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6/14 c1 1WhiteLotus21
can't wait lovin it
6/12 c1 Victor
To be honest I really Ike’s the previous ash’s personality. This version of ash is good and all but I kind of wished you continued the last one.
6/8 c1 Crywolfseven
If I can offer a suggestion start a new story here with the edited chapters. I say that because to new fans looking it appears to be a story that only has a single chapter but was out since 2015.
5/29 c1 yhange
I'm all up for this. I really liked the old story, but I'm kinda interested in seeing how it goes this time.
5/28 c1 1RagingSaging
update soonest pleeeaaseeee
5/26 c1 1True sage of six paths
Are...You...FUCKING Kidding me?! Dude! I'm ALL FOR Authors reuploading revised chapters of their fanfics, but not deleting the whole FUCKING thing! People LOVED that damn story and NOW you're reuploading it?! When it takes GOD KNOWS WHEN FIR YOU TO UPLOAD?! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH Y'ALL?! Anyway,just know that you had a good ass story and people ACTUALLY enjoyed it before you gave into peer pressure and fucked it all up.
5/24 c1 deroro68
Glad you’re back, you should come back to the traveler discord server!
5/24 c1 Neo Infinity
Thanks for the great chapter, I didn’t mind ash old cool persona since he wasn’t really pretending to be adult but an experienced trainer, my favorite part is when Dawn accidentally kissed him on national tv cam so I hope you keep that or even make it better.
5/23 c1 Mohamed Salim
I love the remastery, I can already see the growth and maturity in your writing. Also, I don’t know if you’ve read fics like traveller and challenger, but I think it’s pretty cool the way they reference to the pokemon sounds with things like growls and squeals because I think it gets a bit repetitive and dead when it’s “pika pika”. Just a piece of advice it would probably be better if you said the pokemon chirped in acknowledgment. Great chapter nonetheless.
5/23 c1 SalimzShadow
Great read once again, would be great if ash had relationships with others, maybe Cynthia included or a May return. Could be a harem.
5/21 c1 Admirer
Nice story intro. Hope you will be able to keep up motivation and finish the story with fantastic end.
5/22 c1 2Xerzo LotCN
I enjoyed the original im sure ill enjoy a remaster
Id say i wish the original still exist in the another fic but this is just like a remaster not a rewrite so the story is mostly the same lol but its been ages since the original the republish and this so rereading good fics is nice

Though a problem unless you deleted all comments any old comments will cause some older readers to be unable to comment at times thats why rewrite and remasters its better to make them separately from the original but besides the point
5/21 c1 6RYNO IV
looks good. to be honest things happen a little fastslightly unrealistic that some who loves pokemon like ash would straight up give a total stranger one of his right after meeting her. you and I know that dawn is a good person, but he wouldn't. personally, I would have gone a couple chapters in to allow for more character interaction and give ash time to trust her with one of his friends. but its good enough, especially if you're not straight up rewriting your story, it reads a lot cleaner
5/21 c1 4King Draconias
Decent start to the rewrite, I was pretty young when I found it and thought this was one of the best stories ever.

Your AN the other day really made me laugh cause knowing you wrote this when you were a kid makes me understand just why I liked this story so much.

I'm really looking forward to seeing this story continued and rewritten. Keep up the great work.
5/21 c1 Son Kakabrat
Umm I was wondering if you can tell us how often will you update roughly. And are there any other smart sinnoh ash fanfic you can recommend?
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