for One Piece: Monster of the Straw Hat Pirates6/23/2021 c81 DevineQuetzalcoatl
my man chopper became a whole monster and he still in double digits ಠ_ಠ
my man chopper became a whole monster and he still in double digits ಠ_ಠ
6/20/2021 c92 shitabrick
my main problem beforehand was you having moria get his shit kicked in despite him being the final villain of this ark.
like I said beforehand moria isn't my faivrouite villain but you completely skipped his fight for this, and don't get me wrong this was a great fight I just didn't like were it was placed, I more okay with the idea of you deviating from canon now and personally I believe that it deserved an arc of its own instead of changing another one but that's just my opinion, I might not comment for a while because my interest in fanfics are fading and I have to deal with my own shit now, problems at home and etc. things that I have gone into detail about in my earlier posts, this is defiantly not goodbye not even a see you later more like a okay ill catch up with you later, anyway ill be signing off now all the best mate
my main problem beforehand was you having moria get his shit kicked in despite him being the final villain of this ark.
like I said beforehand moria isn't my faivrouite villain but you completely skipped his fight for this, and don't get me wrong this was a great fight I just didn't like were it was placed, I more okay with the idea of you deviating from canon now and personally I believe that it deserved an arc of its own instead of changing another one but that's just my opinion, I might not comment for a while because my interest in fanfics are fading and I have to deal with my own shit now, problems at home and etc. things that I have gone into detail about in my earlier posts, this is defiantly not goodbye not even a see you later more like a okay ill catch up with you later, anyway ill be signing off now all the best mate
6/14/2021 c92 OINIGERUNDAYO
Beautiful fight...
i wish i could post gifs to show my emotions right now lol
Beautiful fight...
i wish i could post gifs to show my emotions right now lol
6/13/2021 c92 KaijuEmperor
Holy Shit this is the most dramatic and intense battle to date and I fucking love it!
Holy Shit this is the most dramatic and intense battle to date and I fucking love it!
6/12/2021 c92 Matt
Nice, though I did notice some spelling errors so you might want to recheck this and fix them.
Nice, though I did notice some spelling errors so you might want to recheck this and fix them.
6/12/2021 c92 
5LoneWolf427
In order to beat Grendolas, Gian had to reach Critical Mass like Godzilla in Godzilla vs Destroyah. But, in that form, Godzilla was on the brink of...*gulp*. I sure hope nothing worse happens
5LoneWolf427In order to beat Grendolas, Gian had to reach Critical Mass like Godzilla in Godzilla vs Destroyah. But, in that form, Godzilla was on the brink of...*gulp*. I sure hope nothing worse happens
6/11/2021 c92 DR5996
If you make more original things different from canon it would be interesting, but please maintain the Savory Archipelago Arc, then the supernova will find all in the Archipelago, the mess of world nobles. The reaction of other supernovas about Gian (maybe in front of some actions from Gian), the reaction of world nobles to Gian etc...
If you make more original things different from canon it would be interesting, but please maintain the Savory Archipelago Arc, then the supernova will find all in the Archipelago, the mess of world nobles. The reaction of other supernovas about Gian (maybe in front of some actions from Gian), the reaction of world nobles to Gian etc...
6/11/2021 c92 4Goku275
ANOTHER OUTSTANDING CHAPTER TO ANOTHER OUTSTANDING STORY! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE keep up the EXCELLENT work. I am DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing this through to the very end! :)
4Goku275ANOTHER OUTSTANDING CHAPTER TO ANOTHER OUTSTANDING STORY! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE keep up the EXCELLENT work. I am DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing this through to the very end! :)
6/7/2021 c84 cl9763
Haha..i think. another rule would be to put a stop to any curiosity boiling inside and actually call the police, and stay outside of crazy looking places.. lol
Haha..i think. another rule would be to put a stop to any curiosity boiling inside and actually call the police, and stay outside of crazy looking places.. lol
5/9/2021 c44 EverChess
Is Gian past has to do with Dressrosa and Doflamingo (from Caesar Clown, Punk Hazard, and the laugh from one of flashback who I think is Doflamingo)?
Is Gian past has to do with Dressrosa and Doflamingo (from Caesar Clown, Punk Hazard, and the laugh from one of flashback who I think is Doflamingo)?
5/1/2021 c91 OINIGERUNDAYO
Hey so to start I want to say that this is just my opinion!
so, don't feel forced to drastically change the plot, AUs can be very messy I would recommend that IF you ever want to change a major plot point you do so ONCE at one specific point Ex saving Ace but once again IF.
Secondly, I am not particularly against replacing Moria but I feel like you should try to keep OC enemies specifically for Gian.
Hey so to start I want to say that this is just my opinion!
so, don't feel forced to drastically change the plot, AUs can be very messy I would recommend that IF you ever want to change a major plot point you do so ONCE at one specific point Ex saving Ace but once again IF.
Secondly, I am not particularly against replacing Moria but I feel like you should try to keep OC enemies specifically for Gian.