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3/25/2020 c118 10StoneByrd
oh, man, HALLELUJAH! I mean, heavy heavy heavy... but Nash is dead and antivenin is a thing. This is gonna be tough for Kai, isn’t it..! Man, poor sod.

Gotta say though, WOW that kid is growing up! He totally got over himself, ahahaha I loved full circle moment there. Good going Kai, ya did good my dude. 3

geeez this is getting heavy... well now that Nash is out of the picture (I mean, technically, the weight of his death is gonna drive Kai up the wall) they have a real chance at this...! So stoked to keep reading!
3/25/2020 c118 Jens
This is incredible.

The snake's finally gone.
And Kai's mind a little more than before. Geez, I'm starting to wonder what will be left of their sanity in the end.

I was just re-reading this whole story, and guess what? I recognised what Kai said as what Jay told him in the mines! (Because I stumbled onto it just a bit ago)

Kai... I don't even know where to start. On top of killing Nash, he had to uh... Rip him apart. That's ...something. And the thing is, Nash would have loved to be in Kai's place, tearing his preys apart. But Kai never wanted to be a murderer. Even though he's going to be claimed a hero.

I would have loved to chat with you and get to know you better, even though I am not depressed (stressed, maybe, but quite happy).
Heck, I might even create an account just for that. XDDD

Thank you for keeping it up! To think that I've been following this story for YEARS... It's become an important thing for me.
3/25/2020 c118 Guest
The status bar gave me a nice chuckle...then I read this chapter. None of them are going to be feeling so good for a while, are they.
I'm... not exactly certain what to say. Though, Kai thinking the sound of the knife going in is admittedly a little disturbing, but then- I don't actually know what it sounds like (and that's probably a good thing).
Well, at least Nash won't be a problem, and we're (almost?! I bet the next couple of chapters are going to be super angsty, aren't they?) at rock bottom, which means things will get better! ...eventually.
~SpiritDragon
3/25/2020 c1 38Fire-of-the-Ocean
I first started reading this several years ago.

It was very good.

I don't remember where I left off.

I'm not going to be able to get back into it, am I.
3/25/2020 c118 11GameCubeGirl1
Oh..oh Kai, can I hug you too? You need it buddy ;0;

But finally..*finally* Nash is no longer a threat, but geez poor Kai, nobody would hold this against him surely. If anything he's probably saved countless lives by finally getting rid of Nash, whether he believes he's the one to blame for all Nash has done or not.

If this is rock bottom then..it has to be nothing but uphill from here right? ...Right? D:

Though these are indeed depressing times right now..and honestly? Even a rock bottom chapter with a warning is still a light in the dark to me, a wonderful distraction from the harsh realities of current daily life.

You never cease to amaze xxx
3/25/2020 c118 21Dragongem17
Poor Kaiiiiii. Dang, I love that guy he's such a softie. Good job, as usual, loving the not updates lol.
3/25/2020 c117 Fiiiyaaah
Wow. It took a week of cramming in reading whenever I had time, but I finally read all 117 chapters (plus all of Backstage with Jay), and I loved every minute of it (well, most of it; admittedly, some parts really freaked me out, but that just goes with the content :3). Let me just say, this is the longest and most complicated plot I've encountered on FFN, and you have written it completely AMAZINGLY. Just curious, how much of the plot did you have decided when you first started posting this?

All the ninja are written so perfectly! Honestly, I think I might be most like Jay, and I share Cole's infinite love of cake (especially chocolate :P), but Kai's my favorite for some reason, probably because of his fierce loyalty and protective streak. Also, he is really good at making pranks backfire XD. The aliens are so precious, and I can't wait to see more of them (also to see how you explain the leveling up)! But first, there's this whole new crisis where they're all dying!? Kai, you'd better blow up that demon snake really fast; your friends need desperate help. Why did Nash not kill him anyway- was it maybe 'cause he wanted to take the time to properly torture him since they used to work together, or some sick, twisted logic of his? Oh, the horror! Nash is so terrifying I have to remind myself that I'm reading words on a page. There is no saving him now (not that there ever was before, but by now even his mind is mostly long gone). Poor Cole is probably the safest out of all the ninja right now, ironically.

The Technicians seem really unimportant all of a sudden, but is CapsLock who I think he is? You only mentioned his name once, when Silica called him Nico in chapter 96, but it's the same as Mindy's boyfriend's name (which I think you also only mentioned once, chapter 16- I went back to check). That would make Mindy's relationship with the ninja even more strained :/ not that I really feel for her after what she did, but still.

