for Possession of Jack Frost10/13/2019 c5 Pencil writer
I’m am addicted .no joke I’ve read this at least ...1,2,3..23 times ? Yeah a lot . And with writers block ! Teach me oh ancient of the Jedi! Only complaints would be not enough time in jacks p.o.v .thasit.
Keep writing!
I’m am addicted .no joke I’ve read this at least ...1,2,3..23 times ? Yeah a lot . And with writers block ! Teach me oh ancient of the Jedi! Only complaints would be not enough time in jacks p.o.v .thasit.
Keep writing!
1/26/2019 c11 Guest
Nah...
Pitch should have had his ass handed to him...
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Nah...
Pitch should have had his ass handed to him...
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1/26/2019 c2 Guest
Me:
*starts reading the chapter*
“Well that seems completely out of nowhere... Pitch, you disgusting pedophile...”
*Reads part where Pitch mends Jack’s staff*
“AAAAA!”
*Yells IRL and now has to answer to the questions of people who heard me suddenly scream*
XD
Me:
*starts reading the chapter*
“Well that seems completely out of nowhere... Pitch, you disgusting pedophile...”
*Reads part where Pitch mends Jack’s staff*
“AAAAA!”
*Yells IRL and now has to answer to the questions of people who heard me suddenly scream*
XD
8/31/2018 c11 
20shirosakura911
imagine if Jamie feared Jack and didn't accept his new transformation. Jack ended up regretting... I don't know... anyhow this is a good read
20shirosakura911imagine if Jamie feared Jack and didn't accept his new transformation. Jack ended up regretting... I don't know... anyhow this is a good read
3/23/2018 c2 Guest
I know this was written a while ago. But so far I'm really liking this. I enjoy the ideo of good guys like Jack going evil under control or joining others like Pitch. Good job!
I know this was written a while ago. But so far I'm really liking this. I enjoy the ideo of good guys like Jack going evil under control or joining others like Pitch. Good job!
12/2/2016 c11 A friend
Hey. I used to be Jelsa4Evur, but now am Jacknaire7. Oh my GOSH. This epilogue is SO GOOD. I almost cried. Hey, you said you take requests? Could you do a Jack spankfic? Not a sexual one between Jack and Pitch, but maybe as if Jack had broken a rule Pitch had set and Pitch has to spank him, like a father would spank his son? I wrote a Jack spankfic. Check it out on my profile. Hey, oh, and it's nice to read your work again!
Hey. I used to be Jelsa4Evur, but now am Jacknaire7. Oh my GOSH. This epilogue is SO GOOD. I almost cried. Hey, you said you take requests? Could you do a Jack spankfic? Not a sexual one between Jack and Pitch, but maybe as if Jack had broken a rule Pitch had set and Pitch has to spank him, like a father would spank his son? I wrote a Jack spankfic. Check it out on my profile. Hey, oh, and it's nice to read your work again!
10/28/2016 c11 5A-stranger-in-the-world
Hi !
I'm so sorry I didn't comment on your story earlier (in fact I didn't post anything at the last chapter) but each time I read your story (because I reread it multiple times) I always said that I was going to write something later and I always forgot (
I was so sad that the story was finished and I really wasn't expecting another chapter but I'm so happy! It was soooo good! You need to believe more in yourself!
I especially loved the part when Pitch was acting all innocent like he didn't saw what Jack was talking about )
A great end to a great story...but I'm still sad it is finished.
Have a scary Halloween !
5A-stranger-in-the-worldHi !
I'm so sorry I didn't comment on your story earlier (in fact I didn't post anything at the last chapter) but each time I read your story (because I reread it multiple times) I always said that I was going to write something later and I always forgot (
I was so sad that the story was finished and I really wasn't expecting another chapter but I'm so happy! It was soooo good! You need to believe more in yourself!
I especially loved the part when Pitch was acting all innocent like he didn't saw what Jack was talking about )
A great end to a great story...but I'm still sad it is finished.
Have a scary Halloween !
10/27/2016 c11 15Serami Nefera
I'll try to submit this again. My internet has been a bit dodgy and I want to be sure that your story gets the reviews it is owed. I love the story so much that I hate the epilogue only because it means this story is over. I suppose I can always hope for a sequel. Great job writing Jack's reunion with Jamie and his meeting with the Guardians.
15Serami NeferaI'll try to submit this again. My internet has been a bit dodgy and I want to be sure that your story gets the reviews it is owed. I love the story so much that I hate the epilogue only because it means this story is over. I suppose I can always hope for a sequel. Great job writing Jack's reunion with Jamie and his meeting with the Guardians.
8/10/2016 c10 Littwink
Wow, what a ride! I love how you write; a wonderful combination of detail and dialogue. It was a bit shorter than I expected, but I enjoyed it overall.
Wow, what a ride! I love how you write; a wonderful combination of detail and dialogue. It was a bit shorter than I expected, but I enjoyed it overall.
7/2/2016 c10 Guest
This is the former Jelsa4Evur. I got rid of my account so plz don't reply to this review but I want you to know that I almost cried at this chapter, and i think you're an amazing writer. I will always be a fan of yours and can't wait to see what you do later in life. I've really enjoyed this fic and I want you to know that now I want to develop a written language for the yetis! If you have the chance, check out my YouTube channel, Singled-Out Productions. If you comment on a video, please tell me that it's acrisafu, or I'll just see it as another comment. Thanks for your awesome contribution to this fandom! Jelsa4Evur signing off from PMing you for the final time. Bye acrisafu.
This is the former Jelsa4Evur. I got rid of my account so plz don't reply to this review but I want you to know that I almost cried at this chapter, and i think you're an amazing writer. I will always be a fan of yours and can't wait to see what you do later in life. I've really enjoyed this fic and I want you to know that now I want to develop a written language for the yetis! If you have the chance, check out my YouTube channel, Singled-Out Productions. If you comment on a video, please tell me that it's acrisafu, or I'll just see it as another comment. Thanks for your awesome contribution to this fandom! Jelsa4Evur signing off from PMing you for the final time. Bye acrisafu.
6/3/2016 c10 Serami Nefera
It was a good story. It felt a bit rushed at the end (which may simply be because I didn't want it to end). I like that Pitch won. I didn't expect that (usually the Guardians win). I'm not sure if you have read The Guardians of Childhood book series (which the movie was based on). But you could do stories based on that. Maybe a story concerning parents. Or why was North abandoned in the wilds as a child? I'd like that. I especially love stories on Nightlight (who is actually Jack Frost). But any story would be great!
It was a good story. It felt a bit rushed at the end (which may simply be because I didn't want it to end). I like that Pitch won. I didn't expect that (usually the Guardians win). I'm not sure if you have read The Guardians of Childhood book series (which the movie was based on). But you could do stories based on that. Maybe a story concerning parents. Or why was North abandoned in the wilds as a child? I'd like that. I especially love stories on Nightlight (who is actually Jack Frost). But any story would be great!