ding dong the Nash is finally dead! Poor Kai, I hope he doesn't hold this against himself for too long. And Zane, oh Zane, he loves his family so much and will put so much on the line for them! I wonder how things are gonna play out from here?
Also I found this kind of funny:
"Kai cursed so abruptly and so violently"
Kai: FREAKING
I get the actual curse was before that line but I just found the progression amusing.
Until next time!
~CrystalKunoichi~
3/30/2020 c119 Blazze Phoenix
Holy Fizzims! That... was intense. I LOVE IT! This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read. I've been reading for months, but only recently got an FFN account, or I'd have reviewed sooner. All the characters are so well written! Have you watched S12 yet? I actually think the show writers screwed with Kai in ep4, he seems really OOC! (btw, I really hope he's okay!) Best of luck with this fic!
-Blazze. XD
Holy Fizzims! That... was intense. I LOVE IT! This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read. I've been reading for months, but only recently got an FFN account, or I'd have reviewed sooner. All the characters are so well written! Have you watched S12 yet? I actually think the show writers screwed with Kai in ep4, he seems really OOC! (btw, I really hope he's okay!) Best of luck with this fic!
-Blazze. XD
3/30/2020 c119 11GameCubeGirl1
Kai just...he needs all the hugs, and I mean ALL the hugs right now ;0; that or a darn good therapist, geez can his mental state take much more? I thought Lloyd was bad but geez Kai is right behind him now.
Kai wants to be held accountable, I get that...but even though every one else is willing to let it go...he's just gonna find some way of punishing himself for it isn't he? Kai may have gotten over himself, but he's yet to learn to let some things go, I mean...it's not like he killed a human right? Right? D:
And Zane...you just love being the hero and getting yourself shred to pieces don't you? D: Though I wonder how Zane knew Nash would be coming that way...?
Surely now..surely now they can all relax, recover and pull themselves together?
But then..this is your story, you love these characters as much as us, but you do love to put them through the ringer xD but then once they hit rock bottom there ain't no way to go but up!
...unless...you're gonna make them dig further down, you're known for that by now :P
Ahem..anyway, I love that Nash is no longer a threat, but I know their work ain't done yet. Wonder how Cole will take the news of Nash?
You are as wonderful as ever :D xxx
11GameCubeGirl1Kai just...he needs all the hugs, and I mean ALL the hugs right now ;0; that or a darn good therapist, geez can his mental state take much more? I thought Lloyd was bad but geez Kai is right behind him now.
Kai wants to be held accountable, I get that...but even though every one else is willing to let it go...he's just gonna find some way of punishing himself for it isn't he? Kai may have gotten over himself, but he's yet to learn to let some things go, I mean...it's not like he killed a human right? Right? D:
And Zane...you just love being the hero and getting yourself shred to pieces don't you? D: Though I wonder how Zane knew Nash would be coming that way...?
Surely now..surely now they can all relax, recover and pull themselves together?
But then..this is your story, you love these characters as much as us, but you do love to put them through the ringer xD but then once they hit rock bottom there ain't no way to go but up!
...unless...you're gonna make them dig further down, you're known for that by now :P
Ahem..anyway, I love that Nash is no longer a threat, but I know their work ain't done yet. Wonder how Cole will take the news of Nash?
You are as wonderful as ever :D xxx
3/30/2020 c119 Minre
I love your story so much XD I wonder how Nash’s death will effect the technicians, and what will the aliens do with everyone so injured
I love your story so much XD I wonder how Nash’s death will effect the technicians, and what will the aliens do with everyone so injured
3/30/2020 c76 Jens.K
Heeeeyyyy I wanted to read that PM you sent me, but it turns out that PM feature is disabled for 24 hours after creating an account. Sheesh.
Chorky the glitter drone XDDD I totally forgot abou it.
Heeeeyyyy I wanted to read that PM you sent me, but it turns out that PM feature is disabled for 24 hours after creating an account. Sheesh.
Chorky the glitter drone XDDD I totally forgot abou it.