This story has given me such a wide range of emotions. I've been smiling until my cheeks hurt, laughing, feeling awkward, crying, disgusted, worried to the point of almost insanity, staring horror-stricken with my mouth hanging open, and so furious I feel like throwing my phone at the wall. And then I restrain myself because then I wouldn't get to see what happens next. :3

There are pros and cons to finding a story after so much is already written. Pros, I can just keep on reading without waiting impatiently for an update, and cons, once I catch up, I always have the bad luck of it ending on the worst (or best?) cliffhanger yet. *Hint, hint, please continue soon* ;D Will you be able to update more often now that corona is shutting everything down, or does that just make your schedule more hectic?

Anyway, this has turned out to be an amazingly incredible and well-written story. Please continue it as much as you can, and I will wait as patiently as I can. I would have reviewed each chapter as I read it instead of a gigantic review at the end, but I figured it might be a bit much to wade through 117 enthusiastic reviews from the same reader ;P. (It would certainly help boost it to 2k reviews, but who am I kidding, it's obviously going to reach that pretty soon anyway, what with how popular this story is! XD) Kudos!
3/16/2020 c117 6Master Jarrus
Question: How do you plan on saving everyone?
3/16/2020 c117 7IamInevitable
I love this story! Poor Lloyd, poor Jay, poor everyone. Nash is a jerk. My favorite parts tho are the chapters in the cave, with the Lloydfish and the rats...
3/15/2020 c117 10Rose Verdict
Okay I'm gonna be real here. If it weren't midnight (and also if there wasn't corona chaos that'd probably get stirred up from midnight screaming) I'd be screaming my head off. just. FATALITY! FATALITY! OH, YOU'RE STILL ALIVE? FATALITY! …all im sayin is we'd better get some mashed Nash, well-done, if you catch my drift. Also antivenin. Lots and lots of antivenin.

im tired but the point is THEY'RE ALL HAVING A BAD TIME, HAVING A BAD TIME ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
3/15/2020 c117 11GameCubeGirl1
Well...this seems like the end for them doesn't it ;0; Cole's already out, Lloyd is definitely out, Nya's out, Zane's out, and now Jay is out...only Kai remains. How is Nash alive through all this? Someone kill that demon-snake already for Fsm's sake! Is Kai going to do what he does in season 11 and just get so angry that he just fires a full blown flamethrower at the face of whatever's in the way? Yeesh, whenever this..well *if* this dies down, they're all gonna need a heck of a long time to recover x.x nd the venom thing affecting both Nya and Jay is rather scary as we know what it can do...but wonder if the aliens will suddenly play a part on helping to cure them? Hmmm...

Glad you're back again! :D You know already how much I love this story!
xxx
3/15/2020 c117 7star's dreams
Okay that was amazing. You got my hands itching to just animate this. Nash is demon that risen from untold depths. And that what it look like from outsider view except it will power and pure animalistic instinct wrap in intelligence.. Wow. I look forward to whatever next nice cliffhanger by the way.
3/15/2020 c117 89Skylark Starflower
I can't remember if this has been answered already or not, but would Nash's venom actually have any affect on Zane at all? I mean, I know the show suggested Venomari venom could make him hallucinate, but that was his old body. I dunno, man. :B

Oh no! Now Zane'll have to go through life with an awesome eye patch! :B (And man, my typing is bad today. I tried to type 'eye' as 'yey', not to mention all my other typos. Wheee... XD)

Man, why does everyone keep killing the robot? :B

Nya, don't shoot Lloyd. Again. XD

I'm sorry, every time Nash's stub leg is mentioned, it reminds me of Actual Cannibal Shia LaBeouf. XD

And then everyone died. The end. :B
3/14/2020 c117 Jens
HOW DID THIS HAPPEN?!

Please Kai. You're our last hope. Nash HAS to lose.
How did you manage to get ALL of them poisoned?! They aren't all gonna die, right?

Wait. Maybe Meep and Mopp has the antidotes? Like, alien germsvenomari poison 0? Maybe they cancel out. They have to play an important role in this, right?

Jay gets always "lucky", somehow. The bulet full of poison didn't explode, the second one exploded mid-air, and the amount of venomari poison he got is surely less than what Nya and Lloyd absorbed.

This is looking absolutely terrible. Nash seems truly immortal.

Thank you for coming back! By the way, amazing fight scenes.
3/14/2020 c117 ProfessorYeti
Oh geez, the ninja have it rough now.

Hopefully (maybe) they'll be alright, or at least recover.
(Not sure about Zane though, hopefully he gets repaired.)

Great chapter too! Can't wait for the next!
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